In 1937, Chinese American screen actor Anna May Wong, who had portrayed numerous villains and secondary characters but never a...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
In 1937, Chinese American screen actor Anna May Wong, who had portrayed numerous villains and secondary characters but never a heroine, finally got a starring role in Paramount Pictures' Daughter of Shanghai, a film that _______ 'expanded the range of possibilities for Asian images on screen.'
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
critic, Stina Chyn, claims
critic, Stina Chyn, claims,
critic Stina Chyn claims
critic Stina Chyn, claims,
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- In 1937,
- Chinese American screen actor Anna May Wong,
- who had portrayed numerous villains and secondary characters
- but never a heroine,
- who had portrayed numerous villains and secondary characters
- finally got a starring role
- in Paramount Pictures' Daughter of Shanghai,
- a film that [critic (?) Stina Chyn (?) claims (?)]
- 'expanded the range of possibilities for Asian images on screen.'
- a film that [critic (?) Stina Chyn (?) claims (?)]
- in Paramount Pictures' Daughter of Shanghai,
- Chinese American screen actor Anna May Wong,
Understanding the Meaning
This sentence is telling us about Anna May Wong's career breakthrough:
- In 1937, she finally got a starring role
- After having played only villains and secondary characters before
- Never a heroine until this point
- The starring role was in a film called Daughter of Shanghai
Now we get to the blank - the sentence describes this film as:
- "a film that _____ 'expanded the range of possibilities for Asian images on screen.'"
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- A. critic, Stina Chyn, claims
- B. critic, Stina Chyn, claims,
- C. critic Stina Chyn claims
- D. critic Stina Chyn, claims,
The choices show different comma placements. To see what works here, let's understand what this phrase is doing!
The structure is:
- "a film that critic Stina Chyn claims [something]"
- The sentence is telling us what a specific critic says about the film
Now let's understand the grammatical structure here:
- "critic Stina Chyn claims"
- "critic" = a title or role
- "Stina Chyn" = the specific name identifying which critic
- "claims" = the verb (what this person does)
What do we notice about this structure?
- This follows the pattern: [title] + [name] + [verb]
- Like "President Lincoln signed" or "Dr. Smith believes"
- The name "Stina Chyn" is ESSENTIAL to identifying which critic
- It's not extra information being added
- It's the necessary identification of who this critic is
- When a name directly follows a title as essential identification,
- We DON'T use commas to separate them
- They flow together: "critic Stina Chyn"
- Also, no comma should come after "claims"
- Because "claims" introduces what the critic said (the quote that follows)
- We don't separate the verb from what it introduces
So we need: critic Stina Chyn claims (with no commas at all)
The correct answer is Choice C.
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Using Commas with Titles and Names: Essential vs. Non-Essential Identification
When a name directly follows a title or role and is essential to identifying the specific person, we don't use commas:
Pattern: [Title] + [Name] + [Verb] = NO commas
- Example 1: President Lincoln signed the proclamation
- "President" = title
- "Lincoln" = essential name identifying which president
- No commas separate them
- Example 2: Dr. Smith recommends daily exercise
- "Dr." = title
- "Smith" = essential name identifying which doctor
- No commas separate them
- Example 3: critic Stina Chyn claims the film expanded possibilities
- "critic" = title/role
- "Stina Chyn" = essential name identifying which critic
- No commas separate them
This is different from non-essential identification:
When the person is already fully identified and you're adding the name as extra information, you DO use commas (this is called an appositive in grammar terms):
- Example: The president, Abraham Lincoln, signed the proclamation
- "The president" = already fully identifies the person
- "Abraham Lincoln" = additional, non-essential information
- Commas set off the extra information
In our question:
- "critic Stina Chyn" uses the name as essential identification
- The name isn't extra - it's necessary to know which critic
- Therefore: no commas
critic, Stina Chyn, claims
(critic, Stina Chyn, claims):
✗ Incorrect
- The commas around "Stina Chyn" incorrectly treat the name as non-essential, extra information
- This would suggest we're saying "the critic (oh, by the way, her name is Stina Chyn) claims"
- But the name is essential to identifying which critic - it's not bonus information
- The commas create incorrect separation in a [title] + [name] structure
critic, Stina Chyn, claims,
(critic, Stina Chyn, claims,):
✗ Incorrect
- Has the same problem as Choice A with the commas around "Stina Chyn"
- PLUS adds an unnecessary comma after "claims"
- The comma after "claims" incorrectly separates the verb from the quote it introduces
- Creates two separate punctuation errors
critic Stina Chyn claims
✓ Correct
- Correct as explained in the solution above.
critic Stina Chyn, claims,
(critic Stina Chyn, claims,):
✗ Incorrect
- The comma after "Chyn" awkwardly separates the subject from its verb
- Makes it read as if we're pausing between the person's name and the action they're taking
- Also includes the unnecessary comma after "claims"
- While it correctly has no comma after "critic," it creates separation errors elsewhere