Ecologists studying territorial behavior have explained why reintroduced wolf packs in the northern wilderness thrived while those in the southern...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
Ecologists studying territorial behavior have explained why reintroduced wolf packs in the northern wilderness thrived while those in the southern region _____ the northern territory provided abundant elk populations and minimal human development, whereas the southern area had been fragmented by highways and offered limited prey availability.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
struggled
struggled:
struggled,
struggled while
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- Ecologists studying territorial behavior
- have explained
- why reintroduced wolf packs in the northern wilderness thrived
- while those in the southern region struggled [?]
- the northern territory provided abundant elk populations
- and minimal human development,
- whereas the southern area had been fragmented by highways
- and offered limited prey availability.
- the northern territory provided abundant elk populations
- have explained
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start from the beginning:
'Ecologists studying territorial behavior have explained why reintroduced wolf packs in the northern wilderness thrived while those in the southern region struggled'
So we have scientists who study how animals claim and defend territories, and they've figured out why:
- Some reintroduced wolves (the ones in the northern wilderness) - thrived
- Other reintroduced wolves (those in the southern region) - struggled
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- Choice A: no punctuation
- Choice B: a colon
- Choice C: a comma
- Choice D: adds the word 'while'
To see what punctuation works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
'the northern territory provided abundant elk populations and minimal human development, whereas the southern area had been fragmented by highways and offered limited prey availability.'
Now let's really understand what this is telling us:
- 'The northern territory provided abundant elk populations and minimal human development'
- The northern area had lots of elk (which wolves hunt for food)
- And it had very little human development (so wolves weren't disturbed)
- 'Whereas the southern area had been fragmented by highways and offered limited prey availability'
- The southern area had been broken up by highways (disrupting wolf territory)
- And it didn't have much prey for wolves to hunt
So the complete picture is:
- The first part says ecologists explained why some wolves thrived and others struggled
- The second part GIVES THAT EXPLANATION - it tells us the actual reasons
What do we notice about the structure here?
- Both parts are complete thoughts that could stand alone as sentences:
- 'Ecologists have explained why...' = complete thought
- 'The northern territory provided... whereas the southern area...' = complete thought
- The second part directly explains what the first part mentioned
- First part: 'ecologists explained why...'
- Second part: here's that explanation - the reasons why
When you have two complete thoughts and the second one explains or provides details about the first, you need a colon to connect them.
So we need: struggled:
The correct answer is Choice B.
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Using Colons to Connect Complete Thoughts When the Second Explains the First
When you have two complete thoughts (called independent clauses in grammar terms) and the second one explains, elaborates on, or provides specific details about the first, use a colon to connect them:
Pattern:
- Complete thought + colon + explanation/elaboration
Example 1:
- Statement: The experiment failed for a clear reason
- With explanation added: The experiment failed for a clear reason: the temperature controls malfunctioned during the critical phase
- First part = complete thought stating something happened
- Colon signals 'here comes the explanation'
- Second part = complete thought giving that explanation
Example 2:
- Statement: The athletes understood why they lost the championship
- With explanation added: The athletes understood why they lost the championship: their training regimen had focused on speed while their opponents had emphasized endurance
- First part = complete thought saying they understood
- Colon signals 'here's what they understood'
- Second part = complete thought providing those reasons
In our question:
- First part: 'Ecologists have explained why reintroduced wolf packs in the northern wilderness thrived while those in the southern region struggled'
- Complete thought: says ecologists explained something
- Colon: signals 'here's that explanation'
- Second part: 'the northern territory provided abundant elk populations and minimal human development, whereas the southern area had been fragmented by highways and offered limited prey availability'
- Complete thought: gives the actual reasons (good conditions vs. bad conditions)
The colon bridges these two complete thoughts by showing that the second directly explains or elaborates on the first.
struggled
✗ Incorrect
- Creates a run-on sentence by placing two complete independent clauses directly next to each other
- Two complete thoughts cannot simply run together without punctuation or a connecting word
- The reader would be confused about where one idea ends and the next begins
struggled:
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.
struggled,
✗ Incorrect
- Creates a comma splice
- A comma alone cannot join two complete independent clauses
- While commas serve many purposes, connecting two complete thoughts requires stronger punctuation (semicolon or colon) or a comma plus a coordinating conjunction
struggled while
✗ Incorrect
- Creates a logical problem: 'struggled while the northern territory provided abundant elk populations' suggests the wolves struggled during the time the north had elk, which doesn't make sense
- The northern territory having resources isn't a time period - it's a contrasting condition
- Also creates structural awkwardness with 'whereas the southern area...' which would lack proper connection