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Drawing from multiple artistic traditions, sculptor Maya Lin conceived and developed her Vietnam Veterans Memorial design, ______ minimalist and representational elements that had rarely been combined in public monuments.

Which choice completes the text with the most logical and precise word or phrase?

A

to merge

B

merged

C

merging

D

and merging

Solution

Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!

Sentence Structure

  • Drawing from multiple artistic traditions,
    • sculptor Maya Lin
      • conceived and developed her Vietnam Veterans Memorial design,
        • [?] minimalist and representational elements
          • that had rarely been combined in public monuments.
  • Where [?] = to merge / merged / merging / and merging

Understanding the Meaning

Let's start reading from the beginning:

'Drawing from multiple artistic traditions'

  • This tells us HOW Maya Lin approached her work - she pulled from multiple different art traditions

'sculptor Maya Lin'

  • This is who we're talking about

'conceived and developed her Vietnam Veterans Memorial design'

  • These are the main actions - she conceived (came up with the idea for) and developed (worked out the details of) her design for the memorial

Now we've reached the blank. The sentence continues:
'______ minimalist and representational elements that had rarely been combined in public monuments.'

Let's look at our choices:

  • We're deciding between different forms of the verb related to 'merge'
    • A. to merge (infinitive form)
    • B. merged (past tense)
    • C. merging (present participle/-ing form)
    • D. and merging (coordinated -ing form)

To see what works here, let's understand what this part is telling us:

  • 'minimalist and representational elements'
    • These are two different artistic styles being brought together
    • Minimalist = very simple, stripped down
    • Representational = showing recognizable forms/figures
  • 'that had rarely been combined in public monuments'
    • This tells us these two styles hadn't really been put together before in monuments

So the complete meaning is:

  • Maya Lin conceived and developed her memorial design
  • This design brought together two styles (minimalist and representational) that hadn't been combined before

What do we notice about the structure here?

  • The sentence already has its main verbs: 'conceived and developed'
    • These tell us the primary actions Maya Lin took
  • After the comma, we need something that describes WHAT the design did or HOW it worked
    • This isn't another main action
    • It's additional descriptive information about the design
  • The phrase about merging elements tells us what the design accomplished - it brought these two styles together

So we need: merging (Choice C)

  • The -ing form creates a descriptive phrase that flows from the main action
  • It tells us what the design did without creating a separate main statement
  • Structure: main action (conceived and developed) + comma + descriptive phrase (merging elements)



GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED

Using Descriptive Phrases with -ing Forms

When you want to add extra information about an action or tell what resulted from it, you can use a comma followed by an -ing form (called a present participle in grammar terms). This creates a descriptive phrase rather than a separate complete statement:

Pattern: Main clause + comma + -ing phrase

Example 1:

  • The architect designed the building, incorporating sustainable materials throughout.
    • Main action: designed the building
    • Additional description: incorporating materials (tells HOW or WHAT the design did)

Example 2:

  • The scientist published her findings, challenging previous theories in the field.
    • Main action: published findings
    • Additional description: challenging theories (tells what resulted or what this did)

In our question:

  • Main action: Maya Lin conceived and developed her design
  • Additional description: merging minimalist and representational elements
  • The 'merging' phrase tells us what the design accomplished - it brought these elements together
  • This flows naturally from the main action without creating a separate statement

Key insight: The -ing form allows you to add descriptive layers to your main statement. It's not announcing a new main action but rather elaborating on what you've already stated.

Answer Choices Explained
A

to merge

✗ Incorrect

  • The infinitive form 'to merge' would indicate purpose - as if she conceived the design 'in order to merge' elements
  • But that's not the logical relationship here
  • The design itself merges the elements - that's not a separate purpose but rather what the design does
  • This creates a meaning problem
B

merged

✗ Incorrect

  • This past tense verb form would need to coordinate properly with 'conceived and developed'
  • With just a comma, it creates an awkward or incomplete structure
  • To work as a third parallel verb, it would need 'and merged' to match the pattern of the other verbs
  • As written, it creates a structural problem
C

merging

✓ Correct

  • Correct as explained in the solution above.
D

and merging

✗ Incorrect

  • The 'and' tries to coordinate 'merging' with the verbs 'conceived and developed'
  • But this creates faulty parallelism - 'conceived and developed' are past tense, while 'merging' is a present participle
  • The verb forms don't match up
  • If we wanted a third coordinated verb, it would need to be 'and merged' (past tense to match)
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