A standard Argo float, a type of autonomous robot, measures temperature and salinity in the upper regions of ice-free oceans....
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
A standard Argo float, a type of autonomous robot, measures temperature and salinity in the upper regions of ice-free oceans. More advanced floats can measure a wider range of ________ and monitor seasonal ice zones.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
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variables travel to greater depths,
variables, travel to greater depths;
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- A standard Argo float,
- a type of autonomous robot,
- measures temperature and salinity
- in the upper regions of ice-free oceans.
- More advanced floats
- can measure a wider range of variables (?) travel to greater depths (?) and monitor seasonal ice zones.
Understanding the Meaning
The first sentence gives us context:
- 'A standard Argo float, a type of autonomous robot'
- tells us what an Argo float is – it's a robot
- 'measures temperature and salinity in the upper regions of ice-free oceans'
- tells us what standard floats do – they measure things in the upper parts of oceans
Now the second sentence contrasts this with more advanced floats:
- 'More advanced floats can measure a wider range of variables...'
- So these fancier floats can measure more types of things
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- The punctuation varies around "travel to greater depths"
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The sentence continues: '...and monitor seasonal ice zones.'
Now let's understand what this complete sentence is telling us about what more advanced floats can do:
- 'can measure a wider range of variables'
- First action – they measure more types of things
- 'travel to greater depths'
- Second action – they go deeper in the ocean
- 'and monitor seasonal ice zones'
- Third action – they can work in areas with seasonal ice
What do we notice about the structure here?
- We have three parallel actions that all share the helping verb "can":
- can measure
- can travel
- and can monitor
- These are three items in a series – three things the advanced floats can do
- When we have a series of three or more items, we separate them with commas:
- First item, second item, and third item
So we need: variables, travel to greater depths,
The correct answer is Choice B.
Grammar Concept Applied
Using Commas to Separate Items in a Series with Shared Helper Verbs
When you have three or more parallel actions that share a helping verb (like "can," "will," "should," etc.), you need to separate them with commas, even though the helping verb isn't repeated:
Pattern:
- Subject + helping verb + action 1, action 2, and action 3
Example 1:
- The new software can analyze data, generate reports, and send alerts.
- can analyze (action 1)
- [can] generate (action 2)
- and [can] send (action 3)
Example 2:
- Students should review the material, complete the practice problems, and prepare questions for class.
- should review (action 1)
- [should] complete (action 2)
- and [should] prepare (action 3)
In our question:
- More advanced floats can measure a wider range of variables, travel to greater depths, and monitor seasonal ice zones.
- can measure (action 1)
- [can] travel (action 2)
- and [can] monitor (action 3)
The commas clarify that these are three separate, parallel actions that the floats can perform.
variables: travel to greater depths
Choice A
✗ Incorrect
- A colon is used to introduce an explanation or elaboration of what came before
- But "travel to greater depths" isn't explaining what variables are
- It's describing a separate action the floats can perform
- This creates an incorrect logical relationship
variables, travel to greater depths,
Choice B
✓ Correct
- Correct as explained in the solution above.
variables travel to greater depths,
Choice C
✗ Incorrect
- Without a comma before "travel," it looks like "variables travel"
- But variables don't travel – the floats do
- The subject is "floats," not "variables"
- This creates confusion about what's doing the traveling
variables, travel to greater depths;
Choice D
✗ Incorrect
- The semicolon after "depths" is too strong a separator
- Semicolons are used between independent clauses or in very complex lists
- But "and monitor seasonal ice zones" is part of the same series of actions
- The semicolon incorrectly breaks apart the parallel structure