During the Harlem Renaissance of the 1920s, African American artists, writers, and musicians created works that celebrated Black culture and...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
During the Harlem Renaissance of the 1920s, African American artists, writers, and musicians created works that celebrated Black culture and challenged racial stereotypes. Langston Hughes emerged as one of the era's most influential voices when he published his first collection of _____ began touring the country to give readings and lectures that brought his work to wider audiences.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
poetry that
poetry, that
poetry and
poetry, and
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- During the Harlem Renaissance of the 1920s,
- African American artists, writers, and musicians
- created works
- that celebrated Black culture and challenged racial stereotypes.
- created works
- African American artists, writers, and musicians
- Langston Hughes
- emerged as one of the era's most influential voices
- when he published his first collection of poetry [?] began touring the country
- to give readings and lectures
- that brought his work to wider audiences.
- to give readings and lectures
- when he published his first collection of poetry [?] began touring the country
- emerged as one of the era's most influential voices
Understanding the Meaning
The first sentence gives us context:
During the Harlem Renaissance, African American artists, writers, and musicians created works that celebrated Black culture and challenged racial stereotypes.
Now let's move to the second sentence about Langston Hughes:
'Langston Hughes emerged as one of the era's most influential voices'
- He became a major figure of the Harlem Renaissance
'when he published his first collection of poetry'
- This is when he emerged as influential - when he published his poetry collection
This is where we have the blank.
Let's look at the choices:
- poetry that
- poetry, that
- poetry and
- poetry, and
We're deciding between "that" and "and" - with or without a comma. To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
'began touring the country to give readings and lectures that brought his work to wider audiences'
- This describes more of what Hughes did - he toured and gave readings/lectures
- These tours brought his work to more people
Now let's really understand what this sentence is telling us about what Hughes did:
- 'he published his first collection of poetry'
- This is one action Hughes took
- 'began touring the country'
- This is a second action Hughes took
So the complete picture is:
- Hughes did TWO things that made him influential:
- (1) published poetry
- (2) began touring
What do we notice about the structure here?
- We have ONE subject (he/Hughes) performing TWO actions
- First action: published poetry
- Second action: began touring
- If we used "that," it would make "began touring" describe the poetry
- "poetry that began touring" - but poetry can't tour! People tour!
- This would be illogical
- We need "and" to connect these two parallel actions
- "published poetry and began touring" - this makes sense
- Both actions are things Hughes did
What about the comma?
- When you have one subject doing two actions (just two, not three or more),
- You DON'T use a comma before "and"
- Example: "She walked to the store and bought milk" (no comma)
- You only use a comma before "and" when joining two complete thoughts with separate subjects
- Example: "She walked to the store, and he stayed home" (comma needed)
So we need: poetry and (no comma)
The correct answer is C.
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Connecting Two Actions by the Same Subject
When one person or thing performs two actions, you connect those actions with "and" - and you DON'T use a comma when it's just two actions (this structure is called a compound predicate in grammar terms):
Pattern for compound predicate (one subject, two verbs):
- Subject + \(\mathrm{verb_1}\) + and + \(\mathrm{verb_2}\) (no comma)
- Example: "He published poetry and began touring"
- Subject: He
- Verb\(\mathrm{_1}\): published poetry
- Verb\(\mathrm{_2}\): began touring
- No comma needed
Compare to joining two complete thoughts (two subjects, two verbs):
- Subject\(\mathrm{_1}\) + \(\mathrm{verb_1}\), and + Subject\(\mathrm{_2}\) + \(\mathrm{verb_2}\) (comma needed)
- Example: "He published poetry, and he began touring"
- First complete thought: He published poetry
- Second complete thought: he began touring
- Comma needed before "and"
In our question:
- "when he published his first collection of poetry and began touring"
- One subject (he) performs two actions
- Connected with "and"
- No comma needed
Key distinction: The comma rule changes based on whether you're connecting just verbs (no comma) or complete thoughts (comma needed).
poetry that
✗ Incorrect
- This makes "that began touring the country" describe the poetry
- But poetry doesn't tour - people do!
- Creates an illogical meaning that misrepresents what the sentence is saying
poetry, that
✗ Incorrect
- Has the same logical problem as Choice A (makes touring describe poetry)
- Also adds an incorrect comma before "that"
- Creates both a meaning error and a punctuation error
poetry and
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.
poetry, and
✗ Incorrect
- The word "and" is correct for connecting the two actions
- But the comma is incorrect
- When one subject performs two actions (called a compound predicate), you don't use a comma before "and"
- Commas before "and" are only needed when connecting two complete thoughts with separate subjects and verbs