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Known for her massive photorealistic paintings of African American figures floating or swimming in pools, Calida Garcia ________ was the logical choice to design the book cover for Ta-Nehisi Coates's The Water Dancer, a novel about an African American man who can travel great distances through water.

Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?

A

Rawles—

B

Rawles:

C

Rawles,

D

Rawles

Solution

Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!

Sentence Structure

  • Known for her massive photorealistic paintings
  • of African American figures floating or swimming in pools,
  • Calida Garcia Rawles [?]
  • was the logical choice to design the book cover
  • for Ta-Nehisi Coates's The Water Dancer,
  • a novel about an African American man
  • who can travel great distances through water.

Understanding the Meaning

Let's start reading from the beginning:

The sentence opens with a descriptive phrase:

  • "Known for her massive photorealistic paintings of African American figures floating or swimming in pools"
    • This describes someone's artistic style and what they're famous for
    • The paintings are photorealistic (look like photographs) and feature a specific subject: African American figures in water

Then we get the name: "Calida Garcia Rawles"

  • This is the artist being described

This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:

  • A: dash (—)
  • B: colon (:)
  • C: comma (,)
  • D: no punctuation

To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!

The sentence continues: "was the logical choice to design the book cover for Ta-Nehisi Coates's The Water Dancer"

  • So Calida Garcia Rawles "was the logical choice"
  • This is telling us what happened - she was selected for this project

Then we get more information: "a novel about an African American man who can travel great distances through water"

  • This describes what The Water Dancer is about
  • We can see why Rawles was a good choice - her artwork features people in water, and this novel is also about someone traveling through water

What do we notice about the structure here?

  • "Calida Garcia Rawles" is the subject of the sentence
    • It's the person we're making a statement about
  • "was" is the verb - the action word
    • It tells us what she was (the logical choice)
  • These two elements - the subject and its verb - need to flow together directly
    • The subject performs or is described by the verb
    • There's no reason to interrupt this natural connection
    • The complete thought is: "Calida Garcia Rawles was the logical choice"

So we need no punctuation after Rawles. The answer is D.

  • The subject flows directly to its verb: "Calida Garcia Rawles was..."
  • Any punctuation here would create an incorrect interruption between these two essential elements

Grammar Concept Applied

Keeping Subjects Connected to Their Verbs

When you have a sentence where the subject needs to connect to its verb, don't interrupt that connection with punctuation:

Pattern:

  • Opening modifier: Known for her paintings,
  • Subject: Calida Garcia Rawles
  • Verb (directly connected): was
  • Rest of sentence: the logical choice...

The opening modifier gets set off with a comma, BUT then the subject flows directly to its verb with no punctuation between them.

Why this matters:

  • The subject-verb relationship is the backbone of a sentence
  • When these elements are next to each other, they should connect smoothly
  • Putting punctuation between them (comma, dash, colon) disrupts the basic sentence structure

Another example:

  • INCORRECT: "The artist, was chosen for the project."
  • CORRECT: "The artist was chosen for the project."

In this question:

  • "Calida Garcia Rawles" = subject
  • "was" = verb
  • They must connect directly: "Calida Garcia Rawles was the logical choice"
  • No punctuation should interrupt this connection
Answer Choices Explained
A

Rawles—

✗ Incorrect

  • A dash is used to set off additional information or create emphasis for what follows
  • Using a dash here would incorrectly interrupt the flow between the subject "Calida Garcia Rawles" and its verb "was"
  • This creates an awkward and grammatically incorrect separation
B

Rawles:

✗ Incorrect

  • A colon is used to introduce something that follows - like a list, explanation, or elaboration
  • But "was the logical choice" isn't being introduced by the name; it's the verb that belongs with the subject
  • A colon makes no grammatical sense here and incorrectly separates the subject from its verb
C

Rawles,

✗ Incorrect

  • This creates a comma splice between the subject and verb
  • In Standard English, you should not separate a subject from its verb with a comma when they're directly adjacent
  • The sentence needs "Calida Garcia Rawles was" to flow together without interruption
D

Rawles

✓ Correct

Correct as explained in the solution above.

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