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Influenced by shifting consumer preferences toward sustainability, _____

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Influenced by shifting consumer preferences toward sustainability, _____

Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?

A

major fashion retailers have begun sourcing fabrics from recycled materials and organic cotton.

B

the sourcing of fabrics from recycled materials and organic cotton has been, industry analysts note, adopted by major fashion retailers.

C

fabrics from recycled materials and organic cotton are now, according to industry analysts, what major fashion retailers source.

D

a 2024 industry report found that major fashion retailers now source fabrics from recycled materials and organic cotton.

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Sentence Structure

  • Influenced by shifting consumer preferences toward sustainability,
  • _____ [choices vary on what subject follows]

Understanding the Meaning

Let's start reading from the beginning:

'Influenced by shifting consumer preferences toward sustainability,'

This opening phrase is describing something. It tells us that something has been influenced – shaped or affected – by how consumers increasingly want sustainable products.

Now here's where we need to fill in the blank. The key question is: What has been influenced by these consumer preferences?

Let's look at our choices and see what would come right after this describing phrase:

  • Choice A: major fashion retailers
  • Choice B: the sourcing of fabrics
  • Choice C: fabrics from recycled materials and organic cotton
  • Choice D: a 2024 industry report

Here's what we need to understand: When you start a sentence with a describing phrase like this (ending with a comma), whatever comes immediately after that comma must be the thing being described.

So which of these can logically be 'influenced by consumer preferences'?

  • Major fashion retailers?
    • Yes – retailers are businesses that respond to what consumers want. They can definitely be influenced by consumer preferences.
  • The sourcing (an abstract action)?
    • This is awkward – the action of sourcing itself isn't influenced. Rather, the retailers are influenced to DO the sourcing.
  • Fabrics (physical materials)?
    • No – fabrics themselves can't be influenced. They're just materials.
  • A report (a document)?
    • No – a report isn't influenced by preferences. A report documents or finds things, but it's not what's being influenced.

What do we notice here?

  • The describing phrase 'Influenced by shifting consumer preferences' needs to connect logically to whatever comes right after the comma.
  • Only 'major fashion retailers' makes sense as something that can be influenced by what consumers want.

So we need Choice A.

Let's read the complete sentence to verify:

'Influenced by shifting consumer preferences toward sustainability, major fashion retailers have begun sourcing fabrics from recycled materials and organic cotton.'

This flows naturally:

  • Retailers were influenced by consumer preferences →
  • As a result, they began sourcing sustainable materials.

GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED

Matching Introductory Describing Phrases with What They Describe

When a sentence begins with a describing phrase (called a modifier in grammar terms) that ends with a comma, that phrase must logically describe the subject that comes immediately after the comma. The subject right after the comma must be the thing the modifier is talking about.

The Pattern:

  • Describing phrase, [subject being described] + rest of sentence
  • The subject right after the comma = what the describing phrase is about

Example 1:

  • Wrong: 'Exhausted from the long journey, the hotel bed looked inviting.'
  • 'Exhausted from the long journey' describes someone who is tired
  • But 'the hotel bed' comes after the comma
  • A bed can't be exhausted – this doesn't match!
  • Correct: 'Exhausted from the long journey, the travelers found the hotel bed inviting.'
  • 'Exhausted from the long journey' describes someone who is tired
  • 'The travelers' comes after the comma
  • Travelers CAN be exhausted – this matches!

Example 2:

  • Wrong: 'Built in 1850, tourists visit the historic mansion every day.'
  • 'Built in 1850' describes something that was constructed
  • But 'tourists' comes after the comma
  • Tourists weren't built in 1850 – this doesn't match!
  • Correct: 'Built in 1850, the historic mansion receives tourists every day.'
  • 'Built in 1850' describes something that was constructed
  • 'The historic mansion' comes after the comma
  • The mansion WAS built in 1850 – this matches!

In this question:

  • 'Influenced by shifting consumer preferences toward sustainability' describes something that was influenced
  • Only 'major fashion retailers' (Choice A) can logically be influenced by consumer preferences
  • Fabrics, sourcing actions, and reports cannot be influenced in this way
  • Choice A correctly places the logical subject right after the describing phrase
Answer Choices Explained
A

major fashion retailers have begun sourcing fabrics from recycled materials and organic cotton.

B

the sourcing of fabrics from recycled materials and organic cotton has been, industry analysts note, adopted by major fashion retailers.

✗ Incorrect

  • Places 'the sourcing' immediately after the describing phrase, suggesting that the abstract concept of 'sourcing' was influenced by consumer preferences
  • This is illogical – the action of sourcing itself isn't influenced; it's the retailers who are influenced to DO that sourcing
  • The passive construction 'has been adopted' is also unnecessarily wordy and awkward
C

fabrics from recycled materials and organic cotton are now, according to industry analysts, what major fashion retailers source.

✗ Incorrect

  • Places 'fabrics' immediately after the modifier, suggesting the materials themselves were influenced by consumer preferences
  • This makes no sense – fabrics are inanimate materials that can't be influenced by preferences
  • The construction is convoluted and doesn't create a logical connection
D

a 2024 industry report found that major fashion retailers now source fabrics from recycled materials and organic cotton.

✗ Incorrect

  • Places 'a 2024 industry report' right after the modifier, suggesting the report was influenced by consumer preferences
  • This is illogical – a report isn't influenced by preferences; it documents findings
  • The report is not what was influenced by consumer preferences; the retailers were
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