Marine biologist Dr. Sarah Chen has made significant contributions to our understanding of coral reef ecosystems. While researching the effects...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
Marine biologist Dr. Sarah Chen has made significant contributions to our understanding of coral reef ecosystems. While researching the effects of ocean acidification in the Great Barrier Reef _____ Chen developed a new method for measuring pH levels in real-time. This technique has since been adopted by research institutions worldwide.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
(2021), and
(2021) and
(2021)
(2021),
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- Marine biologist Dr. Sarah Chen
- has made significant contributions
- to our understanding
- of coral reef ecosystems.
- While researching the effects of ocean acidification
- in the Great Barrier Reef (2021) [?] Chen
- developed a new method
- for measuring pH levels in real-time.
- This technique
- has since been adopted
- by research institutions worldwide.
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start reading to understand what this is telling us.
The first sentence introduces our subject:
- Marine biologist Dr. Sarah Chen has made significant contributions to understanding coral reef ecosystems.
Now the second sentence gives us a specific example of her work:
- "While researching the effects of ocean acidification in the Great Barrier Reef (2021)..."
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at our choices:
- Choice A: (2021), and
- Choice B: (2021) and
- Choice C: (2021)
- Choice D: (2021),
So we're deciding what punctuation (if any) should come after "(2021)".
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The sentence continues: "Chen developed a new method for measuring pH levels in real-time."
Now let's really understand the structure here:
- "While researching the effects of ocean acidification in the Great Barrier Reef (2021)"
- This opening part is giving us context or background information
- It's setting up the circumstances under which something happened
- Notice it starts with "While" – this makes it depend on what comes next
- It can't stand alone as a complete thought
- "Chen developed a new method for measuring pH levels in real-time"
- This is the main statement
- It tells us what actually happened: Chen developed a new method
- This CAN stand alone as a complete thought
- Subject: Chen
- Action: developed a new method
What do we notice about this structure?
- We have an opening part that sets the scene (starting with "While")
- followed by the main statement of what happened
- This opening part is providing background for the main action
- When a sentence starts with this kind of background clause (beginning with words like "while," "although," "because," etc.),
- we need to separate it from the main statement with a comma
- We need JUST A COMMA – not "and"
- "And" would be used to connect two complete, equal statements
- But our opening part isn't a complete statement on its own
- It's dependent background information, not an equal partner
So we need just a comma after "(2021)" to separate the background information from the main statement.
The correct answer is D: (2021),
Grammar Concept Applied
Using Commas After Introductory Background Clauses
When a sentence begins with background information or context introduced by words like "while," "although," "because," "when," or "if" (called subordinating conjunctions in grammar terms), you need to place a comma after that opening part before moving to the main statement:
Pattern:
- [Background clause starting with while/although/because/etc.], [main statement].
Example 1:
- With comma (correct): While studying marine life in 2021, Chen made an important discovery.
- Background: "While studying marine life in 2021"
- Main statement: "Chen made an important discovery"
- The comma separates the two parts
Example 2:
- With comma (correct): Although the research was challenging, the team completed it successfully.
- Background: "Although the research was challenging"
- Main statement: "the team completed it successfully"
In our question:
- Background clause: "While researching the effects of ocean acidification in the Great Barrier Reef (2021)"
- Main statement: "Chen developed a new method for measuring pH levels in real-time"
- We need the comma after "(2021)" to properly separate these two parts
Important distinction: We use JUST a comma here, not ", and" because:
- "And" is used to connect two complete, independent statements that are equal partners
- But our opening part starting with "While" is dependent background information, not an independent statement
- It needs the main statement to complete its meaning
(2021), and
✗ Incorrect
- Adding "and" after the comma suggests we're connecting two equal, complete statements
- But "While researching the effects of ocean acidification in the Great Barrier Reef" is NOT a complete statement – it's dependent background information
- "And" is used to join equal elements, not to connect background information to a main statement
- This creates a structural error
(2021) and
✗ Incorrect
- The same fundamental problem as Choice A – "and" doesn't work here
- The opening "While..." part isn't a complete statement, so we can't use "and" to connect it to the main clause
- Additionally, even if "and" were appropriate, you'd typically need a comma before it when connecting lengthy clauses
- This creates incorrect structure
(2021)
✗ Incorrect
- Without any punctuation, the sentence runs together incorrectly
- When you start a sentence with background information like this (introduced by "while," "although," etc.), you need to mark where that background part ends and the main statement begins
- Without the comma, it reads awkwardly: "...Great Barrier Reef (2021) Chen developed..."
- This creates a run-on effect and violates the comma rule for introductory clauses
(2021),
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.