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Marine biologists studying feeding behaviors have determined that the blue whale can consume approximately 4 tons of krill in a single day during the Antarctic feeding ______ it the most efficient filter feeder among all marine mammals.

Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?

A

season. Making

B

season, making

C

season making

D

season; making

Solution

Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!

Sentence Structure

  • Marine biologists
    • studying feeding behaviors
  • have determined
    • that the blue whale can consume approximately 4 tons of krill
      • in a single day
      • during the Antarctic feeding season [?] making it the most
        • efficient filter feeder among all marine mammals.

Understanding the Meaning

The sentence tells us about what marine biologists have learned:

  • 'Marine biologists studying feeding behaviors have determined that...'
    • Scientists who study how marine animals eat have figured something out.

What did they determine?

  • 'the blue whale can consume approximately 4 tons of krill in a single day during the Antarctic feeding season'
    • Blue whales can eat about 4 tons of krill daily when they're feeding in Antarctic waters.

This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:

  • A: season. Making (period separates into two sentences)
  • B: season, making (comma connects)
  • C: season making (no punctuation)
  • D: season; making (semicolon connects)

To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!

  • 'making it the most efficient filter feeder among all marine mammals'
    • This is telling us the significance of that 4-ton consumption
    • Eating this much krill is what makes the blue whale the best filter feeder of all marine mammals

What do we notice about the structure here?

  • The first part is a complete statement:
    • 'the blue whale can consume approximately 4 tons of krill in a single day during the Antarctic feeding season'
    • This could stand on its own as a complete thought
  • The second part - 'making it the most efficient filter feeder' - is NOT a complete sentence
    • It's a descriptive phrase that explains the result or significance of what came before
    • It can't stand alone - it depends on the first part to make sense

When we have a complete statement followed by a descriptive phrase beginning with an "-ing" verb that adds information about the result or consequence, we need a comma to separate them.

So we need: Choice B - "season, making"

The comma correctly connects the complete statement with the descriptive phrase that explains its significance.


GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED

Using Commas with Result/Consequence Phrases (Participial Phrases)

When you have a complete statement followed by a descriptive phrase that begins with an "-ing" verb (called a participial phrase in grammar terms) and explains the result, consequence, or additional information, use a comma to separate them:

Pattern:

  • Complete statement + , + -ing phrase describing result/consequence

Example 1:

  • The experiment succeeded, proving the hypothesis correct.
  • "The experiment succeeded" = complete statement
  • "proving the hypothesis correct" = descriptive phrase showing the result

Example 2:

  • The storm intensified overnight, causing widespread power outages.
  • "The storm intensified overnight" = complete statement
  • "causing widespread power outages" = descriptive phrase showing the consequence

In our question:

  • The blue whale can consume 4 tons of krill in a single day during the Antarctic feeding season, making it the most efficient filter feeder.
  • First part = complete statement about consumption
  • "making it the most efficient filter feeder" = descriptive phrase showing what this consumption means/results in
  • Comma properly connects them

Key principle: The "-ing" phrase cannot stand alone as a sentence, so it needs a comma (not a period or semicolon) to attach it to the complete statement it describes.

Answer Choices Explained
A

season. Making

✗ Incorrect

  • A period creates two separate sentences
  • But "Making it the most efficient filter feeder among all marine mammals" is not a complete sentence - it's a fragment
  • It has no subject and cannot stand alone as an independent statement
  • Periods must separate complete thoughts, not attach fragments
B

season, making

✓ Correct

Correct as explained in the solution above.

C

season making

✗ Incorrect

  • Without any punctuation, the sentence runs together without proper separation
  • A comma is needed to signal that we're adding a descriptive phrase about the result
  • This makes the sentence hard to read and violates standard punctuation conventions
D

season; making

✗ Incorrect

  • Semicolons connect two complete thoughts that could each stand alone as full sentences
  • "Making it the most efficient filter feeder" cannot stand alone - it's a descriptive phrase, not a complete thought
  • This violates the fundamental rule for semicolon usage
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