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Maya Angelou wrote her acclaimed autobiography I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings in ______ drawing from her experiences growing up in the segregated South and her journey toward finding her voice as a writer.

Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?

A

1969 and

B

1969, and

C

1969,

D

1969

Solution

Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!

Sentence Structure

  • Maya Angelou wrote her acclaimed autobiography I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings
    • in 1969[?]
      • drawing from her experiences growing up in the segregated South
        • and
      • her journey toward finding her voice as a writer.

Understanding the Meaning

The sentence starts by telling us about a specific accomplishment:

  • Maya Angelou wrote her acclaimed autobiography I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings
    • This happened in 1969

This is where we have the blank - right after "1969."

Let's look at the choices:

  • Choice A: 1969 and
  • Choice B: 1969, and
  • Choice C: 1969,
  • Choice D: 1969

To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!

The sentence continues: "drawing from her experiences growing up in the segregated South and her journey toward finding her voice as a writer."

Now let's understand what this part is telling us:

  • "Drawing from her experiences..."
    • This isn't a new complete statement
    • It's giving us extra information about HOW she wrote the book
    • It's describing what she pulled from when writing - her experiences growing up and her journey
  • The phrase starting with "drawing" is adding descriptive detail
    • It's connected to the main statement (Maya Angelou wrote...)
    • But it's not a separate complete thought

What do we notice about the structure here?

  • We have a complete main statement: "Maya Angelou wrote her acclaimed autobiography in 1969"
    • This could stand alone as a sentence
  • Followed by extra descriptive information: "drawing from her experiences..."
    • This gives us additional context
    • It tells us what informed her writing
    • It can't stand alone - it needs the main statement
  • When you have a complete statement followed by a descriptive phrase that adds extra information, you need a comma to set off that extra information

Do we need "and"?

  • No - "and" connects two equal elements (like two complete thoughts)
  • Here we have a main statement plus descriptive detail, not two equal clauses
  • The "drawing" phrase is supplementary, not a second main action

So we need Choice C: just a comma to set off the descriptive phrase.

Grammar Concept Applied

Using Commas with Descriptive Phrases that Add Extra Information

When a descriptive phrase (called a participial phrase in grammar terms - one that starts with an -ing verb form) follows a complete main statement and adds extra information about it, you need to set it off with a comma:

Pattern:

  • Complete main statement, descriptive phrase adding extra information.

Examples:

  • Complete statement: The scientist published her findings in 2020
  • With descriptive phrase: The scientist published her findings in 2020, drawing on fifteen years of research.
  • "drawing on fifteen years of research" = descriptive phrase telling us MORE about how she did this
  • The comma sets off this extra information
  • Complete statement: The team celebrated their victory
  • With descriptive phrase: The team celebrated their victory, gathering at the stadium to thank their fans.
  • "gathering at the stadium..." = descriptive phrase adding detail about the celebration
  • Not a separate complete thought - it's extra information

In our question:

  • Main statement: "Maya Angelou wrote her acclaimed autobiography in 1969"
  • Descriptive phrase: "drawing from her experiences growing up in the segregated South and her journey toward finding her voice as a writer"
  • The comma after "1969" properly sets off this descriptive information

Important note: Don't use "and" in this structure. "And" connects equal elements (two complete thoughts, two items in a list), but here you have a main statement plus supplementary description, not two equal clauses.

Answer Choices Explained
A

1969 and

✗ Incorrect

  • Creates confusion about the sentence structure
  • "And" suggests we're connecting two equal elements, like two complete thoughts
  • But "drawing from her experiences" is not a complete thought - it's a descriptive phrase that depends on the main statement
  • This makes the sentence feel awkward and grammatically unclear
B

1969, and

✗ Incorrect

  • The comma is right for setting off the descriptive phrase
  • But "and" is incorrect for the same reason as Choice A
  • We're not connecting two equal clauses, so "and" doesn't belong here
  • This creates unnecessary and incorrect coordination
C

1969,

✓ Correct

Correct as explained in the solution above.

D

1969

✗ Incorrect

  • Missing the necessary comma
  • Without a comma, the descriptive phrase runs directly into the main clause without proper separation
  • The comma is needed to signal that what follows is extra descriptive information, not part of the core statement
  • This creates a run-on feel and makes the sentence harder to parse
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