Louise Bennett (1919–2006), also known as 'Miss Lou,' was an influential Jamaican poet and folklorist. Her innovative poems ________ the...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
Louise Bennett (1919–2006), also known as 'Miss Lou,' was an influential Jamaican poet and folklorist. Her innovative poems ________ the use of Jamaican Creole (a spoken language) in literature.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
popularized;
popularized,
popularized
popularized:
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- Louise Bennett (1919–2006),
- also known as 'Miss Lou,'
- was an influential Jamaican poet and folklorist.
- Her innovative poems popularized [?] the use of Jamaican Creole
- (a spoken language)
Understanding the Meaning
The first sentence introduces us to Louise Bennett:
- A Jamaican poet and folklorist who lived from 1919 to 2006
- Also known by the nickname 'Miss Lou'
Now the second sentence tells us what her poems did:
- 'Her innovative poems popularized...'
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- All of them have the word "popularized"
- But they differ in what comes after: semicolon, comma, nothing, or colon
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence:
- '...the use of Jamaican Creole (a spoken language) in literature.'
So the complete sentence is saying:
- Her poems made something popular - they popularized something
- What did they popularize? The use of Jamaican Creole in literature
What do we notice about the structure here?
- We have a straightforward sentence pattern:
- Subject: "Her innovative poems"
- Verb: "popularized"
- Object: "the use of Jamaican Creole in literature"
- The verb "popularized" directly connects to its object
- "popularized what?" → "the use of Jamaican Creole"
- This is one continuous thought
- There's no reason to break this flow with punctuation
- The verb needs its object to complete the meaning
- They work together as a unit
So we need: Choice C - no punctuation after "popularized"
The sentence flows naturally: Her innovative poems popularized the use of Jamaican Creole in literature.
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Keeping Verbs and Their Objects Together
In a basic sentence pattern, the core elements (subject, verb, and object) flow together without punctuation separating them. When a verb takes a direct object - something that receives the action - no punctuation should come between them:
Pattern: Subject + Verb + Object (no punctuation between)
Examples:
- ✓ "The scientist discovered a new species"
- Verb: "discovered"
- Object: "a new species"
- No punctuation between them
- ✗ "The scientist discovered, a new species"
- The comma incorrectly separates the verb from what it discovered
- ✗ "The scientist discovered: a new species"
- The colon unnecessarily breaks the natural flow
In our question:
- Verb: "popularized"
- Object: "the use of Jamaican Creole in literature"
- These must connect directly: "popularized the use of Jamaican Creole"
Think of it this way: the verb asks a question ("popularized what?") and the object answers it immediately. No punctuation should interrupt that question-answer relationship.
popularized;
(popularized;):
✗ Incorrect
- A semicolon separates two complete thoughts that could stand as independent sentences
- "Her innovative poems popularized" is incomplete - it leaves us hanging (popularized what?)
- "the use of Jamaican Creole in literature" is just a noun phrase, not a complete sentence
- The semicolon incorrectly breaks the sentence structure
popularized,
(popularized,):
✗ Incorrect
- A comma between a verb and its direct object is grammatically incorrect
- It's like writing "She ate, an apple" - it interrupts the natural flow
- The verb and its object should connect directly without punctuation
popularized
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.
popularized:
(popularized:):
✗ Incorrect
- A colon introduces a list, explanation, or elaboration
- Here, "the use of Jamaican Creole" isn't being introduced as an elaboration - it's the direct object that completes the verb's meaning
- The colon creates an unnecessary and incorrect separation