Materials scientist Marie-Agathe Charpagne and her colleagues believed they could improve on the multicomponent alloy NiCoCr, an equal-proportions mix...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
Materials scientist Marie-Agathe Charpagne and her colleagues believed they could improve on the multicomponent alloy NiCoCr, an equal-proportions mixture of nickel (Ni), cobalt (Co), and chromium (Cr), by replacing chromium with ruthenium ________ the alloy that resulted, NiCoRu, turned out to be an unsuitable replacement for NiCoCr.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
(Ru)
(Ru) but
(Ru),
(Ru), but
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- Materials scientist Marie-Agathe Charpagne and her colleagues
- believed
- they could improve on the multicomponent alloy NiCoCr,
- an equal-proportions mixture of nickel (Ni),
- cobalt (Co),
- and chromium (Cr),
- an equal-proportions mixture of nickel (Ni),
- by replacing chromium with ruthenium (Ru)[?]
- they could improve on the multicomponent alloy NiCoCr,
- the alloy that resulted,
- NiCoRu,
- turned out to be an unsuitable replacement for NiCoCr.
- Where [?] = nothing / "but" / "," / ", but"
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start reading from the beginning:
Materials scientist Marie-Agathe Charpagne and her colleagues believed something –
- they believed 'they could improve on the multicomponent alloy NiCoCr'
The sentence gives us more detail about what NiCoCr is:
- 'an equal-proportions mixture of nickel (Ni), cobalt (Co), and chromium (Cr)'
- So it's an alloy made of three metals in equal amounts
How did they plan to improve it?
- 'by replacing chromium with ruthenium (Ru)'
- They wanted to swap out the chromium and put in ruthenium instead
This is where we have the blank – right after (Ru).
Let's look at the choices:
- We need to decide whether to use nothing, "but", a comma, or both
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The sentence continues: 'the alloy that resulted, NiCoRu, turned out to be an unsuitable replacement for NiCoCr.'
Now let's understand what this is telling us:
- 'the alloy that resulted'
- means the new alloy they created (NiCoRu – nickel, cobalt, ruthenium)
- 'turned out to be an unsuitable replacement'
- means it didn't actually work as an improvement
- it was NOT suitable to replace the original NiCoCr
So the complete picture is:
- They believed they could improve the alloy by swapping ruthenium for chromium,
- BUT the resulting alloy turned out to be unsuitable
What do we notice about the structure here?
First part: 'Materials scientist Marie-Agathe Charpagne and her colleagues believed they could improve on the multicomponent alloy NiCoCr... by replacing chromium with ruthenium (Ru)'
- This is a complete thought that could stand alone as a sentence
- It has a subject (colleagues) and verb (believed) with a complete idea
Second part: 'the alloy that resulted, NiCoRu, turned out to be an unsuitable replacement for NiCoCr'
- This is also a complete thought that could stand alone
- It has a subject (alloy) and verb (turned out) with a complete idea
These two complete thoughts express contrasting ideas:
- First thought: positive expectation (they believed it would improve things)
- Second thought: negative result (it turned out to be unsuitable)
When we join two complete thoughts that contrast with each other, we need:
- A comma before the connecting word
- The word "but" to show the contrast
So we need: (Ru), but
The correct answer is Choice D.
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Joining Two Complete Thoughts with Contrasting Ideas
When you have two complete thoughts (each with its own subject and verb, each able to stand alone as a sentence) and you want to join them to show contrast, you need a comma followed by a coordinating conjunction:
The Pattern:
[Complete thought], but [complete thought]
Why both elements are needed:
- The comma signals that a major break is coming - one complete thought is ending
- The "but" shows the relationship between the thoughts (in this case, contrast or unexpected result)
Example 1:
- First thought: "The team practiced for months"
- Second thought: "they lost in the first round"
- Combined: "The team practiced for months, but they lost in the first round."
Example 2:
- First thought: "I studied the manual carefully"
- Second thought: "I still couldn't figure out how to program it"
- Combined: "I studied the manual carefully, but I still couldn't figure out how to program it."
In this question:
- First thought: "Materials scientist Marie-Agathe Charpagne and her colleagues believed they could improve on the multicomponent alloy NiCoCr... by replacing chromium with ruthenium (Ru)"
- Second thought: "the alloy that resulted, NiCoRu, turned out to be an unsuitable replacement for NiCoCr"
- These express contrasting ideas (positive expectation vs. negative result)
- So we need: comma + "but" to join them properly
Note: In grammar terms, these complete thoughts are called "independent clauses," and words like "but" are called "coordinating conjunctions." When a coordinating conjunction joins two independent clauses, a comma must come before it.
(Ru)
✗ Incorrect
- This creates a run-on sentence
- Two complete thoughts are joined with no punctuation or connecting word
- "by replacing chromium with ruthenium (Ru) the alloy that resulted..." runs together incorrectly
- Standard English requires a comma + conjunction (or semicolon, or period) to join complete thoughts
(Ru) but
✗ Incorrect
- This correctly uses "but" to show the contrast
- However, it's missing the required comma before "but"
- When a coordinating conjunction like "but" joins two complete thoughts, Standard English requires a comma before it
- Without the comma, this violates the punctuation rule for joining independent clauses
(Ru),
✗ Incorrect
- This creates a comma splice
- A comma alone cannot join two complete thoughts - you need a conjunction too
- Using only a comma to connect "by replacing chromium with ruthenium (Ru)," and "the alloy that resulted..." is grammatically incorrect
- You need both the comma AND a conjunction like "but"
(Ru), but
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.