In the canon of North African literature, Moroccan author Driss Chraïbi's 1954 novel The Simple Past (Le Passé simple) looms...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
In the canon of North African literature, Moroccan author Driss Chraïbi's 1954 novel The Simple Past (Le Passé simple) looms large. A coming-of-age story, a social meditation, and a sober gaze into the dark maw of French colonialism, ______ interrogates systemic power with memorable intensity.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
Morocco gained its independence two years before the publication of Chraïbi's debut novel, which
Chraïbi's debut novel, published two years before Morocco gained its independence,
Chraïbi wrote a debut novel that, published two years before Morocco gained its independence,
published two years before Morocco gained its independence, Chraïbi wrote a debut novel that
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- In the canon of North African literature,
- Moroccan author Driss Chraïbi's 1954 novel The Simple Past (Le Passé simple)
- looms large.
- Moroccan author Driss Chraïbi's 1954 novel The Simple Past (Le Passé simple)
- A coming-of-age story,
- a social meditation,
- and a sober gaze into the dark maw of French colonialism,
- ______ [?]
- interrogates systemic power with memorable intensity.
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start with the first sentence:
- 'In the canon of North African literature, Moroccan author Driss Chraïbi's 1954 novel The Simple Past (Le Passé simple) looms large.'
- This tells us about a specific novel that's important in North African literature
- The novel is by Driss Chraïbi, published in 1954
- 'Looms large' means it's very significant and influential
Now the second sentence begins with three descriptive phrases:
- 'A coming-of-age story, a social meditation, and a sober gaze into the dark maw of French colonialism'
- These are three ways of describing something
- They're separated by commas in a list
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- Choice A starts with "Morocco gained its independence..."
- Choice B starts with "Chraïbi's debut novel..."
- Choice C starts with "Chraïbi wrote a debut novel..."
- Choice D starts with "published two years before..."
To see what works here, let's read what comes after the blank:
- 'interrogates systemic power with memorable intensity.'
Now let's think about what this sentence is telling us:
The three descriptive phrases at the beginning describe something:
- 'A coming-of-age story' - this describes a book or novel
- 'a social meditation' - this also describes a book or novel
- 'a sober gaze into the dark maw of French colonialism' - again, describing a book
What do we notice about the structure here?
When we have descriptive phrases like these at the start of a sentence, set off by commas, they need to describe whatever comes RIGHT AFTER them.
So what should come after these phrases?
- The thing being described - which is the novel
- NOT Morocco's independence (Choice A)
- NOT Chraïbi as a person (Choice C)
- The novel itself needs to be the subject
Also, "interrogates systemic power" needs a subject to perform that action:
- The novel is what interrogates systemic power
- So we need "the novel" to be positioned as the subject of "interrogates"
The correct answer is Choice B: "Chraïbi's debut novel, published two years before Morocco gained its independence,"
This works because:
- "Chraïbi's debut novel" comes right after the descriptive phrases, so those phrases correctly describe the novel
- "Chraïbi's debut novel" serves as the subject of "interrogates"
- The timing information (published two years before independence) is tucked in as an additional modifier
- The complete meaning flows naturally: The novel, described as a coming-of-age story and more, interrogates systemic power
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Placing Descriptive Phrases Next to What They Describe
When you begin a sentence with descriptive phrases (called appositives or modifying phrases in grammar terms) set off by commas, those phrases must describe whatever noun comes immediately after them. This is crucial for clear communication.
The Pattern:
- Descriptive phrase(s), [thing being described], rest of sentence
Example 1:
- ✓ Correct: "A talented musician, Sarah performs at venues across the city."
- "A talented musician" describes "Sarah" (which comes right after)
- ✗ Incorrect: "A talented musician, the venues across the city feature Sarah's performances."
- "A talented musician" seems to describe "the venues," which makes no sense
Example 2:
- ✓ Correct: "An innovative approach to urban planning, the proposal received widespread support."
- "An innovative approach" describes "the proposal"
- ✗ Incorrect: "An innovative approach to urban planning, city officials discussed the proposal."
- "An innovative approach" seems to describe "city officials," not the proposal
In this question:
- "A coming-of-age story, a social meditation, and a sober gaze into the dark maw of French colonialism" are descriptive phrases
- They need to describe the novel
- Therefore, "Chraïbi's debut novel" must come immediately after these phrases
- Choice B accomplishes this correctly
Morocco gained its independence two years before the publication of Chraïbi's debut novel, which
"Morocco gained its independence two years before the publication of Chraïbi's debut novel, which"
✗ Incorrect
- The descriptive phrases "A coming-of-age story, a social meditation, and a sober gaze" would appear to describe "Morocco gained its independence," which makes no sense—independence is not a coming-of-age story
- Creates a modifier placement error where the descriptive phrases don't logically connect to what follows them
- Shifts the focus away from the novel to Morocco's independence
Chraïbi's debut novel, published two years before Morocco gained its independence,
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.
Chraïbi wrote a debut novel that, published two years before Morocco gained its independence,
"Chraïbi wrote a debut novel that, published two years before Morocco gained its independence,"
✗ Incorrect
- The descriptive phrases "A coming-of-age story, a social meditation, and a sober gaze" would describe "Chraïbi" (the person), which is illogical—a person cannot be "a coming-of-age story"
- Creates a dangling modifier issue where the phrases at the beginning have nothing appropriate to describe
published two years before Morocco gained its independence, Chraïbi wrote a debut novel that
"published two years before Morocco gained its independence, Chraïbi wrote a debut novel that"
✗ Incorrect
- Similar to Choice C, the descriptive phrases at the beginning would incorrectly modify either the participial phrase "published..." or "Chraïbi" himself
- Neither of these makes logical sense—a person or a publishing action cannot be "a coming-of-age story"
- Creates a dangling modifier