According to the University of Hawaiʻi at Mānoa, aloha ʻāina is 'a recognition, commitment, and practice sustaining the ea -or...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
According to the University of Hawaiʻi at Mānoa, aloha ʻāina is 'a recognition, commitment, and practice sustaining the ea -or life breath' between the Hawaiian people and their natural environments. The concept has been proudly embodied _______ Native Hawaiians for generations, contributing to the lush flora and renowned beauty of the islands.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
by;
by:
by,
by
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- According to the University of Hawaiʻi at Mānoa,
- aloha ʻāina is 'a recognition, commitment, and practice
- sustaining the ea —or life breath'
- between the Hawaiian people and their natural environments.
- sustaining the ea —or life breath'
- aloha ʻāina is 'a recognition, commitment, and practice
- The concept has been proudly embodied by(?) Native Hawaiians for generations,
- contributing to the lush flora and renowned beauty of the islands.
Understanding the Meaning
The first sentence gives us context:
- According to the University of Hawaiʻi at Mānoa,
- This is the source of the definition
- aloha ʻāina is 'a recognition, commitment, and practice sustaining the ea —or life breath'
- Aloha ʻāina is defined as a special relationship
- It involves recognition, commitment, and practice
- It sustains the "ea" (life breath)
- between the Hawaiian people and their natural environments
- This relationship exists between people and nature
Now the second sentence tells us about how this concept has been lived:
- The concept has been proudly embodied by(?) Native Hawaiians for generations
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- We need to decide what punctuation (if any) goes after "by"
- The choices give us: semicolon, colon, comma, or no punctuation
To see what works here, let's understand the complete structure:
- "The concept has been proudly embodied by Native Hawaiians for generations"
- This is telling us WHO has embodied the concept
- "by Native Hawaiians" is showing the agent - the people doing the embodying
What do we notice about the structure here?
- "by" is a preposition
- It's connecting the action (embodied) to the people doing it (Native Hawaiians)
- "Native Hawaiians" is the object that follows the preposition
- Together "by Native Hawaiians" forms a single unit - a prepositional phrase
- A preposition and its object should flow together naturally
- They're like partners that shouldn't be separated
- There's no natural pause between them
So we need no punctuation - just "by Native Hawaiians" flowing together as one phrase.
The correct answer is D.
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Prepositions and Their Objects: When NOT to Use Punctuation
When a preposition (like "by," "for," "with," "to," "from") is followed by its object (the noun or noun phrase it connects to), they form a single unit called a prepositional phrase. This unit should flow together without any punctuation interrupting it:
Pattern: Preposition + Object = No punctuation between them
- Example 1: The book was written by Shakespeare
- NOT: by, Shakespeare or by: Shakespeare
- "by Shakespeare" is one prepositional phrase
- Example 2: She walked to the store
- NOT: to, the store or to: the store
- "to the store" is one prepositional phrase
- Example 3: The letter came from my cousin
- NOT: from, my cousin or from: my cousin
- "from my cousin" is one prepositional phrase
In our question:
- "embodied by Native Hawaiians" follows this exact pattern
- "by" (preposition) + "Native Hawaiians" (object) = one unit
- No punctuation should interrupt this natural flow
by;
✗ Incorrect
- A semicolon is used to separate two complete thoughts (independent clauses)
- "Native Hawaiians for generations" is not a complete thought that could stand alone
- This creates an incorrect separation
by:
✗ Incorrect
- A colon is used to introduce a list, explanation, or elaboration
- You don't put a colon immediately after a preposition before its object
- This disrupts the natural flow of the prepositional phrase
by,
✗ Incorrect
- A comma here would split up the prepositional phrase
- "by" and "Native Hawaiians" work together as a unit and shouldn't be separated
- This creates an unnatural and grammatically incorrect pause
by
✓ Correct
- Correct as explained in the solution above.