Excavations at the ancient settlement revealed imported pottery and exotic spices, suggesting active trade connections with distant regions. These fin...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
Excavations at the ancient settlement revealed imported pottery and exotic spices, suggesting active trade connections with distant regions. These findings seem ______ the artifacts could have been acquired through indirect exchange networks rather than direct contact with foreign merchants.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
definitive; though,
definitive, though
definitive, though;
definitive, though,
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
Sentence 1:
- Excavations at the ancient settlement
- revealed imported pottery and exotic spices, suggesting active trade connections with distant regions.
Sentence 2:
- These findings
- seem definitive [?] though [?]
- the artifacts could have been acquired through indirect exchange networks rather than direct contact with foreign merchants.
Where [?] = the punctuation variation in our choices
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start with the first sentence:
- "Excavations at the ancient settlement revealed imported pottery and exotic spices"
- Archaeologists dug up a site and found fancy pottery and spices from far away
- "suggesting active trade connections with distant regions"
- These discoveries hint that this settlement was trading with far-off places
Now the second sentence begins: "These findings seem definitive..."
- The discoveries appear conclusive - they seem to prove the trade connections
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- They vary in where they place commas and semicolons around the word "though"
- We need to see how the rest of the sentence works to know what punctuation fits
Let's continue reading: "though the artifacts could have been acquired through indirect exchange networks rather than direct contact with foreign merchants."
Now let's understand what this complete second sentence is telling us:
- "These findings seem definitive, though"
- The discoveries seem conclusive, although...
- The word "though" here qualifies that first statement - it's adding a "but wait"
- "the artifacts could have been acquired through indirect exchange networks rather than direct contact with foreign merchants"
- Maybe these items came through a chain of middlemen
- Not necessarily from direct contact with the foreign merchants themselves
So the complete picture:
- The evidence seems solid, though [here's why it might not be]: the items could have come through indirect trading chains, not direct contact.
What do we notice about the structure here?
- We have TWO complete thoughts that could stand alone:
- "These findings seem definitive, though" = complete statement with a qualifier
- "the artifacts could have been acquired through indirect exchange networks..." = complete explanation
- The word "though" is attached to the first statement as a qualifier
- It needs a comma BEFORE it to set it off: "definitive, though"
- These two complete thoughts need strong punctuation between them
- A semicolon AFTER "though" properly separates the two independent parts
So we need: definitive, though;
The correct answer is Choice C.
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Using Semicolons to Separate Complete Thoughts with a Transitional Qualifier
When you have a complete statement followed by a qualifying word like "though," which is then followed by another complete thought that explains or contrasts, you need specific punctuation:
The Pattern:
[Complete thought], [qualifier]; [complete thought]
- Comma before the qualifier (sets it off from the first statement)
- Semicolon after the qualifier (properly separates two complete thoughts)
Example 1:
- The experiment seemed successful, though, the results couldn't be replicated.
- The experiment seemed successful, though; the results couldn't be replicated.
Example 2:
- The theory appears sound; though, further testing is needed.
- The theory appears sound, though; further testing is needed.
In our question:
- "These findings seem definitive, though" = complete thought with qualifier
- "the artifacts could have been acquired..." = complete thought explaining the qualification
- These need: comma before "though" (to set it off) + semicolon after "though" (to separate the two complete thoughts)
- Result: "These findings seem definitive, though; the artifacts could have been acquired..."
This is different from using "though" at the beginning of a sentence (where it would act as a subordinating conjunction like "although"), or in the middle without separating two complete thoughts. Here, "though" serves as a transitional qualifier between two independent clauses (complete thoughts that could stand alone as sentences), which requires the semicolon separation.
definitive; though,
✗ Incorrect
- This puts the semicolon before "though" and treats "though" as starting the second statement (like "however")
- But "though" works better as a qualifier attached to the first statement, not as an introduction to the second
- This creates an awkward reading that doesn't match the logical flow of the sentence
definitive, though
✗ Incorrect
- This has no punctuation after "though"
- We have two complete thoughts here that need to be properly separated
- Without a semicolon after "though," this creates a run-on sentence where two independent clauses run together incorrectly
definitive, though;
✓ Correct
- Correct as explained in the solution above.
definitive, though,
✗ Incorrect
- This uses only commas around "though"
- When you have two complete thoughts (independent clauses), you can't connect them with just commas
- This creates a comma splice - a grammatical error where commas are used to join independent clauses without proper connecting punctuation