Dolores Huerta's advocacy on behalf of farmworkers was rooted in her experience as a schoolteacher in Stockton, California, in the...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
Dolores Huerta's advocacy on behalf of farmworkers was rooted in her experience as a schoolteacher in Stockton, California, in the early 1950s. Hoping to help her students and their families outside the ________ Huerta left teaching to start the Stockton chapter of the Community Service Organization, a group focused on the needs of local farmworkers.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
classroom.
classroom;
classroom,
classroom
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- Dolores Huerta's advocacy on behalf of farmworkers
- was rooted in her experience
- as a schoolteacher
- in Stockton, California,
- in the early 1950s.
- in Stockton, California,
- as a schoolteacher
- was rooted in her experience
- Hoping to help her students and their families outside the classroom[?]
- Huerta
- left teaching
- to start the Stockton chapter of the Community Service Organization,
- a group focused on the needs of local farmworkers.
- to start the Stockton chapter of the Community Service Organization,
- left teaching
Understanding the Meaning
The first sentence gives us background:
- Dolores Huerta's advocacy for farmworkers came from her experience as a teacher
- in Stockton, California
- in the early 1950s
Now the second sentence starts with:
- "Hoping to help her students and their families outside the classroom"
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- We're deciding between a period, semicolon, comma, or no punctuation after "classroom"
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The sentence continues:
- "Huerta left teaching to start the Stockton chapter of the Community Service Organization, a group focused on the needs of local farmworkers."
Now let's understand the complete picture:
- "Hoping to help her students and their families outside the classroom"
- This phrase explains WHY Huerta did what she did
- It provides her motivation
- "Huerta left teaching to start the Stockton chapter..."
- This is the main action of the sentence
- Subject: Huerta
- What she did: left teaching and started an organization
What do we notice about the structure here?
- The opening phrase "Hoping to help..." is NOT a complete thought
- It can't stand alone as its own sentence
- It's describing/providing context for the main action
- The part "Huerta left teaching..." IS a complete thought
- It has a subject (Huerta) and a verb (left)
- It tells us the main action
- When we have an introductory descriptive phrase followed by the main part of the sentence, we need a comma to separate them
So we need Choice C: comma
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Using Commas to Separate Introductory Phrases from Main Clauses
When a sentence begins with an introductory phrase that provides context or background information (called a participial phrase in grammar terms), we use a comma to separate it from the main part of the sentence:
Pattern:
- Introductory phrase, + Main clause (subject + verb)
Example 1:
- Hoping to improve her community, Maria started a volunteer program
- Introductory phrase: "Hoping to improve her community"
- Comma separates it from the main clause
- Main clause: "Maria started a volunteer program"
Example 2:
- Walking through the park, the students noticed the unusual bird
- Introductory phrase: "Walking through the park"
- Comma separates it from the main clause
- Main clause: "the students noticed the unusual bird"
In this question:
- Introductory phrase: "Hoping to help her students and their families outside the classroom"
- Comma needed here
- Main clause: "Huerta left teaching to start the Stockton chapter..."
The introductory phrase can't stand alone as a sentence, so it needs the comma to properly connect it to the complete thought that follows.
classroom.
✗ Incorrect
- This would create a sentence fragment
- "Hoping to help her students and their families outside the classroom." cannot stand alone as a complete sentence
- It's a descriptive phrase with no subject performing a main action
classroom;
✗ Incorrect
- Semicolons connect two complete thoughts that could each stand alone as sentences
- "Hoping to help her students and their families outside the classroom" is not a complete thought
- It's an introductory phrase that depends on the main clause to make sense
classroom,
✓ Correct
- Correct as explained in the solution above.
classroom
✗ Incorrect
- This would run the introductory phrase directly into the main clause: "...outside the classroom Huerta left teaching..."
- Without punctuation separating them, the sentence becomes confusing and hard to read
- Standard English requires punctuation between an introductory phrase and the main clause