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In 1937, Chinese American screen actor Anna May Wong, who had portrayed numerous villains and secondary characters but never a heroine, finally got a starring role in Paramount Pictures' Daughter of Shanghai, a film that _______ 'expanded the range of possibilities for Asian images on screen.'

Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?

A

critic, Stina Chyn, claims

B

critic, Stina Chyn, claims,

C

critic Stina Chyn claims

D

critic Stina Chyn, claims,

Solution

Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!

Sentence Structure

  • In 1937,
    • Chinese American screen actor Anna May Wong,
      • who had portrayed numerous villains and secondary characters
        • but never a heroine,
    • finally got a starring role
      • in Paramount Pictures' Daughter of Shanghai,
        • a film that [critic (?) Stina Chyn (?) claims (?)]
          • 'expanded the range of possibilities for Asian images on screen.'

Understanding the Meaning

This sentence is telling us about Anna May Wong's career breakthrough:

  • In 1937, she finally got a starring role
    • After having played only villains and secondary characters before
    • Never a heroine until this point
  • The starring role was in a film called Daughter of Shanghai

Now we get to the blank - the sentence describes this film as:

  • "a film that _____ 'expanded the range of possibilities for Asian images on screen.'"

This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:

  • A. critic, Stina Chyn, claims
  • B. critic, Stina Chyn, claims,
  • C. critic Stina Chyn claims
  • D. critic Stina Chyn, claims,

The choices show different comma placements. To see what works here, let's understand what this phrase is doing!

The structure is:

  • "a film that critic Stina Chyn claims [something]"
  • The sentence is telling us what a specific critic says about the film

Now let's understand the grammatical structure here:

  • "critic Stina Chyn claims"
    • "critic" = a title or role
    • "Stina Chyn" = the specific name identifying which critic
    • "claims" = the verb (what this person does)

What do we notice about this structure?

  • This follows the pattern: [title] + [name] + [verb]
    • Like "President Lincoln signed" or "Dr. Smith believes"
  • The name "Stina Chyn" is ESSENTIAL to identifying which critic
    • It's not extra information being added
    • It's the necessary identification of who this critic is
  • When a name directly follows a title as essential identification,
    • We DON'T use commas to separate them
    • They flow together: "critic Stina Chyn"
  • Also, no comma should come after "claims"
    • Because "claims" introduces what the critic said (the quote that follows)
    • We don't separate the verb from what it introduces

So we need: critic Stina Chyn claims (with no commas at all)

The correct answer is Choice C.


GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED

Using Commas with Titles and Names: Essential vs. Non-Essential Identification

When a name directly follows a title or role and is essential to identifying the specific person, we don't use commas:

Pattern: [Title] + [Name] + [Verb] = NO commas

  • Example 1: President Lincoln signed the proclamation
    • "President" = title
    • "Lincoln" = essential name identifying which president
    • No commas separate them
  • Example 2: Dr. Smith recommends daily exercise
    • "Dr." = title
    • "Smith" = essential name identifying which doctor
    • No commas separate them
  • Example 3: critic Stina Chyn claims the film expanded possibilities
    • "critic" = title/role
    • "Stina Chyn" = essential name identifying which critic
    • No commas separate them

This is different from non-essential identification:

When the person is already fully identified and you're adding the name as extra information, you DO use commas (this is called an appositive in grammar terms):

  • Example: The president, Abraham Lincoln, signed the proclamation
    • "The president" = already fully identifies the person
    • "Abraham Lincoln" = additional, non-essential information
    • Commas set off the extra information

In our question:

  • "critic Stina Chyn" uses the name as essential identification
  • The name isn't extra - it's necessary to know which critic
  • Therefore: no commas
Answer Choices Explained
A

critic, Stina Chyn, claims

(critic, Stina Chyn, claims):
✗ Incorrect

  • The commas around "Stina Chyn" incorrectly treat the name as non-essential, extra information
  • This would suggest we're saying "the critic (oh, by the way, her name is Stina Chyn) claims"
  • But the name is essential to identifying which critic - it's not bonus information
  • The commas create incorrect separation in a [title] + [name] structure
B

critic, Stina Chyn, claims,

(critic, Stina Chyn, claims,):
✗ Incorrect

  • Has the same problem as Choice A with the commas around "Stina Chyn"
  • PLUS adds an unnecessary comma after "claims"
  • The comma after "claims" incorrectly separates the verb from the quote it introduces
  • Creates two separate punctuation errors
C

critic Stina Chyn claims

✓ Correct

  • Correct as explained in the solution above.
D

critic Stina Chyn, claims,

(critic Stina Chyn, claims,):
✗ Incorrect

  • The comma after "Chyn" awkwardly separates the subject from its verb
  • Makes it read as if we're pausing between the person's name and the action they're taking
  • Also includes the unnecessary comma after "claims"
  • While it correctly has no comma after "critic," it creates separation errors elsewhere
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