Known for her massive photorealistic paintings of African American figures floating or swimming in pools, Calida Garcia ________ was the...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
Known for her massive photorealistic paintings of African American figures floating or swimming in pools, Calida Garcia ________ was the logical choice to design the book cover for Ta-Nehisi Coates's The Water Dancer, a novel about an African American man who can travel great distances through water.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
Rawles—
Rawles:
Rawles,
Rawles
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- Known for her massive photorealistic paintings
- of African American figures floating or swimming in pools,
- Calida Garcia Rawles [?]
- was the logical choice to design the book cover
- for Ta-Nehisi Coates's The Water Dancer,
- a novel about an African American man
- who can travel great distances through water.
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start reading from the beginning:
The sentence opens with a descriptive phrase:
- "Known for her massive photorealistic paintings of African American figures floating or swimming in pools"
- This describes someone's artistic style and what they're famous for
- The paintings are photorealistic (look like photographs) and feature a specific subject: African American figures in water
Then we get the name: "Calida Garcia Rawles"
- This is the artist being described
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- A: dash (—)
- B: colon (:)
- C: comma (,)
- D: no punctuation
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The sentence continues: "was the logical choice to design the book cover for Ta-Nehisi Coates's The Water Dancer"
- So Calida Garcia Rawles "was the logical choice"
- This is telling us what happened - she was selected for this project
Then we get more information: "a novel about an African American man who can travel great distances through water"
- This describes what The Water Dancer is about
- We can see why Rawles was a good choice - her artwork features people in water, and this novel is also about someone traveling through water
What do we notice about the structure here?
- "Calida Garcia Rawles" is the subject of the sentence
- It's the person we're making a statement about
- "was" is the verb - the action word
- It tells us what she was (the logical choice)
- These two elements - the subject and its verb - need to flow together directly
- The subject performs or is described by the verb
- There's no reason to interrupt this natural connection
- The complete thought is: "Calida Garcia Rawles was the logical choice"
So we need no punctuation after Rawles. The answer is D.
- The subject flows directly to its verb: "Calida Garcia Rawles was..."
- Any punctuation here would create an incorrect interruption between these two essential elements
Grammar Concept Applied
Keeping Subjects Connected to Their Verbs
When you have a sentence where the subject needs to connect to its verb, don't interrupt that connection with punctuation:
Pattern:
- Opening modifier: Known for her paintings,
- Subject: Calida Garcia Rawles
- Verb (directly connected): was
- Rest of sentence: the logical choice...
The opening modifier gets set off with a comma, BUT then the subject flows directly to its verb with no punctuation between them.
Why this matters:
- The subject-verb relationship is the backbone of a sentence
- When these elements are next to each other, they should connect smoothly
- Putting punctuation between them (comma, dash, colon) disrupts the basic sentence structure
Another example:
- INCORRECT: "The artist, was chosen for the project."
- CORRECT: "The artist was chosen for the project."
In this question:
- "Calida Garcia Rawles" = subject
- "was" = verb
- They must connect directly: "Calida Garcia Rawles was the logical choice"
- No punctuation should interrupt this connection
Rawles—
✗ Incorrect
- A dash is used to set off additional information or create emphasis for what follows
- Using a dash here would incorrectly interrupt the flow between the subject "Calida Garcia Rawles" and its verb "was"
- This creates an awkward and grammatically incorrect separation
Rawles:
✗ Incorrect
- A colon is used to introduce something that follows - like a list, explanation, or elaboration
- But "was the logical choice" isn't being introduced by the name; it's the verb that belongs with the subject
- A colon makes no grammatical sense here and incorrectly separates the subject from its verb
Rawles,
✗ Incorrect
- This creates a comma splice between the subject and verb
- In Standard English, you should not separate a subject from its verb with a comma when they're directly adjacent
- The sentence needs "Calida Garcia Rawles was" to flow together without interruption
Rawles
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.