Marine biologists studying feeding behaviors have determined that the blue whale can consume approximately 4 tons of krill in a...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
Marine biologists studying feeding behaviors have determined that the blue whale can consume approximately 4 tons of krill in a single day during the Antarctic feeding ______ it the most efficient filter feeder among all marine mammals.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
season. Making
season, making
season making
season; making
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- Marine biologists
- studying feeding behaviors
- have determined
- that the blue whale can consume approximately 4 tons of krill
- in a single day
- during the Antarctic feeding season [?] making it the most
- efficient filter feeder among all marine mammals.
- that the blue whale can consume approximately 4 tons of krill
Understanding the Meaning
The sentence tells us about what marine biologists have learned:
- 'Marine biologists studying feeding behaviors have determined that...'
- Scientists who study how marine animals eat have figured something out.
What did they determine?
- 'the blue whale can consume approximately 4 tons of krill in a single day during the Antarctic feeding season'
- Blue whales can eat about 4 tons of krill daily when they're feeding in Antarctic waters.
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- A: season. Making (period separates into two sentences)
- B: season, making (comma connects)
- C: season making (no punctuation)
- D: season; making (semicolon connects)
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
- 'making it the most efficient filter feeder among all marine mammals'
- This is telling us the significance of that 4-ton consumption
- Eating this much krill is what makes the blue whale the best filter feeder of all marine mammals
What do we notice about the structure here?
- The first part is a complete statement:
- 'the blue whale can consume approximately 4 tons of krill in a single day during the Antarctic feeding season'
- This could stand on its own as a complete thought
- The second part - 'making it the most efficient filter feeder' - is NOT a complete sentence
- It's a descriptive phrase that explains the result or significance of what came before
- It can't stand alone - it depends on the first part to make sense
When we have a complete statement followed by a descriptive phrase beginning with an "-ing" verb that adds information about the result or consequence, we need a comma to separate them.
So we need: Choice B - "season, making"
The comma correctly connects the complete statement with the descriptive phrase that explains its significance.
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Using Commas with Result/Consequence Phrases (Participial Phrases)
When you have a complete statement followed by a descriptive phrase that begins with an "-ing" verb (called a participial phrase in grammar terms) and explains the result, consequence, or additional information, use a comma to separate them:
Pattern:
- Complete statement + , + -ing phrase describing result/consequence
Example 1:
- The experiment succeeded, proving the hypothesis correct.
- "The experiment succeeded" = complete statement
- "proving the hypothesis correct" = descriptive phrase showing the result
Example 2:
- The storm intensified overnight, causing widespread power outages.
- "The storm intensified overnight" = complete statement
- "causing widespread power outages" = descriptive phrase showing the consequence
In our question:
- The blue whale can consume 4 tons of krill in a single day during the Antarctic feeding season, making it the most efficient filter feeder.
- First part = complete statement about consumption
- "making it the most efficient filter feeder" = descriptive phrase showing what this consumption means/results in
- Comma properly connects them
Key principle: The "-ing" phrase cannot stand alone as a sentence, so it needs a comma (not a period or semicolon) to attach it to the complete statement it describes.
season. Making
✗ Incorrect
- A period creates two separate sentences
- But "Making it the most efficient filter feeder among all marine mammals" is not a complete sentence - it's a fragment
- It has no subject and cannot stand alone as an independent statement
- Periods must separate complete thoughts, not attach fragments
season, making
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.
season making
✗ Incorrect
- Without any punctuation, the sentence runs together without proper separation
- A comma is needed to signal that we're adding a descriptive phrase about the result
- This makes the sentence hard to read and violates standard punctuation conventions
season; making
✗ Incorrect
- Semicolons connect two complete thoughts that could each stand alone as full sentences
- "Making it the most efficient filter feeder" cannot stand alone - it's a descriptive phrase, not a complete thought
- This violates the fundamental rule for semicolon usage