A 2023 study by climate scientist Dr. Helena Vasquez identified three interconnected environmental threats facing coastal ecosystems: accelerating gla...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
A 2023 study by climate scientist Dr. Helena Vasquez identified three interconnected environmental threats facing coastal ecosystems: accelerating glacial _____ rising sea surface temperatures, and increased frequency of severe storms.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
melt:
melt,
melt
melt;
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- A 2023 study
- by climate scientist Dr. Helena Vasquez
- identified three interconnected environmental threats
- facing coastal ecosystems:
- accelerating glacial melt(?)
- rising sea surface temperatures, and
- increased frequency of severe storms.
Understanding the Meaning
- Let's start reading from the beginning:
- tells us who conducted the research
- identified three interconnected environmental threats facing coastal ecosystems:
- This is the key part - the study identified THREE threats
- The colon here signals: 'here comes the list of those three threats'
- This is where we have the blank: 'accelerating glacial melt(?).'
- Let's look at the choices:
- The choices give us different punctuation marks: colon, comma, nothing, or semicolon
- To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
- The sentence continues:
- 'accelerating glacial melt(?) rising sea surface temperatures, and increased frequency of severe storms'
- Now I can see the complete picture:
- The sentence promises THREE threats
- Then it lists them:
- accelerating glacial melt
- rising sea surface temperatures
- increased frequency of severe storms
- What do we notice about the structure here?
- This is a standard list of three items
- Items 2 and 3 are connected with ', and'
- This follows the typical list pattern: Item 1, Item 2, and Item 3
- Each item is a noun phrase describing a threat
- So we need a comma after 'melt' to separate the first item in the list from the second item - just like we use commas to separate items in any three-item list.
The correct answer is B (melt,).
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Using Commas to Separate Items in a List
When you list three or more items in a sentence, you use commas to separate them (called items in a series in grammar terms). The standard pattern is:
Pattern: Item 1, Item 2, and Item 3
Example 1 - Simple list:
- The store sells apples, oranges, and bananas.
- Three items: apples / oranges / bananas
- Commas separate each item
Example 2 - List of phrases:
- The candidate promised lower taxes, better schools, and improved healthcare.
- Three items (noun phrases): lower taxes / better schools / improved healthcare
- Commas separate each item
How this applies to our question:
- The sentence announces 'three interconnected environmental threats'
- These three threats are listed:
- accelerating glacial melt
- rising sea surface temperatures
- increased frequency of severe storms
- Commas must separate these items, so we need a comma after 'melt'
melt:
✗ Incorrect
- A colon is used to introduce a list or explanation, not to separate items within a list
- We already have a colon after 'ecosystems' that introduces the entire list of three threats
- Adding another colon here would incorrectly suggest that 'rising sea surface temperatures' is an explanation of 'glacial melt' rather than a separate threat
melt,
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.
melt
✗ Incorrect
- Without any punctuation, the first two items run together as one continuous phrase
- This creates 'accelerating glacial melt rising sea surface temperatures' - confusing and unclear
- Fails to properly separate the three distinct items the sentence promises
melt;
✗ Incorrect
- Semicolons are used to separate independent clauses or complex list items that already contain commas
- These list items are simple noun phrases, not complete thoughts
- A semicolon is too strong a separator for simple list items
- Creates inconsistency since the sentence uses a comma before 'and' between the second and third items