Luci Tapahonso is the inaugural poet laureate of the Navajo Nation. Her book Sáanii Dahataal/The Women Are Singing-a combination of...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
Luci Tapahonso is the inaugural poet laureate of the Navajo Nation. Her book Sáanii Dahataal/The Women Are Singing-a combination of fiction and memoir, poetry and ______ serves as a testament to her versatility as a writer.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
prose;
prose
prose,
prose-
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- Luci Tapahonso is the inaugural poet laureate of the Navajo Nation.
- Her book Sáanii Dahataal/The Women Are Singing
- —a combination of fiction and memoir,
- poetry and prose [?]
- serves as a testament to her versatility as a writer.
Understanding the Meaning
The first sentence gives us background:
- Luci Tapahonso is the inaugural poet laureate of the Navajo Nation.
- This tells us who she is and her important position.
Now the second sentence talks about one of her books:
- 'Her book Sáanii Dahataal/The Women Are Singing'
- This is the subject - the book we're discussing.
Then we get additional description that starts with an em dash:
- '—a combination of fiction and memoir, poetry and prose [blank]'
- This describes what kinds of writing are in the book.
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- A. prose;
- B. prose (no punctuation)
- C. prose,
- D. prose—
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The sentence continues: 'serves as a testament to her versatility as a writer.'
Now let's understand what the complete structure is telling us:
- If we took out that descriptive phrase, the main sentence would be:
- 'Her book Sáanii Dahataal/The Women Are Singing serves as a testament to her versatility as a writer.'
- Subject: Her book
- Main verb: serves
- This is a complete thought on its own.
- The phrase 'a combination of fiction and memoir, poetry and prose' is INSERTED into the middle of that main sentence
- It gives us extra information about what the book contains
- It starts with an em dash: '—a combination...'
What do we notice about the structure here?
- When you insert extra information into the MIDDLE of a sentence using an em dash, you need TWO em dashes - they work as a matched pair
- One em dash opens the interruption
- Another em dash closes it before the main sentence continues
- They work like parentheses that come in pairs
- The pattern is:
- [Main sentence begins] —[interrupting information]— [main sentence continues]
- In our sentence:
- 'Her book' —[description of what's in it]— 'serves as a testament...'
So we need the closing em dash after 'prose' to complete the pair and properly close the interrupting description.
The correct answer is D: prose—
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Using Paired Em Dashes to Insert Information
When you want to insert additional information into the middle of a sentence using em dashes (called parenthetical dashes in grammar terms), they must come in pairs - one to open the interruption and one to close it:
Pattern:
- [Beginning of main sentence] —[interrupting additional information]— [continuation of main sentence]
Example 1:
- Main sentence: "The discovery changed our understanding of history."
- With interruption: "The discovery—made by accident in a forgotten archive—changed our understanding of history."
- Opening dash: after "discovery"
- Closing dash: after "archive"
- Main sentence continues: "changed our understanding..."
Example 2:
- Main sentence: "The movie received critical acclaim."
- With interruption: "The movie—a bold reimagining of a classic story—received critical acclaim."
- Opening dash: after "movie"
- Closing dash: after "story"
- Main sentence continues: "received critical acclaim"
In our question:
- Main sentence: "Her book Sáanii Dahataal/The Women Are Singing serves as a testament to her versatility as a writer."
- With interruption: "Her book Sáanii Dahataal/The Women Are Singing—a combination of fiction and memoir, poetry and prose—serves as a testament to her versatility as a writer."
- Opening dash: after the book title
- Closing dash: after "prose" (Choice D)
- Main sentence continues: "serves as a testament..."
The paired em dashes set off the interrupting description from the main flow of the sentence, and both dashes are essential to show where the interruption begins and ends.
prose;
✗ Incorrect
- A semicolon doesn't close an em dash interruption
- The opening em dash requires a closing em dash to complete the matched pair
- Using a semicolon would leave the em dash structure incomplete and create a punctuation mismatch
prose
✗ Incorrect
- No punctuation leaves the em dash interruption open and incomplete
- You can't open with an em dash and then fail to close it when the main sentence needs to continue
- This creates an incomplete structure
prose,
✗ Incorrect
- A comma cannot close an em dash interruption
- Once you open with an em dash, you must close with an em dash
- The punctuation marks must be parallel - you can't mix and match different types
prose-
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.