In 2018, a team of researchers led by Dr. Caitlin Whalen compiled every available measurement of ocean mixing rates from...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
In 2018, a team of researchers led by Dr. Caitlin Whalen compiled every available measurement of ocean mixing rates from the past two decades. With this novel data set, the team was able to determine how current-driven mixing varies across ______ and what impact it has on the distribution of heat and nutrients in the ocean.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
regions,
regions:
regions;
regions
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- In 2018,
- a team of researchers
- led by Dr. Caitlin Whalen
- compiled every available measurement
- of ocean mixing rates
- from the past two decades.
- a team of researchers
- With this novel data set,
- the team
- was able to determine
- how current-driven mixing varies across regions [?]
- and
- what impact it has
- on the distribution of heat and nutrients in the ocean.
- was able to determine
- the team
Understanding the Meaning
The first sentence sets up the context:
- In 2018, a team led by Dr. Whalen compiled measurements
- specifically measurements of ocean mixing rates
- from the past two decades
Now the second sentence tells us what they did with this data:
- With this novel data set, the team was able to determine...
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- regions, (with comma)
- regions: (with colon)
- regions; (with semicolon)
- regions (with no punctuation)
So we're deciding what punctuation, if any, should come after "regions."
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The team was able to determine TWO things:
- First: "how current-driven mixing varies across regions"
- This is asking about variation - how does the mixing change from place to place?
- Second: "what impact it has on the distribution of heat and nutrients in the ocean"
- This is asking about the effect - what does this mixing actually do?
These two parts are connected by "and."
What do we notice about the structure here?
- The verb "determine" is followed by two parallel questions
- Both are telling us what the team figured out
- Both serve the same grammatical role - they're objects of "determine"
- These two parallel elements are joined by "and"
- When we connect two parallel elements with "and," we don't put punctuation before the "and" (unless we have three or more items in a series)
- The structure is: determine X and Y (no punctuation needed)
So we need no punctuation after "regions." The correct answer is Choice D.
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Connecting Parallel Elements with Coordinating Conjunctions
When two parallel grammatical elements (things serving the same function in a sentence) are joined by a coordinating conjunction like "and," we typically don't use punctuation before the conjunction:
Pattern: Verb + Object 1 and Object 2 (no punctuation)
Examples:
- She enjoys reading and writing.
- "reading" and "writing" are parallel objects of "enjoys"
- No punctuation before "and"
- The study examined how plants grow in shade and what nutrients they need.
- "how plants grow in shade" and "what nutrients they need" are parallel noun clauses (called indirect questions in grammar terms)
- Both are objects of "examined"
- No punctuation before "and"
In our sentence:
- "determine how current-driven mixing varies across regions and what impact it has..."
- The two noun clauses are compound objects of "determine"
- They're parallel elements joined by "and"
- No punctuation is needed
Important exception: When you have THREE or more parallel elements (a series), you do use commas: "She enjoys reading, writing, and painting."
regions,
✗ Incorrect
- Creates an error by placing a comma before "and" when connecting only two parallel elements
- A comma before "and" is used when joining three or more items in a series, or when connecting two complete thoughts that could stand alone as sentences
- Here we have two parallel noun clauses (not independent clauses) serving as compound objects, so no comma is appropriate
regions:
✗ Incorrect
- Creates an error by using a colon, which would signal that what follows explains or elaborates on "regions"
- The phrase "what impact it has..." is not explaining "regions" - it's a separate parallel element telling us another thing the team determined
- Colons introduce explanations, lists, or elaborations, which isn't the relationship here
regions;
✗ Incorrect
- Creates an error by using a semicolon, which separates independent clauses or items in a complex series
- "How current-driven mixing varies across regions" cannot stand alone as a complete sentence, so a semicolon is inappropriate
- The semicolon is far too strong a separator for this relationship
regions
✓ Correct
- Correct as explained in the solution above.