Early scholars believed that the massive stone formations at the site were natural geological features shaped by wind and ______...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
Early scholars believed that the massive stone formations at the site were natural geological features shaped by wind and ______ systematic excavations have revealed deliberate construction patterns including precisely aligned foundations and evidence of ancient tools.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
erosion; instead,
erosion, instead;
erosion instead,
erosion, instead,
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
Early scholars believed
that the massive stone formations at the site
were natural geological features
shaped by wind and erosion [?punctuation] instead [?punctuation]
systematic excavations have revealed deliberate construction patterns
including precisely aligned foundations
and evidence of ancient tools.
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start reading from the beginning:
Early scholars believed that the massive stone formations at the site were natural geological features shaped by wind and erosion.
So the first part tells us:
- Early scholars had a belief about some stone formations at a site
- They thought these formations were natural - just geological features
- Shaped by natural forces: wind and erosion
This is where we have the blank with "instead."
Let's look at the choices:
- All include "erosion" and "instead"
- They differ in punctuation: where the semicolon and commas go
To see what punctuation works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The sentence continues: "systematic excavations have revealed deliberate construction patterns including precisely aligned foundations and evidence of ancient tools."
Now let's understand what this second part means:
- "Systematic excavations" - careful, organized digging and study
- "Have revealed deliberate construction patterns" - showed that these formations were actually built on purpose, not natural
- Including precisely aligned foundations (structures built with careful planning)
- And evidence of ancient tools (proof that humans made them)
So the complete picture is:
- Early scholars thought: natural formations
- BUT excavations showed: actually built by humans - deliberate construction
The word "instead" is showing this contrast - the second finding contradicts and replaces the first belief.
What do we notice about the structure here?
Let me look at both parts:
- "Early scholars believed that the massive stone formations at the site were natural geological features shaped by wind and erosion"
- This is a complete thought that could stand alone as a sentence
- It has a subject (Early scholars) and verb (believed) and expresses a complete idea
- "systematic excavations have revealed deliberate construction patterns including precisely aligned foundations and evidence of ancient tools"
- This is also a complete thought that could stand alone
- It has a subject (systematic excavations) and verb (have revealed) and expresses a complete idea
So we have two complete thoughts that need to be properly connected, with "instead" as the transition word showing contrast between them.
When we connect two complete thoughts using a transitional word like "instead," we need:
- A semicolon BEFORE the transition word
- A comma AFTER the transition word
The pattern is: [complete thought]; transition, [complete thought]
So the correct answer is Choice A: erosion; instead,
Grammar Concept Applied
Connecting Two Complete Thoughts with Transitional Words
When you want to connect two complete thoughts (statements that could stand alone as sentences, called independent clauses in grammar terms) using a transitional word that shows their relationship, you need specific punctuation:
The Pattern:
- Semicolon before the transition word
- Comma after the transition word
Common transitional words that follow this pattern:
- instead, however, therefore, moreover, furthermore, consequently, nevertheless
Example:
- Complete thought 1: The experiment failed to produce results
- Complete thought 2: The researchers learned valuable lessons
- Connected properly: The experiment failed to produce results; however, the researchers learned valuable lessons.
Why this punctuation?
- The semicolon acts like a period - it's strong enough to separate two complete thoughts
- The comma after the transition helps set off the transitional word and makes the sentence flow more naturally
In our question:
- Complete thought 1: Early scholars believed that the massive stone formations at the site were natural geological features shaped by wind and erosion
- Complete thought 2: systematic excavations have revealed deliberate construction patterns
- Connected properly: ...shaped by wind and erosion; instead, systematic excavations have revealed...
This creates a clear, properly punctuated sentence that shows the contrast between the two ideas.
erosion; instead,
erosion, instead;
erosion instead,
erosion, instead,