The following text is adapted from Pam Muñoz Ryan's 2020 novel Mañanaland. In the village where Max lives, there is...
GMAT Craft and Structure : (Structure) Questions
The following text is adapted from Pam Muñoz Ryan's 2020 novel Mañanaland. In the village where Max lives, there is an old fortress called La Reina. Children in the village say that the fortress is haunted.
For as long as he could remember, Max had begged Papá [his father] to take him to see La Reina and the ruins up close. He'd be a hero among his friends if he was the first boy to cross the haunted gates! Just because Papá didn't believe in ghosts didn't mean they weren't there. Maybe this summer Papá would finally take him. He was almost twelve.
©2020 by Pam Muñoz Ryan
Which choice best describes the overall purpose of the text?
To portray how proud Max's father is of Max
To explain why Max doesn't want to grow up yet
To criticize Max for disliking summer
To show how much Max wants to visit La Reina
Step 1: Decode and Map the Passage
Part A: Create Passage Analysis Table
| Text from Passage | Analysis |
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| 'For as long as he could remember, Max had begged Papá [his father] to take him to see La Reina and the ruins up close.' |
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| 'He'd be a hero among his friends if he was the first boy to cross the haunted gates!' |
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| 'Just because Papá didn't believe in ghosts didn't mean they weren't there.' |
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| 'Maybe this summer Papá would finally take him.' |
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| 'He was almost twelve.' |
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Part B: Provide Passage Architecture & Core Elements
Main Point: The passage shows Max's intense, long-standing desire to visit the haunted fortress La Reina.
Argument Flow: The text opens by establishing Max's persistent desire to visit La Reina, then explains his motivation (becoming a hero among friends), acknowledges a difference in belief between him and his father about ghosts, and concludes with his current hope that this summer might finally be the time, given that he's almost twelve.
Step 2: Interpret the Question Precisely
What's being asked? The overall purpose of the entire text—what the passage as a whole is trying to accomplish or communicate.
What type of answer do we need? A purpose statement that captures the main function or goal of the passage.
Any limiting keywords? 'Overall purpose' tells us we need to consider the passage as a unified whole, not just individual parts.
Step 3: Prethink the Answer
- The correct answer should capture that this passage is fundamentally about Max's strong desire to visit La Reina
- Every detail we learned—his repeated begging, his dreams of being a hero, his hope for this summer—all points to showing us how much he wants to go there
- The passage isn't really about his father's pride, growing up, or disliking summer
- It's about showcasing the intensity of Max's wish to visit this fortress
To portray how proud Max's father is of Max
- This choice focuses on the father's pride in Max
- The passage doesn't actually show Papá being proud—if anything, it shows him being reluctant since Max has been begging 'for as long as he could remember'
- The passage is centered on Max's feelings and desires, not his father's emotions
To explain why Max doesn't want to grow up yet
- This suggests Max doesn't want to grow up, but the passage shows the opposite
- Max is looking forward to being almost twelve because he thinks it might help convince his father
- His age is presented as a reason why this summer might work, not as something he's reluctant about
To criticize Max for disliking summer
- The passage never criticizes Max or suggests he dislikes summer
- In fact, Max is hopeful about summer—he thinks 'maybe this summer' his father will take him
- There's no negative judgment of Max's character anywhere in the text
To show how much Max wants to visit La Reina
- This perfectly captures what the entire passage demonstrates
- Every detail supports showing Max's intense desire: his persistent begging, his dream of being a hero, his current hope for this summer
- The passage structure builds around this central want, making it the clear overall purpose