About 70,000 meteorites have been found on Earth. Although most meteorites are fragments of _______ hundred have been identified as...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
About 70,000 meteorites have been found on Earth. Although most meteorites are fragments of _______ hundred have been identified as being from the Moon or Mars.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
asteroids. Several
asteroids, several
asteroids; several
asteroids: several
Sentence Structure
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
- About 70,000 meteorites have been found on Earth.
- Although most meteorites are fragments of asteroids[?]
- several hundred have been identified
- as being from the Moon or Mars.
- several hundred have been identified
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start from the beginning:
'About 70,000 meteorites have been found on Earth.'
- This opening sentence tells us the general fact - we've found a lot of meteorites (space rocks that have landed on Earth).
Now the second sentence begins:
'Although most meteorites are fragments of asteroids...'
- This starts with 'Although' - which signals we're setting up a contrast
- It's telling us what's true for MOST meteorites (they come from asteroids)
- But 'although' tells us there's a 'but' coming - something different is about to be mentioned
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- A: period (making two separate sentences)
- B: comma
- C: semicolon
- D: colon
To see what punctuation works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
'several hundred have been identified as being from the Moon or Mars'
- This is the contrasting information
- While MOST meteorites are from asteroids, SOME (several hundred) are actually from the Moon or Mars
- This part has its own subject ('several hundred') and verb ('have been identified')
What do we notice about the structure here?
- The first part - 'Although most meteorites are fragments of asteroids' - is a dependent clause
- It starts with 'although' which makes it incomplete on its own
- It can't stand alone as a sentence - it needs to connect to a complete thought
- The second part - 'several hundred have been identified as being from the Moon or Mars' - is an independent clause
- This is the main, complete thought of the sentence
- It could stand alone as a sentence
- When a dependent clause starting with a word like 'although' comes BEFORE an independent clause, we use a comma to separate them
So we need Choice B: comma - to properly connect the dependent clause to the independent clause that completes the sentence.
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Using Commas After Introductory Dependent Clauses
When you start a sentence with a word like "although," "because," "while," "if," or "when," you create a dependent clause (called a subordinate clause in grammar terms) that cannot stand alone. This introductory dependent clause must be followed by a comma before the independent clause that completes the sentence:
Pattern: Dependent Clause + COMMA + Independent Clause
Example 1:
- Although the weather was terrible, we decided to go hiking.
- Dependent clause: "Although the weather was terrible"
- Independent clause: "we decided to go hiking"
- Comma separates them
Example 2:
- Because students studied hard, the class average improved significantly.
- Dependent clause: "Because students studied hard"
- Independent clause: "the class average improved significantly"
- Comma separates them
In our question:
- Although most meteorites are fragments of asteroids, several hundred have been identified as being from the Moon or Mars.
- Dependent clause: "Although most meteorites are fragments of asteroids"
- Independent clause: "several hundred have been identified as being from the Moon or Mars"
- Comma properly separates them
The comma signals to the reader: "The introductory context is complete; now here comes the main point."
asteroids. Several
✗ Incorrect
- This would create two separate sentences
- Problem: "Although most meteorites are fragments of asteroids." would be a sentence fragment
- A clause starting with "although" is dependent - it cannot stand alone as a complete sentence
- This violates the rule that every sentence must express a complete thought
asteroids, several
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.
asteroids; several
✗ Incorrect
- Semicolons are used to connect two independent clauses (complete thoughts that could each be sentences)
- Problem: The first part is NOT an independent clause - it's dependent because of "although"
- You cannot use a semicolon after a dependent clause
- This violates semicolon usage rules
asteroids: several
✗ Incorrect
- Colons are used to introduce lists, explanations, or elaborations of what came before
- Problem: What follows isn't explaining asteroids - it's providing CONTRASTING information (meteorites from the Moon/Mars, not asteroids)
- Also, the dependent clause structure doesn't work with a colon
- This violates the logical relationship that colons require