Digital artist Jung (Lulu) Chen primarily uses a suite of software tools to create illustrations for children's books. To manifest...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
Digital artist Jung (Lulu) Chen primarily uses a suite of software tools to create illustrations for children's books. To manifest the warm and welcoming atmospheres that are a signature of her _______ she occasionally relies on more traditional art techniques, such as painting with watercolors.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
work, though,
work, though
work; though,
work, though;
Sentence Structure
- Digital artist Jung (Lulu) Chen
- primarily uses a suite of software tools
- to create illustrations for children's books.
- primarily uses a suite of software tools
- To manifest the warm and welcoming atmospheres
- that are a signature of her work (?) though (?)
- she occasionally relies on more traditional art techniques,
- such as painting with watercolors.
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start from the beginning to understand what this passage is telling us:
The first sentence gives us background:
- Digital artist Jung (Lulu) Chen primarily uses software tools
- She's a digital artist
- Her main method is using software to create illustrations for children's books
Now the second sentence adds more detail:
- "To manifest the warm and welcoming atmospheres that are a signature of her work..."
- This is explaining a goal or purpose
- Her work is known for creating warm, welcoming atmospheres
- This is her signature style
Here's where we have the blank: "work ______ she occasionally relies..."
Let's look at the choices:
- They all include "though" but with different comma and semicolon placements
- We're deciding how to punctuate around this word "though"
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying:
- "she occasionally relies on more traditional art techniques, such as painting with watercolors"
Now let's understand the complete picture:
- The first sentence told us she PRIMARILY uses digital/software tools
- But this second sentence reveals that THOUGH she's a digital artist,
- she occasionally uses TRADITIONAL techniques (watercolors)
- specifically to create those warm atmospheres that define her work
- So there's a contrast here:
- She's known for digital work
- But she uses traditional techniques too
- The word "though" is signaling this contrast
What do we notice about the structure here?
- "To manifest... her work" is an introductory phrase
- It sets up the purpose or reason
- It needs a comma after it
- "though" is functioning as an interrupting word
- It's positioned between the introductory phrase and the main part
- It's showing the contrast between her digital reputation and traditional techniques
- "she occasionally relies..." is the main statement
- Subject: she
- Verb: relies
- When a word like "though" interrupts in the middle like this,
- it needs to be set off with commas on BOTH sides
- This creates: [intro phrase], though, [main statement]
So we need: "work, though, she occasionally..."
The correct answer is Choice A: work, though,
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Using Commas with Interrupting Transitional Words
When a transitional word like "though," "however," or "therefore" appears in the middle of a sentence (not at the beginning), it often functions as an interrupter that should be enclosed in commas on both sides:
Pattern:
- [First part of sentence], [transitional word], [rest of sentence]
Examples:
- Without interrupter: The team practiced for months and won the championship.
- With interrupter: The team practiced for months, however, and won the championship.
- "however" interrupts to show contrast
- Commas on both sides set it off
- Another example: She preferred digital art, though, and rarely used paint.
- "though" signals a contrast or concession
- Enclosed in commas because it's interrupting
In this question:
- "To manifest the warm and welcoming atmospheres that are a signature of her work, though, she occasionally relies on more traditional art techniques"
- The introductory phrase ends with a comma
- "though" interrupts to signal the contrast
- A second comma after "though" completes the enclosure
- Then the main clause continues smoothly
This punctuation pattern helps readers understand that the transitional word is adding commentary or showing a relationship between ideas, rather than being part of the main flow of the sentence.
work, though,
Correct as explained in the solution above.
work, though
- Only has a comma before "though" but not after it
- When "though" is used as an interrupting transitional word in the middle of a sentence, it needs commas on BOTH sides to properly set it off
- Without the second comma, the sentence doesn't properly separate the interrupting word from the main clause
work; though,
- Uses a semicolon before "though"
- Semicolons are used to join two complete thoughts (independent clauses)
- "To manifest... her work" is NOT a complete thought - it's an introductory phrase that can't stand alone as a sentence
- This creates a grammatical error by treating a dependent phrase as if it were independent
work, though;
- Places a semicolon after "though" instead of a comma
- This incorrectly separates "though" from the main clause it's introducing
- The semicolon creates an improper break, suggesting "though" is ending one complete thought, but it's actually an interrupting word that needs to connect smoothly to what follows
- This disrupts the natural flow and relationship between the parts