The museum's latest exhibition explores ancient pottery techniques from the Mediterranean _____ the cultural exchange between Greek and Roman civiliza...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
The museum's latest exhibition explores ancient pottery techniques from the Mediterranean _____ the cultural exchange between Greek and Roman civilizations during the Classical period.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
region. Highlighting
region and highlighting
region highlighting
region, highlighting
Sentence Structure
- The museum's latest exhibition
- explores ancient pottery techniques
- from the Mediterranean [?]
- highlighting the cultural exchange
- between Greek and Roman civilizations
- during the Classical period.
- explores ancient pottery techniques
- Where [?] =
- A: . Highlighting
- B: and highlighting
- C: (space) highlighting
- D: , highlighting
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start reading from the beginning:
The museum's latest exhibition explores ancient pottery techniques from the Mediterranean.
So the exhibition is about:
- Ancient pottery techniques
- Specifically from the Mediterranean region
This is where we have the blank.
Let's look at the choices:
- A gives us a period and starts a new sentence
- B gives us "and highlighting"
- C gives us no punctuation
- D gives us a comma
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The sentence continues: "highlighting the cultural exchange between Greek and Roman civilizations during the Classical period."
Now let's understand what this part is doing:
- "highlighting the cultural exchange"
- This is telling us something MORE about what the exhibition does
- It's adding detail about the exhibition's focus
- The full picture:
- The exhibition explores pottery techniques (main focus)
- AND it highlights cultural exchange between civilizations (additional detail about what the exhibition accomplishes)
What do we notice about the structure here?
- We have two verb forms:
- "explores" – this is the complete main verb, the primary action
- "highlighting" – this is an -ing verb form
- The relationship between them:
- "highlighting" is providing ADDITIONAL descriptive information about what the exhibition does
- It's not a separate, equal action
- It's more like saying "the exhibition explores... and in doing so, highlights"
- This creates a pattern:
- Main clause (complete thought): "The museum's latest exhibition explores ancient pottery techniques from the Mediterranean"
- Descriptive phrase with -ing verb: "highlighting the cultural exchange between Greek and Roman civilizations during the Classical period"
When you have a descriptive phrase starting with an -ing verb that comes after a main clause and adds information about the action, you need a comma to separate them.
So we need: region, highlighting (Choice D)
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Using Commas with Descriptive Phrases (Participial Phrases)
When you have a phrase built around an -ing verb form (called a participial phrase in grammar terms) that comes after a main clause and provides additional descriptive information, you need to set it off with a comma:
Pattern:
- Main clause (complete thought with subject and complete verb), comma, -ing phrase (additional descriptive information)
Example 1:
- The scientists discovered a new species, confirming their hypothesis about biodiversity
- Main clause: "The scientists discovered a new species"
- Descriptive -ing phrase: "confirming their hypothesis about biodiversity"
Example 2:
- The company announced record profits, surprising industry analysts
- Main clause: "The company announced record profits"
- Descriptive -ing phrase: "surprising industry analysts"
In our question:
- Main clause: "The museum's latest exhibition explores ancient pottery techniques from the Mediterranean"
- Descriptive -ing phrase: "highlighting the cultural exchange between Greek and Roman civilizations during the Classical period"
- Correct punctuation: comma between them
Why the comma matters:
The -ing phrase is doing descriptive work – it's adding information about the action in the main clause. It's not serving as the main verb of its own independent sentence, so it can't be separated with a period. It's not a coordinated equal action, so "and" doesn't work. The comma signals that this phrase is supplementary information describing the main action.
region. Highlighting
✗ Incorrect
- Creates two separate sentences with the period
- But "Highlighting the cultural exchange between Greek and Roman civilizations during the Classical period" cannot stand alone as a sentence
- It's a fragment – it has only an -ing verb form ("highlighting"), not a complete main verb
- A sentence needs a complete verb form; an -ing form by itself cannot be the main verb of a sentence
region and highlighting
✗ Incorrect
- Uses "and" to connect "explores" with "highlighting"
- This would make them parallel, coordinated actions of equal importance
- But you can't coordinate a complete verb form ("explores") with an -ing verb form ("highlighting") this way
- For coordination, you'd need both to be complete verbs: "explores... and highlights"
- This creates a grammatical mismatch
region highlighting
✗ Incorrect
- Provides no punctuation at all
- Runs the main clause directly into the descriptive phrase
- Makes the structure unclear and difficult to read
- When a descriptive phrase with an -ing verb follows the main clause, it needs comma separation
region, highlighting
✓ Correct
- Correct as explained in the solution above.