Award-winning cinematographer James Wong Howe was known for his innovative filming techniques. While filming a boxing match for the movie...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
Award-winning cinematographer James Wong Howe was known for his innovative filming techniques. While filming a boxing match for the movie Body and Soul ________ Howe had a handheld camera operator wear roller skates. This allowed the operator to move smoothly around actors in a boxing ring, creating an immersive experience for viewers.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
(1947), and
(1947),
(1947) and
(1947)
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
Sentence 1:
- Award-winning cinematographer James Wong Howe
- was known
- for his innovative filming techniques.
- was known
Sentence 2:
- While filming a boxing match
- for the movie Body and Soul (1947)[?]
- Howe
- had a handheld camera operator wear roller skates.
Sentence 3:
- This
- allowed the operator
- to move smoothly
- around actors
- in a boxing ring,
- around actors
- creating an immersive experience
- for viewers.
- to move smoothly
- allowed the operator
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start from the beginning:
"Award-winning cinematographer James Wong Howe was known for his innovative filming techniques."
This introduces us to James Wong Howe and tells us he was famous for his creative camera work.
Now the next sentence begins:
"While filming a boxing match for the movie Body and Soul (1947)____"
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- (1947), and
- (1947),
- (1947) and
- (1947)
So we're deciding whether to use a comma after (1947), and whether to include "and" or not.
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The complete sentence is:
"While filming a boxing match for the movie Body and Soul (1947)____ Howe had a handheld camera operator wear roller skates."
Now let's understand the structure here:
- "While filming a boxing match for the movie Body and Soul (1947)"
- This sets up the context - it's telling us WHEN this happened
- It's giving us background information before the main action
- "Howe had a handheld camera operator wear roller skates"
- This is the main action of the sentence
- This tells us what Howe actually did
What do we notice about the structure?
- We have an introductory phrase ("While filming...") that sets the scene
- This needs to be separated from the main part of the sentence
- The main part comes after: what Howe did
- When you start a sentence with this kind of introductory setup, you need a comma to separate it from the main action
- We don't need "and" here
- "And" is used to connect two equal parts or actions
- But here, the "While filming..." part isn't an equal action - it's just providing context for the main action
So we need a comma after (1947), but no "and."
The correct answer is Choice B: (1947),
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Using Commas After Introductory Elements
When a sentence begins with an introductory phrase or clause that provides context or background (called an introductory element in grammar terms), you need to use a comma to separate it from the main part of the sentence:
Pattern:
- Introductory element, Main clause.
Examples:
- Introductory phrase: After studying for three hours, Maria felt prepared for the exam.
- "After studying for three hours" = introductory element setting up context
- Comma needed
- "Maria felt prepared for the exam" = main action
- Introductory clause: While the team celebrated their victory, the coach reviewed game footage.
- "While the team celebrated their victory" = introductory clause providing background
- Comma needed
- "the coach reviewed game footage" = main action
- In this question: While filming a boxing match for the movie Body and Soul (1947), Howe had a handheld camera operator wear roller skates.
- "While filming a boxing match for the movie Body and Soul (1947)" = introductory element
- Comma needed after (1947)
- "Howe had a handheld camera operator wear roller skates" = main action
Important distinction: Don't confuse this with situations where you're connecting two equal independent clauses with "and" - that's a different structure. Here, the introductory element is providing context, not stating an independent action, so it just needs a comma, not "and."
(1947), and
✗ Incorrect
- The "and" is incorrect here because we're not connecting two equal actions or independent parts
- The "While filming..." part is just providing background context, not stating a separate action that should be connected with "and"
- Using "and" here suggests we're joining two complete thoughts of equal importance, but that's not the relationship between these parts
(1947),
✓ Correct
- Correct as explained in the solution above.
(1947) and
✗ Incorrect
- Missing the comma that's needed after the introductory phrase
- Also incorrectly includes "and," which doesn't fit the relationship between these parts
- Without the comma, the sentence runs together awkwardly
(1947)
✗ Incorrect
- Missing the necessary comma after the introductory phrase
- When you begin a sentence with a phrase like "While filming...", you need a comma to separate it from the main action
- Without the comma, readers stumble over where the introduction ends and the main sentence begins