A harpsichord may look just like a piano, but the difference between the two instruments is easy to hear. When...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
A harpsichord may look just like a piano, but the difference between the two instruments is easy to hear. When a harpsichord's keys are pressed, the strings inside the ______ are plucked, not struck.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
Sentence 1:
- A harpsichord may look just like a piano,
- but the difference between the two instruments is easy to hear.
Sentence 2:
- When a harpsichord's keys are pressed,
- the strings inside the instrument [?]
- are plucked,
- not struck.
- are plucked,
- the strings inside the instrument [?]
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start from the beginning to understand what this passage is telling us.
First sentence:
- 'A harpsichord may look just like a piano'
- Sets up that these two instruments are visually similar
- 'but the difference between the two instruments is easy to hear'
- Tells us they sound different - that's the key distinction
Second sentence:
- 'When a harpsichord's keys are pressed'
- This sets up the condition - what happens when you play the harpsichord
- 'the strings inside the instrument'
- This is talking about the strings that are located inside the harpsichord
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- Choice A: instrument:
- Choice B: instrument (no punctuation)
- Choice C: instrument—
- Choice D: instrument,
So we're deciding what punctuation (if any) should come after "instrument."
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
- 'are plucked, not struck'
- This tells us what happens to those strings
- They get plucked (like a guitar string)
- NOT struck (which is what happens in a piano)
Now let's understand the complete structure:
- 'the strings inside the instrument'
- This is the subject - the thing that the sentence is about
- 'the strings' is the core subject
- 'inside the instrument' describes which strings we're talking about
- 'are plucked'
- This is the verb - the action happening to those strings
- This tells us what happens to the strings
What do we notice about the structure here?
The subject "the strings inside the instrument" needs to connect directly to its verb "are plucked."
This is the core structure of the sentence:
- Subject → Verb
- The strings → are plucked
We cannot put any punctuation between a subject and its verb. They need to flow together without interruption.
So we need Choice B - no punctuation after "instrument."
Grammar Concept Applied
Keeping Subject and Verb Together (No Punctuation Between Them)
One of the most fundamental rules in English sentence structure is that the subject (who or what is performing an action) must connect directly to its verb (the action) without any punctuation separating them. This is sometimes called avoiding "subject-verb separation" in grammar terms.
The core of every sentence is:
- Subject (who/what) → Verb (action/state)
These must stay connected without punctuation breaking them apart.
Example 1:
- INCORRECT: The students in the classroom, are studying.
- CORRECT: The students in the classroom are studying.
- Subject: "The students in the classroom"
- Verb: "are studying"
- No punctuation between them
Example 2:
- INCORRECT: The report that we submitted last week: received high praise.
- CORRECT: The report that we submitted last week received high praise.
- Subject: "The report that we submitted last week"
- Verb: "received"
- No punctuation between them
In this question:
- Subject: "the strings inside the instrument"
- Verb: "are plucked"
- These must connect directly: "the strings inside the instrument are plucked"
- No punctuation should come between "instrument" and "are"
This rule applies no matter how long or complex the subject is. Even if the subject contains multiple phrases or clauses, it still needs to flow directly to its verb without punctuation interruption.
✗ Incorrect
- Places a colon between the subject "the strings inside the instrument" and its verb "are plucked"
- This breaks the essential subject-verb connection that forms the core of the sentence
- A colon would incorrectly suggest that what follows is an explanation or list, but "are plucked" is the main verb of the sentence, not explanatory content
Correct as explained in the solution above.
✗ Incorrect
- Places a dash between the subject "the strings inside the instrument" and its verb "are plucked"
- This separates the subject from its verb, which disrupts the fundamental structure of the sentence
- A dash would incorrectly suggest a break or shift in thought where none should exist
✗ Incorrect
- Places a comma between the subject "the strings inside the instrument" and its verb "are plucked"
- This is one of the most common punctuation errors - separating a subject from its verb
- The comma breaks the natural flow from subject to verb that the sentence needs