At eight paragraphs long, the preamble to the constitution of ______ country in Western Asia—is much longer than the one-paragraph...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
At eight paragraphs long, the preamble to the constitution of ______ country in Western Asia—is much longer than the one-paragraph preamble to the United States Constitution.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
Bahrain—a
Bahrain, a
Bahrain a
Bahrain: a
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- At eight paragraphs long,
- the preamble to the constitution of Bahrain [?] a country in Western Asia—
- is much longer than the one-paragraph preamble to the United States Constitution.
- the preamble to the constitution of Bahrain [?] a country in Western Asia—
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start reading from the beginning:
'At eight paragraphs long'
- This is describing something by its length - eight paragraphs.
'the preamble to the constitution of Bahrain'
- So we're talking about the preamble (the introduction) to Bahrain's constitution.
This is where we have the blank: 'Bahrain [?] a country in Western Asia—'
Let's look at the choices:
- They all include 'a country in Western Asia'
- What varies is the punctuation after 'Bahrain'
- Notice there's already a dash (—) shown after 'Western Asia' in the original sentence
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The sentence continues: 'is much longer than the one-paragraph preamble to the United States Constitution.'
Now let's understand the complete structure:
- The main sentence is:
- 'the preamble to the constitution of Bahrain is much longer than the one-paragraph preamble to the United States Constitution'
- But there's extra information inserted in the middle:
- 'a country in Western Asia'
- This tells us what Bahrain is - it's giving us geographical context
- This information interrupts the flow between 'Bahrain' and 'is'
What do we notice about the structure here?
- 'a country in Western Asia' is interrupting information -
- it's extra details inserted into the middle of the main sentence
- the main sentence would work without it: 'the preamble to the constitution of Bahrain is much longer...'
- The END of this interruption already has a dash (—)
- This dash appears after 'Western Asia' and before 'is'
- When you have interrupting information in the middle of a sentence, you need matching punctuation on both sides:
- Two commas, OR
- Two dashes, OR
- Two parentheses
- Since the END already has a dash, the BEGINNING must also use a dash
So we need: Bahrain—a country in Western Asia—is much longer...
The correct answer is Choice A.
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Matching Punctuation for Interrupting Information
When you insert extra information into the middle of a sentence - information that interrupts the main flow but adds helpful context - you must use matching punctuation on both sides of that interruption. Think of it like bookends: they need to match.
Your three options for these 'bookends' are:
Option 1: Two commas
- Main sentence: The museum opens at 9 AM
- With interruption: The museum, which features local art, opens at 9 AM
- Notice: comma before 'which,' comma after 'art'
Option 2: Two dashes
- Main sentence: The recipe takes three hours
- With interruption: The recipe—one of my grandmother's favorites—takes three hours
- Notice: dash before 'one,' dash after 'favorites'
Option 3: Two parentheses
- Main sentence: The flight leaves from gate B12
- With interruption: The flight (scheduled for 6 PM) leaves from gate B12
- Notice: parenthesis before 'scheduled,' parenthesis after 'PM'
In this question:
- The interrupting information is 'a country in Western Asia'
- The END already has a dash: Western Asia—is
- Therefore, the BEGINNING must also use a dash: Bahrain—a
- Result: Bahrain—a country in Western Asia—is much longer...
Key Rule: Never mix these punctuation types (don't use a comma on one side and a dash on the other). The punctuation marks must match, like matching bookends on a shelf.
Bahrain—a
✓ Correct
- Correct as explained in the solution above.
Bahrain, a
✗ Incorrect
- Uses a comma at the beginning but a dash at the end
- You cannot mix punctuation types for interrupting information - they must match
- This creates inconsistent, non-standard punctuation
Bahrain a
✗ Incorrect
- Provides no punctuation to set off the interrupting phrase
- Makes the sentence run together confusingly: 'Bahrain a country in Western Asia'
- Fails to properly signal where the interruption begins
Bahrain: a
✗ Incorrect
- A colon is used to introduce something that follows (like a list or explanation)
- It's not used to set off interrupting information in the middle of a sentence
- Also doesn't match the dash at the end of the interruption