Documentary filmmaker James Balog has dedicated his career to capturing the effects of climate change on polar regions. His 2012...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
Documentary filmmaker James Balog has dedicated his career to capturing the effects of climate change on polar regions. His 2012 film Chasing Ice documents the rapid retreat of glaciers, while his 2018 documentary _____ explores the impact of rising temperatures on Arctic wildlife.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
The Human Element:
The Human Element
The Human Element,
The Human Element—
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- Documentary filmmaker James Balog has dedicated his career to capturing the effects of climate change on polar regions.
- His 2012 film Chasing Ice documents the rapid retreat of glaciers,
- while his 2018 documentary The Human Element [?] explores the impact of rising temperatures on Arctic wildlife.
Where [?] represents what we need to determine: should there be a colon, no punctuation, a comma, or a dash?
Understanding the Meaning
The first sentence tells us:
- Documentary filmmaker James Balog has dedicated his career to capturing climate change effects on polar regions
- This establishes who he is and his focus
The second sentence gives us specific examples of his work:
- "His 2012 film Chasing Ice documents the rapid retreat of glaciers"
- One example: a 2012 film
- Title: Chasing Ice
- What it does: documents glacier retreat
- Notice: the title flows directly into "documents" with NO punctuation
Now we come to the second part:
- "while his 2018 documentary _____ explores the impact of rising temperatures on Arctic wildlife"
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- All include "The Human Element" (the documentary's title)
- They differ in what punctuation (if any) comes after the title
To see what works here, let's understand the structure and notice the parallel pattern!
The first clause has:
- His 2012 film [title: Chasing Ice] [verb: documents]...
- Structure: noun + title + verb
- No punctuation between title and verb
The second clause has:
- his 2018 documentary [title: The Human Element] [verb: explores]...
- Same structure: noun + title + verb
- Should follow the same pattern
What do we notice about the structure here?
- "The Human Element" is the name of the documentary
- It identifies which documentary we're talking about
- It's part of the complete subject of this clause
- "explores" is the main verb
- It tells us what this documentary does
- The complete subject is: "his 2018 documentary The Human Element"
- The verb is: "explores"
Here's the key: You don't put punctuation between a subject and its verb. Any punctuation mark here would incorrectly interrupt that natural connection.
So we need no punctuation - just "The Human Element explores" flowing naturally, maintaining the parallel with "Chasing Ice documents."
The correct answer is Choice B.
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Titles as Subject Identifiers: No Punctuation Before the Verb
When a title or name directly identifies the noun it follows, and the sentence continues with a verb describing what that thing does, no punctuation is needed between the title and the verb. The title becomes part of the complete subject, and you never separate a subject from its verb with punctuation.
Pattern:
- Complete subject: Her favorite novel Pride and Prejudice sits on the shelf
- "Her favorite novel" = general noun
- "Pride and Prejudice" = specific title identifying which novel
- "sits" = verb
- No punctuation between title and verb
- Complete subject: The newspaper The Guardian reports international news daily
- "The newspaper" = general noun
- "The Guardian" = specific name
- "reports" = verb
- No punctuation between name and verb
Application to this question:
- "his 2018 documentary" = general noun
- "The Human Element" = specific title identifying which documentary
- "explores" = verb
- No punctuation between title and verb
This maintains both proper sentence structure (subject-verb connection) and parallel structure with the earlier phrase "His 2012 film Chasing Ice documents."
The Human Element:
(The Human Element:)
✗ Incorrect
- A colon after the title creates an unnecessary break that suggests explanation or elaboration is about to follow
- This incorrectly separates the subject ("his 2018 documentary The Human Element") from its verb ("explores")
- Disrupts the parallel structure with the previous clause where "Chasing Ice" flows directly into "documents"
The Human Element
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.
The Human Element,
(The Human Element,)
✗ Incorrect
- A comma after the title incorrectly suggests the title is optional, parenthetical information that could be removed
- Creates an improper separation between the subject and verb
- Breaks the established parallel with "Chasing Ice documents" which has no comma
The Human Element—
(The Human Element—)
✗ Incorrect
- A dash creates an emphatic break suggesting a dramatic shift or additional information is coming
- Incorrectly interrupts the natural flow from the complete subject to its verb
- Violates the parallel structure with the earlier example that flows smoothly without any punctuation