Architectural priorities have evolved considerably over the past century. The Empire State Building in New York exemplifies the early twentieth-centur...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
Architectural priorities have evolved considerably over the past century. The Empire State Building in New York exemplifies the early twentieth-century emphasis on vertical _____ the Bosco Verticale in Milan represents contemporary architecture's focus on environmental sustainability and urban greenery.
Which choice completes the text with the most logical and precise word or phrase?
height: whereas
height, whereas
height; whereas
height. Whereas
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- Architectural priorities
- have evolved considerably
- over the past century.
- have evolved considerably
- The Empire State Building in New York
- exemplifies the early twentieth-century emphasis
- on vertical height [?] whereas
- exemplifies the early twentieth-century emphasis
- the Bosco Verticale in Milan
- represents contemporary architecture's focus
- on environmental sustainability and urban greenery.
- represents contemporary architecture's focus
Understanding the Meaning
The passage starts with context:
- 'Architectural priorities have evolved considerably over the past century'
- This tells us that what architects care about has changed significantly over the last 100 years.
Then we get our first example:
- 'The Empire State Building in New York exemplifies the early twentieth-century emphasis on vertical height'
- The Empire State Building is being used as an example
- It represents what early 1900s architects cared about: building tall (vertical height)
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- A. height: whereas
- B. height, whereas
- C. height; whereas
- D. height. Whereas
We're deciding what punctuation to use before 'whereas' and whether to capitalize it.
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying:
- 'the Bosco Verticale in Milan represents contemporary architecture's focus on environmental sustainability and urban greenery'
- The Bosco Verticale is another building, this one in Milan
- It represents what modern architects care about: environmental sustainability and bringing nature into cities (urban greenery)
So the complete picture is:
- We have two buildings being contrasted:
- Empire State Building = example of old priority (height)
- Bosco Verticale = example of new priority (sustainability/greenery)
What do we notice about the structure here?
- We have two complete thoughts that could stand alone as sentences:
- 'The Empire State Building...exemplifies...vertical height' (complete)
- 'the Bosco Verticale...represents...environmental sustainability' (complete)
- The word 'whereas' is connecting these two thoughts to show they contrast:
- One building represents one priority
- whereas (in contrast) the other building represents a different priority
- When 'whereas' connects two complete thoughts like this to show contrast, it should be preceded by a comma:
- This creates the pattern: main statement, whereas contrasting statement
So we need B (height, whereas) - a comma before 'whereas' to properly connect these two contrasting ideas.
Grammar Concept Applied
Using Commas with Contrasting Conjunctions
When you want to show a contrast between two complete thoughts using 'whereas' (called a subordinating conjunction in grammar terms), you connect them with a comma:
Pattern: Main statement, whereas contrasting statement
Example 1:
- Without contrast: 'The movie was popular. It received poor reviews.'
- With 'whereas' showing contrast: 'The movie was popular, whereas it received poor reviews.'
Example 2:
- 'Many students prefer studying in groups, whereas others work better alone.'
- First complete thought: Many students prefer studying in groups
- Comma + whereas
- Contrasting complete thought: others work better alone
In our question:
- 'The Empire State Building...exemplifies...vertical height, whereas the Bosco Verticale...represents...environmental sustainability'
- First statement about one building's priority
- Comma + whereas
- Contrasting statement about a different building's priority
The comma before 'whereas' signals that a contrast is coming and keeps the related ideas connected in one sentence.
height: whereas
✗ Incorrect
- A colon is used to introduce explanations, elaborations, or lists
- The second part doesn't explain or elaborate on 'vertical height'
- Instead, it contrasts with it by presenting a different building with a different priority
- This violates how colons should be used
height, whereas
✓ Correct
- Correct as explained in the solution above.
height; whereas
✗ Incorrect
- While semicolons can connect two independent clauses, they typically do so without a conjunction
- The pattern 'semicolon + whereas' is non-standard and awkward
- When using 'whereas' to show contrast, it should follow a comma, not a semicolon
height. Whereas
✗ Incorrect
- This creates a new sentence starting with 'Whereas'
- 'Whereas' is a conjunction meant to connect contrasting ideas within a single sentence
- Starting a sentence with 'Whereas' is awkward and non-standard in formal writing
- These contrasting ideas should be linked together in one sentence to show their relationship clearly