In 1959, marine biologist Dr. Albert Jones founded the Underwater Adventure Seekers, a scuba diving ______ that is the oldest...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
In 1959, marine biologist Dr. Albert Jones founded the Underwater Adventure Seekers, a scuba diving ______ that is the oldest club for Black divers in the United States and that has helped thousands of diving enthusiasts become certified in the field.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
club
club,
club—
club, and
Sentence Structure
- In 1959,
- marine biologist Dr. Albert Jones founded the Underwater Adventure Seekers,
- a scuba diving club(?)
- that is the oldest club for Black divers in the United States
- and
- that has helped thousands of diving enthusiasts become certified in the field.
- a scuba diving club(?)
- marine biologist Dr. Albert Jones founded the Underwater Adventure Seekers,
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start reading from the beginning:
In 1959, marine biologist Dr. Albert Jones founded the Underwater Adventure Seekers
- This tells us when and how this organization was created
- Dr. Jones was the founder
Then we get a description:
- 'a scuba diving club'
- This tells us what the Underwater Adventure Seekers is - it's a club for scuba diving
This is where we have the blank.
Let's look at the choices:
- A gives us no punctuation after "club"
- B gives us a comma
- C gives us a dash
- D gives us a comma and the word "and"
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The sentence continues with two parts connected by "and":
- 'that is the oldest club for Black divers in the United States'
- This tells us something important about the club - it's the oldest of its kind
- 'and that has helped thousands of diving enthusiasts become certified in the field'
- This tells us another important thing about the club - what it has accomplished
Now, what do we notice about the structure here?
- We have the word "club"
- followed immediately by two descriptive clauses that both start with "that"
- These clauses are telling us essential information about which club we're talking about:
- It's the oldest club for Black divers
- It has helped thousands get certified
- These "that" clauses need to flow directly from the word "club" because they're giving us the defining characteristics of this specific club
- The two "that" clauses are already connected to each other with "and"
So we need no punctuation between "club" and "that."
The correct answer is Choice A.
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Connecting Essential Descriptive Clauses to Nouns
When you have a clause beginning with "that" which provides essential, defining information about a noun, it connects directly to that noun without any punctuation. These are called restrictive relative clauses in grammar terms - the information restricts or narrows down which specific thing you're talking about.
Pattern:
- Noun + that + essential information = NO punctuation
- Example: "The book that changed my life is out of print"
- "that changed my life" tells us which specific book - it's essential information
- No comma between "book" and "that"
- Even with multiple "that" clauses connected by "and":
- Example: "She visited the museum that houses ancient artifacts and that offers free tours"
- Both clauses define which museum
- No punctuation after "museum"
In our question:
- "a scuba diving club that is the oldest club for Black divers and that has helped thousands"
- Both "that" clauses give us essential information about this specific club
- They connect directly to "club" with no punctuation
Contrast with non-essential information:
- If the information is extra/optional (not essential for identifying which one), you DO use commas
- These clauses begin with "which" and are called non-restrictive
- Example: "The club, which was founded in 1959, still operates today"
club
✓ Correct
- Correct as explained in the solution above.
club,
✗ Incorrect
- The comma incorrectly separates "club" from the clauses that describe it
- When a "that" clause gives essential, defining information about a noun, it should connect directly without punctuation
- The information about this being the oldest club and helping thousands is essential to understanding which specific club we're discussing
club—
✗ Incorrect
- The dash creates an incorrect break between the noun and its descriptive clauses
- Dashes are used for parenthetical information or emphasis, but these "that" clauses are providing essential defining details
- This punctuation suggests the information is extra or optional, when it's actually core to identifying the club
club, and
✗ Incorrect
- This would create a confusing structure because there's already an "and" connecting the two "that" clauses later in the sentence
- The comma plus "and" suggests we're listing separate items, but "that is the oldest club..." is not an independent element - it's a dependent clause that must attach directly to "club"
- This creates redundancy and grammatical confusion