Joshua Hinson, director of the language revitalization program of the Chickasaw Nation in Oklahoma, helped produce the world's first Indigenous-langua...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
Joshua Hinson, director of the language revitalization program of the Chickasaw Nation in Oklahoma, helped produce the world's first Indigenous-language instructional app, Chickasaw ______ Chickasaw TV, in 2010; and a Rosetta Stone language course in Chickasaw, in 2015.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
Basic; in 2009, an online television network;
Basic; in 2009, an online television network,
Basic, in 2009; an online television network,
Basic, in 2009, an online television network,
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- Joshua Hinson,
- director of the language revitalization program
- of the Chickasaw Nation in Oklahoma,
- helped produce the world's first Indigenous-language instructional app,
- Chickasaw Basic [?] in 2009 [?] an online television network [?] Chickasaw TV,
- in 2010;
- and a Rosetta Stone language course in Chickasaw,
- in 2015.
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start from the beginning:
Joshua Hinson (who is the director of the language revitalization program of the Chickasaw Nation in Oklahoma) helped produce the world's first Indigenous-language instructional app.
Now the sentence continues to tell us what this app is, or rather what things he helped produce: "Chickasaw..."
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- They're asking us to decide between semicolons and commas
- Specifically: what punctuation goes after "Basic" and after "2009" and after "network"
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The sentence continues: "Chickasaw [Basic/timing info] [something about] an online television network, Chickasaw TV, in 2010; and a Rosetta Stone language course in Chickasaw, in 2015."
Now let's understand what this is telling us:
- This is listing THREE separate things Joshua Hinson helped produce:
- "Chickasaw Basic, in 2009"
- The name of the app with when it was created
- "An online television network, Chickasaw TV, in 2010"
- A television network, which is named "Chickasaw TV," created in 2010
- "A Rosetta Stone language course in Chickasaw, in 2015"
- A language course created in 2015
- "Chickasaw Basic, in 2009"
So we have a list of three achievements, each with its own timing details.
What do we notice about the structure here?
- Each item in this list contains its own commas within it:
- "Chickasaw Basic, in 2009" - has a comma
- "an online television network, Chickasaw TV, in 2010" - has commas
- "a Rosetta Stone language course in Chickasaw, in 2015" - has a comma
- When you have a list where the items themselves contain commas, you need SEMICOLONS to separate the major items
- This helps readers distinguish between commas that are part of an item's description and commas that separate different items
So we need: "Basic, in 2009; an online television network,"
The correct answer is Choice C.
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Using Semicolons in Complex Lists
When you're writing a list of items and those items themselves contain commas, you need to use semicolons to separate the major items in the list. This prevents confusion about which commas are doing which job - are they separating list items, or are they internal to each item?
Simple list (no internal commas):
- "The team included Maya, the captain; José, the goalkeeper; and Lin, the striker."
- Wait, this still uses semicolons! Let me reconsider.
Actually, let me show it this way:
Simple list:
- "He studied French, Spanish, and Italian."
- Items: French | Spanish | Italian
- Just commas work fine because items are simple
Complex list (items contain commas):
- "He visited Paris, France; Madrid, Spain; and Rome, Italy."
- Items: Paris, France | Madrid, Spain | Rome, Italy
- Each item has a comma within it (city, country)
- Semicolons separate the major items
In this question:
- "Chickasaw Basic, in 2009; an online television network, Chickasaw TV, in 2010; and a Rosetta Stone language course in Chickasaw, in 2015."
- Item 1: Chickasaw Basic, in 2009
- Item 2: an online television network, Chickasaw TV, in 2010
- Item 3: a Rosetta Stone language course in Chickasaw, in 2015
- Each item contains commas for internal details (timing, naming)
- Semicolons clearly separate where one achievement ends and the next begins
Basic; in 2009, an online television network;
✗ Incorrect
- This puts a semicolon immediately after "Basic," which separates it from "in 2009"
- But "Chickasaw Basic, in 2009" should stay together as ONE complete item in the list
- The timing detail "in 2009" belongs with "Chickasaw Basic," not separated by a semicolon
Basic; in 2009, an online television network,
✗ Incorrect
- Has the same problem as Choice A with the semicolon incorrectly placed after "Basic"
- Also uses only commas to separate the list items, which isn't strong enough when the items contain internal commas
- Readers would be confused about which commas are separating list items and which are internal details
Basic, in 2009; an online television network,
✓ Correct
- Correct as explained in the solution above.
Basic, in 2009, an online television network,
✗ Incorrect
- This correctly keeps "Basic, in 2009" together with a comma
- However, it only uses commas to separate all the items
- Since each list item contains internal commas, we need semicolons to separate the major items for clarity