Consider the mechanics of the pinhole camera: light passes through a small hole, resulting in a focused projected image. A...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
Consider the mechanics of the pinhole camera: light passes through a small hole, resulting in a focused projected image. A ray diagram reveals how this _______ the hole's small size restricts light to a single ray, all light passing through the hole can only arrive at a single destination, eliminating diffraction and ensuring a clear image.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
works because
works. Because
works, it's because
works: it's because
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- Consider the mechanics of the pinhole camera:
- light passes through a small hole,
- resulting in a focused projected image.
- light passes through a small hole,
- A ray diagram
- reveals
- how this works [?]
- the hole's small size restricts light to a single ray,
- all light passing through the hole can only arrive
- at a single destination,
- eliminating diffraction and
- ensuring a clear image.
- at a single destination,
- how this works [?]
- reveals
Understanding the Meaning
The first sentence gives us the basic setup:
- Consider how a pinhole camera works
- Light passes through a small hole
- This results in a focused, projected image
The second sentence begins:
- 'A ray diagram reveals how this works...'
- A ray diagram (a physics diagram showing light paths) will show us the mechanism
This is where we have the blank.
Let's look at the choices:
- A: works because
- B: works. Because
- C: works, it's because
- D: works: it's because
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The rest tells us:
- 'the hole's small size restricts light to a single ray'
- The key is that the hole is SMALL
- This smallness limits the light to just one ray
- 'all light passing through the hole can only arrive at a single destination'
- Because it's restricted to a single ray
- That light can only go to one specific spot
- 'eliminating diffraction and ensuring a clear image'
- This is what produces the clear image we want
Now, what do we notice about the structure here?
- 'A ray diagram reveals how this works'
- This is a complete thought that could stand as its own sentence
- 'Because the hole's small size restricts light to a single ray, all light passing through the hole can only arrive at a single destination'
- 'Because the hole's small size restricts light to a single ray' is giving us a reason (dependent clause)
- 'all light passing through the hole can only arrive at a single destination' is a complete statement (independent clause)
- Together: dependent clause + independent clause = complete sentence
So we have two complete sentences here!
- The first ends with "works"
- The second begins with "Because" and has proper structure (dependent clause followed by independent clause)
The correct answer is B: works. Because
We need a period to separate these two complete sentences. Even though the second sentence starts with "Because," it's grammatically correct because the dependent clause ("Because the hole's small size...") is followed by a main clause ("all light passing through...").
Grammar Concept Applied
Understanding Sentence Boundaries and Starting Sentences with "Because"
Two important principles work together here:
Principle 1: Complete thoughts need proper separation
- When you have two complete thoughts (called independent clauses in grammar terms), you need to separate them with:
- A period (creating two sentences)
- A semicolon
- A comma + coordinating conjunction (and, but, or, so, etc.)
- You CANNOT join them with just a comma (this creates a comma splice)
Principle 2: Sentences CAN start with "Because" when structured properly
Many students learn "don't start sentences with because," but this isn't always true! It's fine when:
- The "because" clause is followed by a main clause
- Structure: Because [reason], [main statement].
Example:
- Incorrect fragment: "Because it was raining."
- This is only a dependent clause with no main statement
- Correct sentence: "Because it was raining, we stayed inside."
- Dependent clause: "Because it was raining"
- Main clause: "we stayed inside"
- Together they form a complete sentence
In this question:
- First sentence: "A ray diagram reveals how this works."
- Complete thought - gets a period
- Second sentence: "Because the hole's small size restricts light to a single ray, all light passing through the hole can only arrive at a single destination, eliminating diffraction and ensuring a clear image."
- Starts with "Because" BUT has proper structure
- Dependent clause + independent clause = complete sentence
works because
✗ Incorrect
- This creates a comma splice problem
- After "because the hole's small size restricts light to a single ray," there's a comma
- Then we have another complete clause: "all light passing through the hole can only arrive at a single destination"
- You cannot join two independent clauses with just a comma - you need stronger punctuation or a period
works. Because
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.
works, it's because
✗ Incorrect
- This immediately creates a comma splice
- "A ray diagram reveals how this works" is a complete thought
- "it's because the hole's small size..." is another complete thought
- These cannot be joined with just a comma
- Additionally, "it's because" is awkward phrasing
works: it's because
✗ Incorrect
- The phrase "it's because" after a colon is non-standard and awkward
- While colons can introduce explanations, "it's because" is redundant
- The "it's" adds unnecessary words that don't fit conventional usage with colons