At 1,377 meters, the Tsing Ma Bridge in China is one of the longest suspension bridges in the _______ the...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
At 1,377 meters, the Tsing Ma Bridge in China is one of the longest suspension bridges in the _______ the Golden Gate Bridge in the United States, at 1,280 meters, is even longer.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
world but
world, but,
world,
world, but
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- At 1,377 meters,
- the Tsing Ma Bridge in China
- is one of the longest suspension bridges in the world[?]
- the Tsing Ma Bridge in China
- the Golden Gate Bridge in the United States,
- at 1,280 meters,
- is even longer.
- at 1,280 meters,
Understanding the Meaning
The sentence starts with some information about a specific bridge:
- 'At 1,377 meters, the Tsing Ma Bridge in China'
- tells us there's a bridge in China called the Tsing Ma Bridge
- and it measures 1,377 meters
- 'is one of the longest suspension bridges in the world'
- tells us this bridge holds a notable distinction
- it ranks among the world's longest suspension bridges
This is where we have the blank.
Let's look at the choices:
- Choice A: just 'but' with no commas
- Choice B: ', but,' with commas on both sides
- Choice C: just a comma, no 'but'
- Choice D: ', but' with a comma before 'but'
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The sentence continues:
- 'the Golden Gate Bridge in the United States, at 1,280 meters, is even longer.'
- This introduces a different bridge - the Golden Gate Bridge
- It gives us its location (United States) and length (1,280 meters)
- And it makes a comparison: this bridge is 'even longer'
So the complete picture is:
- The sentence is comparing two famous bridges
- First it tells us about the Tsing Ma Bridge and its status
- Then it brings up the Golden Gate Bridge for comparison
What do we notice about the structure here?
Let's look at both parts:
- First part: 'the Tsing Ma Bridge in China is one of the longest suspension bridges in the world'
- This is a complete thought with a subject (the bridge) and verb (is)
- It could stand alone as its own sentence
- Second part: 'the Golden Gate Bridge in the United States, at 1,280 meters, is even longer'
- This is also a complete thought with a subject (the bridge) and verb (is)
- It could also stand alone as its own sentence
- These two complete thoughts present contrasting or comparing information
- The word 'but' signals this comparison/contrast
When we connect two complete thoughts with a connecting word like 'but,' we need:
- A comma before 'but'
- The word 'but' itself
- No comma after 'but'
So we need: , but
The correct answer is D: 'world, but'
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Connecting Two Complete Thoughts with a Coordinating Conjunction
When you want to connect two complete thoughts (each with its own subject and verb, each able to stand alone as a sentence), you can use a coordinating conjunction - words like 'but,' 'and,' 'or,' 'so,' 'yet.' The key is proper punctuation:
The pattern: [Complete thought] , [conjunction] [Complete thought]
Example 1:
- 'The concert was sold out, but we managed to get tickets.'
- First complete thought: 'The concert was sold out'
- Conjunction showing contrast: 'but'
- Second complete thought: 'we managed to get tickets'
- Comma goes BEFORE 'but,' not after
Example 2:
- 'She studied all night, so she felt confident about the exam.'
- First complete thought: 'She studied all night'
- Conjunction showing result: 'so'
- Second complete thought: 'she felt confident about the exam'
- Comma goes BEFORE 'so,' not after
In our question:
- First complete thought: 'the Tsing Ma Bridge in China is one of the longest suspension bridges in the world'
- Conjunction showing contrast/comparison: 'but'
- Second complete thought: 'the Golden Gate Bridge in the United States, at 1,280 meters, is even longer'
- Therefore: 'world, but' is correct
world but
'world but'
✗ Incorrect
- This connects two complete thoughts with 'but' but leaves out the comma before it
- When you join two complete thoughts with a connecting word like 'but,' you need a comma before the connecting word
- Without the comma, this creates what's called a run-on sentence
world, but,
'world, but,'
✗ Incorrect
- This incorrectly places a comma after 'but' as well as before it
- When connecting two complete thoughts, the comma goes BEFORE the connecting word, never after
- The comma after 'but' disrupts the natural flow and is grammatically incorrect
world,
'world,'
✗ Incorrect
- This tries to connect two complete thoughts with just a comma, leaving out 'but' entirely
- Two complete thoughts cannot be joined by a comma alone - this creates a comma splice
- We also lose the word 'but' which signals the important contrast/comparison between the two bridges
world, but
✓ Correct
- Correct as explained in the solution above.