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Incorporating renewable energy systems from the initial planning stage—that is, integrating solar panels and wind turbines into the architectural design— ______

Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?

A

modern buildings can achieve unprecedented levels of energy independence.

B

modern architects can help their buildings achieve unprecedented energy independence.

C

unprecedented energy independence becomes achievable for modern buildings.

D

the achievement of unprecedented energy independence is possible in modern buildings.

Solution

Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!

Sentence Structure

  • Incorporating renewable energy systems from the initial planning stage
  • —that is,
  • integrating solar panels and wind turbines
  • into the architectural design—
  • [?] can/becomes/is [something about achieving unprecedented energy independence]

Understanding the Meaning

The sentence opens with a descriptive phrase:

  • "Incorporating renewable energy systems from the initial planning stage"

Then it clarifies what this means:

  • "that is, integrating solar panels and wind turbines into the architectural design"

So we understand that this opening phrase is about actions—

  • incorporating systems
  • integrating solar panels and wind turbines into design

Now here's where we need to fill in the blank. The question is:
WHO or WHAT comes next in the sentence?

Let's look at our choices:

  • A: modern buildings
  • B: modern architects
  • C: unprecedented energy independence
  • D: the achievement of unprecedented energy independence

Here's the key question we need to ask:
Who can actually DO the actions described in that opening phrase?

  • "Incorporating renewable energy systems from the planning stage"
  • "Integrating solar panels and wind turbines into architectural design"

Let's think about each option:

  • Can buildings incorporate and integrate these things?
    • No—buildings are what get built. They're the result, not the designers.
    • Buildings don't design themselves or make planning decisions.
  • Can architects incorporate and integrate these things?
    • YES! Architects are exactly the people who do planning and design work.
    • They're the ones who make decisions about what goes into a building design.
  • Can "energy independence" or "the achievement" incorporate and integrate?
    • No—these are outcomes or abstract concepts, not actors.
    • Outcomes don't perform actions.

What do we notice about the structure here?

  • The opening phrase describes actions that someone is performing
  • Whatever subject comes right after this phrase must be the one DOING those actions
  • This is a fundamental principle: the subject must logically match what the opening phrase describes

So we need Choice B: modern architects—because only architects can logically perform the actions of incorporating and integrating design elements.

Let's read the complete sentence:

  • "Incorporating renewable energy systems from the initial planning stage—that is, integrating solar panels and wind turbines into the architectural design—modern architects can help their buildings achieve unprecedented energy independence."

Perfect! The logic flows:

  • Architects take these design actions (incorporating, integrating)
  • As a result, their buildings achieve energy independence
  • The actors (architects) match the actions (design decisions)

GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED

Matching Opening Phrases with Logical Subjects

When a sentence begins with a descriptive phrase that describes an action (especially using -ing verb forms like "incorporating" or "integrating"), the subject that immediately follows must be the one who can logically perform that action. This is sometimes called avoiding a dangling or misplaced modifier in grammar terms.

The Pattern:

  • Opening action phrase: Walking down the street
  • Correct subject match: I noticed a new café
  • "I" can logically "walk down the street" ✓
  • Incorrect subject match: the café looked inviting
  • "The café" cannot "walk down the street" ✗

How this applies to our question:

  • Opening action phrase: Incorporating renewable energy systems...integrating solar panels and wind turbines into architectural design
  • Correct subject match: modern architects (can help their buildings...)
  • Architects can logically incorporate systems and integrate design elements ✓
  • Incorrect subject match: modern buildings (can achieve...)
  • Buildings cannot incorporate or integrate anything—they're the objects being designed ✗

The key principle: Always ask yourself, "Can this subject actually DO what the opening phrase describes?" If not, you have a mismatch that needs to be corrected.

Answer Choices Explained
A

modern buildings can achieve unprecedented levels of energy independence.

✗ Incorrect

  • This creates a mismatch between the opening phrase and the subject
  • It suggests that buildings themselves are "incorporating" and "integrating" the systems
  • But buildings can't perform design actions—they're passive objects that are designed BY someone
  • Buildings are the result of architectural decisions, not the decision-makers
B

modern architects can help their buildings achieve unprecedented energy independence.

✓ Correct

Correct as explained in the solution above.

C

unprecedented energy independence becomes achievable for modern buildings.

✗ Incorrect

  • This places an abstract concept (energy independence) as the subject
  • It illogically suggests that "energy independence" is doing the incorporating and integrating
  • An outcome or result cannot perform the design actions described in the opening
D

the achievement of unprecedented energy independence is possible in modern buildings.

✗ Incorrect

  • Similar error to Choice C—"the achievement" is an abstract noun phrase
  • It cannot logically perform the concrete actions of incorporating systems and integrating design elements
  • This is also wordier than necessary
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