Archaeologists have estimated that the pre-Columbian Native American city of Cahokia, located across the Mississippi River from modern-day St. Louis,...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
Archaeologists have estimated that the pre-Columbian Native American city of Cahokia, located across the Mississippi River from modern-day St. Louis, Missouri, had as many as 20,000 inhabitants in the year 1150 _______ it one of the largest cities in North America at the time.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
CE making
CE. Making
CE, making
CE; making
Sentence Structure
- Archaeologists have estimated
- that the pre-Columbian Native American city of Cahokia,
- located across the Mississippi River
- from modern-day St. Louis, Missouri,
- located across the Mississippi River
- had as many as 20,000 inhabitants in the year 1150 CE (?) making
- it one of the largest cities
- in North America
- at the time.
- it one of the largest cities
- that the pre-Columbian Native American city of Cahokia,
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start reading from the beginning to understand what this sentence is telling us:
Archaeologists have estimated that the pre-Columbian Native American city of Cahokia had as many as 20,000 inhabitants in the year 1150 CE.
So we're learning about:
- Cahokia – a Native American city that existed before Columbus arrived
- Located across the Mississippi River from modern-day St. Louis
- What archaeologists discovered: this city had about 20,000 people living in it in 1150 CE
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- A. CE making (no punctuation)
- B. CE. Making (period, capital M)
- C. CE, making (comma)
- D. CE; making (semicolon)
To see what punctuation works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The sentence continues: "making it one of the largest cities in North America at the time."
Now let's understand what this part is telling us:
- "Making it one of the largest cities in North America at the time"
- This is explaining what that population of 20,000 meant
- It's telling us the significance – that this population size made Cahokia one of the largest cities around
What do we notice about the structure here?
- We have a complete thought first:
- "Archaeologists have estimated that... Cahokia had as many as 20,000 inhabitants in 1150 CE"
- This could stand alone as a sentence – it expresses a complete idea
- Then we have additional descriptive information:
- "making it one of the largest cities in North America at the time"
- This part CANNOT stand alone – it's describing the result or consequence of what we just learned
- It's adding extra information about what that population figure meant
- This is a pattern where we have: complete statement + descriptive phrase that adds related information
When we have a complete thought followed by a descriptive phrase like this (starting with an "-ing" word that describes a result or adds information), we use a comma to connect them.
The correct answer is C: CE, making
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Using Commas with Descriptive "-ing" Phrases
When you have a complete thought followed by a phrase that starts with an "-ing" verb form (called a participial phrase in grammar terms) that adds descriptive information, consequence, or result, use a comma to connect them:
Pattern:
- Complete statement, + descriptive "-ing" phrase
Example 1:
- The storm knocked out power to 50,000 homes, leaving residents without electricity for three days.
- "The storm knocked out power to 50,000 homes" = complete thought
- "leaving residents without electricity for three days" = descriptive phrase showing the result
Example 2:
- Scientists discovered a new species of frog in the Amazon, bringing the total number of known species to over 7,000.
- First part = complete statement
- "bringing the total..." = phrase describing the consequence of the discovery
In our question:
- "Archaeologists have estimated that... Cahokia had as many as 20,000 inhabitants in 1150 CE" = complete thought
- "making it one of the largest cities in North America at the time" = descriptive phrase showing what that population meant
- The comma correctly connects these two parts
CE making
✗ Incorrect
- Without punctuation, the sentence runs together awkwardly
- It's unclear where one idea ends and the related description begins
- The lack of pause makes it difficult to parse the relationship between "had 20,000 inhabitants" and the consequence that follows
CE. Making
✗ Incorrect
- A period would split this into two separate sentences
- But "Making it one of the largest cities in North America at the time" cannot stand alone as a complete sentence
- It's a fragment that depends on the information before it – we need to know what is "making it" one of the largest cities
- The period incorrectly separates information that needs to stay connected
CE, making
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.
CE; making
✗ Incorrect
- A semicolon is used to connect two complete thoughts that could each stand alone
- "Making it one of the largest cities..." is NOT a complete thought – it's a descriptive phrase
- Semicolons can't be used to attach phrases that depend on the preceding information