Drawing from multiple artistic traditions, sculptor Maya Lin conceived and developed her Vietnam Veterans Memorial design, ______ minimalist and repre...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
Drawing from multiple artistic traditions, sculptor Maya Lin conceived and developed her Vietnam Veterans Memorial design, ______ minimalist and representational elements that had rarely been combined in public monuments.
Which choice completes the text with the most logical and precise word or phrase?
to merge
merged
merging
and merging
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- Drawing from multiple artistic traditions,
- sculptor Maya Lin
- conceived and developed her Vietnam Veterans Memorial design,
- [?] minimalist and representational elements
- that had rarely been combined in public monuments.
- [?] minimalist and representational elements
- conceived and developed her Vietnam Veterans Memorial design,
- sculptor Maya Lin
- Where [?] = to merge / merged / merging / and merging
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start reading from the beginning:
'Drawing from multiple artistic traditions'
- This tells us HOW Maya Lin approached her work - she pulled from multiple different art traditions
'sculptor Maya Lin'
- This is who we're talking about
'conceived and developed her Vietnam Veterans Memorial design'
- These are the main actions - she conceived (came up with the idea for) and developed (worked out the details of) her design for the memorial
Now we've reached the blank. The sentence continues:
'______ minimalist and representational elements that had rarely been combined in public monuments.'
Let's look at our choices:
- We're deciding between different forms of the verb related to 'merge'
- A. to merge (infinitive form)
- B. merged (past tense)
- C. merging (present participle/-ing form)
- D. and merging (coordinated -ing form)
To see what works here, let's understand what this part is telling us:
- 'minimalist and representational elements'
- These are two different artistic styles being brought together
- Minimalist = very simple, stripped down
- Representational = showing recognizable forms/figures
- 'that had rarely been combined in public monuments'
- This tells us these two styles hadn't really been put together before in monuments
So the complete meaning is:
- Maya Lin conceived and developed her memorial design
- This design brought together two styles (minimalist and representational) that hadn't been combined before
What do we notice about the structure here?
- The sentence already has its main verbs: 'conceived and developed'
- These tell us the primary actions Maya Lin took
- After the comma, we need something that describes WHAT the design did or HOW it worked
- This isn't another main action
- It's additional descriptive information about the design
- The phrase about merging elements tells us what the design accomplished - it brought these two styles together
So we need: merging (Choice C)
- The -ing form creates a descriptive phrase that flows from the main action
- It tells us what the design did without creating a separate main statement
- Structure: main action (conceived and developed) + comma + descriptive phrase (merging elements)
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Using Descriptive Phrases with -ing Forms
When you want to add extra information about an action or tell what resulted from it, you can use a comma followed by an -ing form (called a present participle in grammar terms). This creates a descriptive phrase rather than a separate complete statement:
Pattern: Main clause + comma + -ing phrase
Example 1:
- The architect designed the building, incorporating sustainable materials throughout.
- Main action: designed the building
- Additional description: incorporating materials (tells HOW or WHAT the design did)
Example 2:
- The scientist published her findings, challenging previous theories in the field.
- Main action: published findings
- Additional description: challenging theories (tells what resulted or what this did)
In our question:
- Main action: Maya Lin conceived and developed her design
- Additional description: merging minimalist and representational elements
- The 'merging' phrase tells us what the design accomplished - it brought these elements together
- This flows naturally from the main action without creating a separate statement
Key insight: The -ing form allows you to add descriptive layers to your main statement. It's not announcing a new main action but rather elaborating on what you've already stated.
to merge
✗ Incorrect
- The infinitive form 'to merge' would indicate purpose - as if she conceived the design 'in order to merge' elements
- But that's not the logical relationship here
- The design itself merges the elements - that's not a separate purpose but rather what the design does
- This creates a meaning problem
merged
✗ Incorrect
- This past tense verb form would need to coordinate properly with 'conceived and developed'
- With just a comma, it creates an awkward or incomplete structure
- To work as a third parallel verb, it would need 'and merged' to match the pattern of the other verbs
- As written, it creates a structural problem
merging
✓ Correct
- Correct as explained in the solution above.
and merging
✗ Incorrect
- The 'and' tries to coordinate 'merging' with the verbs 'conceived and developed'
- But this creates faulty parallelism - 'conceived and developed' are past tense, while 'merging' is a present participle
- The verb forms don't match up
- If we wanted a third coordinated verb, it would need to be 'and merged' (past tense to match)