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American abstract artist Richard ________ his installations to make passersby keenly aware of how one's movements are affected by the physical features of one's environment, assembles large-scale steel plates into sculptures that dominate the outdoor spaces they occupy.

Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?

A

Serra is intending

B

Serra, intends

C

Serra, intending

D

Serra intends

Solution

Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!

Sentence Structure

  • American abstract artist Richard Serra [?]
  • his installations to make passersby
    • keenly aware of how one's
    • movements are affected
    • by the physical features
    • of one's environment,
  • assembles large-scale steel plates into sculptures
    • that dominate the outdoor spaces
    • they occupy.

Understanding the Meaning

This passage is describing an American abstract artist named Richard Serra.

This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:

  • A: "is intending" (no comma before)
  • B: "intends" (with comma before)
  • C: "intending" (with comma before)
  • D: "intends" (no comma before)

So we're deciding on the verb form and whether there's a comma after "Serra."

To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!

The sentence continues:

  • "his installations to make passersby keenly aware of how one's movements are affected by the physical features of one's environment"
    • This is talking about Serra's purpose or intention - he wants his installations to make people really notice how the physical space around them affects how they move
  • "assembles large-scale steel plates into sculptures that dominate the outdoor spaces they occupy"
    • This is the concrete action - what Serra actually does
    • He puts together big steel plates to create sculptures
    • These sculptures take over/dominate the outdoor spaces where they're placed

Now let's understand what this is telling us about the sentence structure:

  • "assembles" is doing the work of the main action verb
    • This is what the sentence is fundamentally about: Serra assembles steel plates into sculptures
  • The part about "his installations to make passersby keenly aware..."
    • This is giving us background information about Serra's purpose
    • It's describing WHY he does this - his artistic intention
    • This needs to be a descriptive phrase, not the main verb

What do we notice about the structure here?

  • We need a verb form that works as a descriptor (providing background about his intention)
    • while "assembles" serves as the main verb
  • The -ing form "intending" does exactly this
    • It describes Serra's purpose
    • It's a modifying phrase that needs to be set off by commas
  • The structure is: Subject + descriptive phrase about intention + main verb
    • Richard Serra, intending his installations to..., assembles steel plates...

So we need Choice C: Serra, intending

This creates: "Richard Serra, intending his installations to make passersby keenly aware..., assembles large-scale steel plates into sculptures..."

GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED

Using Participial Phrases to Add Descriptive Information

When you want to provide background or additional information about a subject while still keeping focus on a main action, you can use a participial phrase (an -ing verb form used as a descriptor, called a present participle in grammar terms). When this phrase comes between the subject and main verb, it must be set off by commas:

Pattern:

  • Subject, participial phrase providing context, main verb

Example 1:

  • Without participial phrase: "The chef prepared an elaborate meal."
  • With participial phrase: "The chef, wanting to impress the critics, prepared an elaborate meal."
  • "The chef" = subject
  • "wanting to impress the critics" = participial phrase (background on motivation)
  • "prepared" = main verb (primary action)

Example 2:

  • "The students, hoping to finish early, worked efficiently on their projects."
  • "hoping to finish early" = participial phrase set off by commas
  • "worked" = main verb

In our question:

  • "Richard Serra, intending his installations to make passersby keenly aware..., assembles large-scale steel plates..."
  • "intending..." = participial phrase (describes his artistic purpose)
  • "assembles" = main verb (the primary action)
  • Commas properly set off the descriptive phrase from the main sentence structure
Answer Choices Explained
A

Serra is intending

Serra is intending
✗ Incorrect

  • This would make "is intending" function as a main verb
  • But then "assembles" later in the sentence would also be trying to be a main verb
  • You'd have: "Serra is intending his installations... assembles large-scale steel plates..."
  • This creates a sentence with two disconnected main verbs - a run-on error
B

Serra, intends

Serra, intends
✗ Incorrect

  • This tries to make "intends" the main verb
  • But "intends his installations to make..." doesn't work logically or grammatically
  • Plus "assembles" would be left hanging without proper connection to the sentence
  • The meaning breaks down completely
C

Serra, intending

✓ Correct

Correct as explained in the solution above.

D

Serra intends

Serra intends
✗ Incorrect

  • Same fundamental problem as Choice B
  • "intends his installations to make..." is awkward and doesn't convey the intended meaning
  • "assembles" is left without proper integration into the sentence structure
  • Missing the comma also fails to set off what should be a descriptive phrase
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