As the fourteenth US librarian of Congress, Carla Hayden has many responsibilities. These include overseeing the Library of Congress's collections,...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
As the fourteenth US librarian of Congress, Carla Hayden has many responsibilities. These include overseeing the Library of Congress's collections, which boast more than 162 million ______ the US Copyright Office, which registers copyright claims and advises Congress on copyright law; and appointing the US poet laureate.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
items managing
items, managing
items; managing
items. Managing
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- As the fourteenth US librarian of Congress,
- Carla Hayden
- has many responsibilities.
- Carla Hayden
- These include
- overseeing the Library of Congress's collections,
- which boast more than 162 million items [?] managing
- the US Copyright Office,
- which registers copyright claims
- and advises Congress on copyright law;
- the US Copyright Office,
- which boast more than 162 million items [?] managing
- and appointing the US poet laureate.
- overseeing the Library of Congress's collections,
Understanding the Meaning
The first sentence introduces us to Carla Hayden:
- She's the fourteenth US librarian of Congress
- And she has many responsibilities
Now the second sentence tells us what those responsibilities include.
This is where we have the blank - right after '162 million items' and before 'managing.' Let's look at the choices:
- Choice A: items managing (no punctuation)
- Choice B: items, managing (comma)
- Choice C: items; managing (semicolon)
- Choice D: items. Managing (period)
To see what works here, let's read the complete sentence and understand what it's saying!
The sentence after 'These include' gives us a list of responsibilities:
- First: 'overseeing the Library of Congress's collections, which boast more than 162 million items'
- Then: 'managing the US Copyright Office, which registers copyright claims and advises Congress on copyright law'
- And finally: 'appointing the US poet laureate'
Notice there's already a semicolon in the sentence - right before 'and appointing.'
Now let's understand what this structure is telling us:
- 'overseeing the Library of Congress's collections, which boast more than 162 million items'
- This is the first item in the list
- It contains its own internal comma (before 'which')
- 'managing the US Copyright Office, which registers copyright claims and advises Congress on copyright law'
- This is the second item in the list
- It also contains its own internal comma (before 'which')
- 'appointing the US poet laureate'
- This is the third item in the list
What do we notice about the structure here?
- This is a three-item list
- The first two items each contain commas inside them
- When list items already have commas within them, you need something stronger than a comma to separate the main items
- That's why there's a semicolon before 'and appointing' - it clearly separates the third item from the second
So we need: a semicolon after 'items' to separate the first list item from the second list item.
The correct answer is C: items; managing
This creates a properly punctuated complex list where semicolons separate the main items.
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Using Semicolons in Complex Lists
When you're listing items and those items are simple, you use commas to separate them:
- Simple list: She speaks French, German, and Italian.
But when the individual list items themselves contain commas (internal punctuation), you need to use semicolons to separate the main items. This is sometimes called a 'complex series' or 'super comma' situation - the semicolons act as stronger separators so readers can tell which commas are inside items and which would be separating items.
Pattern:
- Item 1, which has internal punctuation; Item 2, which also has internal punctuation; and Item 3
Example:
- Without internal commas: The conference will be held in Boston, Chicago, and Denver.
- With internal commas: The conference will be held in Boston, Massachusetts; Chicago, Illinois; and Denver, Colorado.
In our question:
- These include [Item 1, with internal comma]; [Item 2, with internal comma]; and [Item 3]
- These include overseeing the Library of Congress's collections, which boast more than 162 million items; managing the US Copyright Office, which registers copyright claims and advises Congress on copyright law; and appointing the US poet laureate.
The semicolons make it crystal clear that there are three distinct responsibilities being listed, not six or seven items separated by all those commas.
items managing
✗ Incorrect
- No punctuation creates a confusing run-on
- It makes it seem like 'items managing the US Copyright Office' - as if the items themselves are managing something
- Doesn't provide the necessary separation between list items
items, managing
✗ Incorrect
- A comma doesn't provide enough separation
- Since we already have commas inside each list item (before the 'which' clauses), using commas to also separate the main items creates confusion
- It becomes unclear where one responsibility ends and another begins
items; managing
✓ Correct
- Correct as explained in the solution above.
items. Managing
✗ Incorrect
- A period would create a sentence fragment
- 'Managing the US Copyright Office, which registers copyright claims and advises Congress on copyright law; and appointing the US poet laureate' cannot stand alone
- It has no main subject and verb - just gerund phrases (verb forms acting as nouns)