Despite being cheap, versatile, and easy to produce, ________ they are made from nonrenewable petroleum, and most do not biodegrade...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
Despite being cheap, versatile, and easy to produce, ________ they are made from nonrenewable petroleum, and most do not biodegrade in landfills.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
there are two problems associated with commercial plastics:
two problems are associated with commercial plastics:
commercial plastics' two associated problems are that
commercial plastics have two associated problems:
Sentence Structure
- Despite being cheap, versatile, and easy to produce,
- [?] they are made from nonrenewable petroleum,
- and most do not biodegrade in landfills.
- [?] they are made from nonrenewable petroleum,
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start from the beginning:
"Despite being cheap, versatile, and easy to produce,"
- This opening phrase is describing something that has these three qualities:
- cheap
- versatile
- easy to produce
- But what has these qualities? We need to keep reading.
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- A: there are two problems associated with commercial plastics:
- B: two problems are associated with commercial plastics:
- C: commercial plastics' two associated problems are that
- D: commercial plastics have two associated problems:
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
After the colon: "they are made from nonrenewable petroleum, and most do not biodegrade in landfills."
Now let's understand what this complete sentence is telling us:
- The sentence is about commercial plastics
- They have positive qualities (cheap, versatile, easy to produce)
- BUT despite those good qualities, they have two problems
- The two problems are listed after the colon:
- Problem 1: they are made from nonrenewable petroleum
- Problem 2: most do not biodegrade in landfills
- Notice that "they" appears after the colon
- "They" needs to refer to something
- From context, "they" means commercial plastics
What do we notice about the structure here?
- The opening phrase "Despite being cheap, versatile, and easy to produce" is a describing phrase
- It needs to describe whatever noun comes immediately after it
- Whatever comes right after that comma should be what's "cheap, versatile, and easy to produce"
- What should be cheap, versatile, and easy to produce?
- The commercial plastics themselves - not the problems!
- The word "they" after the colon needs to refer back to something
- It should refer to "commercial plastics"
- So "commercial plastics" needs to be the main subject
So we need Choice D: "commercial plastics have two associated problems:"
- This puts "commercial plastics" right after the opening phrase (correct)
- So the plastics are what's cheap, versatile, and easy to produce
- This makes "commercial plastics" the subject (correct)
- So "they" can clearly refer back to commercial plastics
- The colon introduces the list of the two problems (correct)
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Introductory Describing Phrases Must Describe What Comes Right After
When a sentence starts with a describing phrase (called a modifier in grammar terms) followed by a comma, that phrase must describe the noun that immediately follows the comma:
Pattern:
- Describing phrase, [NOUN BEING DESCRIBED] rest of sentence
Example 1:
- (correct) Correct: "Despite being expensive, the car sold quickly"
- The car is what's expensive
- (incorrect) Incorrect: "Despite being expensive, the sale happened quickly"
- Makes it sound like the sale is expensive (illogical)
Example 2:
- (correct) Correct: "After running for hours, the athlete collapsed"
- The athlete is who ran
- (incorrect) Incorrect: "After running for hours, exhaustion overcame the athlete"
- Makes it sound like exhaustion ran for hours (illogical)
In our question:
- The describing phrase is: "Despite being cheap, versatile, and easy to produce"
- What should this describe? Commercial plastics (not problems)
- So we need: "Despite being cheap, versatile, and easy to produce, commercial plastics have two associated problems"
Additional consideration: The pronoun "they" after the colon needs to refer to commercial plastics, which requires commercial plastics to be the main subject of the sentence, not just mentioned in passing or in a possessive form.
there are two problems associated with commercial plastics:
"there are two problems associated with commercial plastics:"
✗ Incorrect
- Creates a modifier error: This makes it sound like the problems are cheap, versatile, and easy to produce, which doesn't make logical sense - we want to say the plastics have those qualities
- Creates a pronoun reference problem: "There are two problems" doesn't establish "commercial plastics" as the subject, so "they" after the colon doesn't have a clear antecedent
two problems are associated with commercial plastics:
"two problems are associated with commercial plastics:"
✗ Incorrect
- Creates a modifier error: This puts "two problems" right after the comma, making it sound like the problems are cheap, versatile, and easy to produce, not the plastics
- Creates a pronoun reference problem: Makes "problems" the subject, so "they" after the colon would refer to problems rather than commercial plastics, which contradicts the meaning
commercial plastics' two associated problems are that
"commercial plastics' two associated problems are that"
✗ Incorrect
- Creates a modifier error: The possessive form ("commercial plastics'") means "problems" is the subject, so the opening phrase incorrectly describes the problems as cheap, versatile, and easy to produce
- Creates awkward structure: Uses "that" instead of a colon, which is less effective here for introducing a list
- Creates unclear pronoun reference: "They" wouldn't clearly refer back to anything
commercial plastics have two associated problems:
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.