Many Samoans enjoy a sport called kilikiti. This bat-and-ball game was derived from ________ kilikiti differs from cricket in a...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
Many Samoans enjoy a sport called kilikiti. This bat-and-ball game was derived from ________ kilikiti differs from cricket in a few key ways.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
cricket but:
cricket but,
cricket, but
cricket, but,
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- Many Samoans enjoy a sport called kilikiti.
- This bat-and-ball game was derived from cricket but [?] kilikiti differs from cricket in a few key ways.
Understanding the Meaning
The first sentence tells us:
- Many Samoans enjoy a sport called kilikiti.
- Simple introduction to the topic.
Now the second sentence:
- 'This bat-and-ball game was derived from cricket'
- We learn that kilikiti came from cricket - it has cricket origins.
This is where we have the blank: 'cricket but [?] kilikiti differs...'
Let's look at the choices:
- A: cricket but:
- B: cricket but,
- C: cricket, but
- D: cricket, but,
So we're deciding where to put punctuation around "but."
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The sentence continues:
- 'kilikiti differs from cricket in a few key ways.'
- This tells us that despite coming from cricket, kilikiti is different.
- This creates a contrast with the previous part.
So the complete picture is:
- The sentence is saying: kilikiti came FROM cricket, BUT it's different from cricket.
- It's showing both connection and contrast.
What do we notice about the structure here?
- 'This bat-and-ball game was derived from cricket'
- This is a complete thought - it could stand alone as a sentence.
- It has a subject ("This bat-and-ball game") and tells us a complete idea.
- 'kilikiti differs from cricket in a few key ways'
- This is also a complete thought - it could stand alone too.
- It has a subject ("kilikiti") and tells us a complete idea.
- These two complete thoughts are being connected with 'but'
- "But" is a connecting word that shows contrast between ideas.
When we connect two complete thoughts with a connecting word like "but," we need a comma BEFORE the connecting word.
The correct answer is C: "cricket, but"
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Connecting Two Complete Thoughts with a Comma + Connecting Word
When you want to join two complete thoughts (called independent clauses in grammar terms) using a connecting word like "but," "and," "or," "so," "for," "nor," or "yet" (called coordinating conjunctions in grammar terms), you place a comma BEFORE the connecting word.
The pattern:
[Complete thought], [connecting word] [complete thought]
Examples:
Example 1:
- Complete thought #1: "The movie was three hours long"
- Complete thought #2: "it kept my attention the entire time"
- Connected correctly: "The movie was three hours long, but it kept my attention the entire time."
- Note: comma BEFORE "but"
Example 2:
- Complete thought #1: "She studied all weekend"
- Complete thought #2: "she felt confident about the exam"
- Connected correctly: "She studied all weekend, so she felt confident about the exam."
- Note: comma BEFORE "so"
In our question:
- Complete thought #1: "This bat-and-ball game was derived from cricket"
- Complete thought #2: "kilikiti differs from cricket in a few key ways"
- Connected correctly: "This bat-and-ball game was derived from cricket, but kilikiti differs from cricket in a few key ways."
- The comma comes BEFORE "but" to properly connect these two complete thoughts
Why it matters: The comma signals that while these ideas are related and connected, each one is a complete statement on its own. The connecting word tells us how the ideas relate to each other - in this case, "but" shows contrast.
cricket but:
(cricket but:)
✗ Incorrect
- Places a colon after "but"
- Colons are used to introduce lists, explanations, or elaborations - not after connecting words like "but"
- This creates an incorrect and awkward punctuation pattern
cricket but,
(cricket but,)
✗ Incorrect
- Places the comma AFTER "but" instead of before it
- When connecting two complete thoughts with a word like "but," the comma must come BEFORE the connecting word, not after
- This violates the standard punctuation rule and separates "but" from the thought it introduces
cricket, but
✓ Correct
- Correct as explained in the solution above.
cricket, but,
(cricket, but,)
✗ Incorrect
- Places commas both before AND after "but"
- While we do need a comma before "but," we don't need one after it
- The comma after "but" would incorrectly separate the connecting word from the complete thought that follows
- This creates unnecessary and incorrect punctuation