Between 322 and 184 BCE, the Maurya Empire established a complex economic system that, through trade and centralized _______ funded...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
Between 322 and 184 BCE, the Maurya Empire established a complex economic system that, through trade and centralized _______ funded major infrastructure projects throughout the Indian subcontinent. This included the building of many roads, canals, and hospitals.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
taxation:
taxation,
taxation—
taxation
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- Between 322 and 184 BCE,
- the Maurya Empire
- established a complex economic system
- that,
- through trade and centralized taxation (?),
- funded major infrastructure projects throughout the Indian subcontinent.
- that,
- established a complex economic system
- the Maurya Empire
- This included the building of many roads, canals, and hospitals.
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start reading from the beginning:
- 'Between 322 and 184 BCE'
- gives us the time period we're talking about
- 'the Maurya Empire established a complex economic system'
- tells us the main action - the empire created an economic system
Now the sentence continues with more about this system:
- 'that... funded major infrastructure projects throughout the Indian subcontinent'
- The word 'that' refers back to the economic system
- It's telling us what this system did - it funded infrastructure projects
But notice there's something in between 'that' and 'funded':
- 'through trade and centralized taxation'
This is where we have the blank - right after 'taxation.'
Let's look at the choices:
- We're deciding between a colon, comma, dash, or no punctuation
To see what works here, let's understand how this phrase fits into the sentence structure.
What do we notice about the structure?
- The main flow of the clause is: 'that funded major infrastructure projects'
- This tells us what the economic system did
- The phrase 'through trade and centralized taxation' is interrupting this flow
- It's explaining HOW the system funded the projects
- It provides extra detail in the middle of the main thought
- This interrupting phrase opens with a comma: 'that, through trade and centralized taxation...'
- When you open an interrupting phrase with a comma, you need to close it with a matching comma
- This signals to the reader: "okay, the extra information is done, now we're back to the main point"
- Pattern: main clause [comma] interrupting phrase [comma] main clause continues
So we need a comma after 'taxation' to close the interruption and let the sentence continue with 'funded major infrastructure projects.'
The answer is Choice B: taxation,
The second sentence then gives us examples:
- 'This included the building of many roads, canals, and hospitals'
- Shows specific types of infrastructure that were built
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Setting Off Interrupting Phrases with Matching Commas
When you insert a phrase in the middle of a sentence to add extra information, you need to use matching punctuation on both sides to set it off. If you open the interruption with a comma, you must close it with a comma:
Example 1:
- Main sentence: The study showed positive results
- With interruption: The study, conducted over five years, showed positive results
- Opens with comma after "study"
- Closes with comma after "years"
- Main sentence resumes: "showed positive results"
Example 2:
- Main sentence: The athlete who trained daily won the championship
- With interruption: The athlete, who trained daily, won the championship
- Opens with comma after "athlete"
- Closes with comma after "daily"
- Main sentence resumes: "won the championship"
In our question:
- Main clause: "that funded major infrastructure projects"
- Interruption: "through trade and centralized taxation"
- Structure: "that, through trade and centralized taxation, funded major infrastructure projects"
- Opens with comma after "that"
- Must close with comma after "taxation"
- Main clause resumes: "funded major infrastructure projects"
The matching commas create clear boundaries, telling the reader: "Here's some extra detail, and now we're back to the main point."
taxation:
✗ Incorrect
- A colon is used to introduce a list or explanation that follows
- Here, we're not introducing something new - we're closing an interrupting phrase and returning to the main clause
- Also creates mismatched punctuation: you opened the interruption with a comma, so you need to close it with a comma
taxation,
✓ Correct
- Correct as explained in the solution above.
taxation—
✗ Incorrect
- Creates mismatched punctuation: opening with a comma but closing with a dash
- When you interrupt a sentence with a phrase, both sides need matching punctuation
- This would confuse the reader about where the interruption ends
taxation
✗ Incorrect
- Leaves the interrupting phrase unclosed
- Makes "taxation funded" run together, which disrupts the intended meaning
- The reader needs the closing comma as a signal that the interruption has ended and the main clause ("that funded") is resuming