Maya Angelou wrote her acclaimed autobiography I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings in ______ drawing from her experiences growing...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
Maya Angelou wrote her acclaimed autobiography I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings in ______ drawing from her experiences growing up in the segregated South and her journey toward finding her voice as a writer.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
1969 and
1969, and
1969,
1969
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- Maya Angelou wrote her acclaimed autobiography I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings
- in 1969[?]
- drawing from her experiences growing up in the segregated South
- and
- her journey toward finding her voice as a writer.
- drawing from her experiences growing up in the segregated South
- in 1969[?]
Understanding the Meaning
The sentence starts by telling us about a specific accomplishment:
- Maya Angelou wrote her acclaimed autobiography I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings
- This happened in 1969
This is where we have the blank - right after "1969."
Let's look at the choices:
- Choice A: 1969 and
- Choice B: 1969, and
- Choice C: 1969,
- Choice D: 1969
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The sentence continues: "drawing from her experiences growing up in the segregated South and her journey toward finding her voice as a writer."
Now let's understand what this part is telling us:
- "Drawing from her experiences..."
- This isn't a new complete statement
- It's giving us extra information about HOW she wrote the book
- It's describing what she pulled from when writing - her experiences growing up and her journey
- The phrase starting with "drawing" is adding descriptive detail
- It's connected to the main statement (Maya Angelou wrote...)
- But it's not a separate complete thought
What do we notice about the structure here?
- We have a complete main statement: "Maya Angelou wrote her acclaimed autobiography in 1969"
- This could stand alone as a sentence
- Followed by extra descriptive information: "drawing from her experiences..."
- This gives us additional context
- It tells us what informed her writing
- It can't stand alone - it needs the main statement
- When you have a complete statement followed by a descriptive phrase that adds extra information, you need a comma to set off that extra information
Do we need "and"?
- No - "and" connects two equal elements (like two complete thoughts)
- Here we have a main statement plus descriptive detail, not two equal clauses
- The "drawing" phrase is supplementary, not a second main action
So we need Choice C: just a comma to set off the descriptive phrase.
Grammar Concept Applied
Using Commas with Descriptive Phrases that Add Extra Information
When a descriptive phrase (called a participial phrase in grammar terms - one that starts with an -ing verb form) follows a complete main statement and adds extra information about it, you need to set it off with a comma:
Pattern:
- Complete main statement, descriptive phrase adding extra information.
Examples:
- Complete statement: The scientist published her findings in 2020
- With descriptive phrase: The scientist published her findings in 2020, drawing on fifteen years of research.
- "drawing on fifteen years of research" = descriptive phrase telling us MORE about how she did this
- The comma sets off this extra information
- Complete statement: The team celebrated their victory
- With descriptive phrase: The team celebrated their victory, gathering at the stadium to thank their fans.
- "gathering at the stadium..." = descriptive phrase adding detail about the celebration
- Not a separate complete thought - it's extra information
In our question:
- Main statement: "Maya Angelou wrote her acclaimed autobiography in 1969"
- Descriptive phrase: "drawing from her experiences growing up in the segregated South and her journey toward finding her voice as a writer"
- The comma after "1969" properly sets off this descriptive information
Important note: Don't use "and" in this structure. "And" connects equal elements (two complete thoughts, two items in a list), but here you have a main statement plus supplementary description, not two equal clauses.
1969 and
✗ Incorrect
- Creates confusion about the sentence structure
- "And" suggests we're connecting two equal elements, like two complete thoughts
- But "drawing from her experiences" is not a complete thought - it's a descriptive phrase that depends on the main statement
- This makes the sentence feel awkward and grammatically unclear
1969, and
✗ Incorrect
- The comma is right for setting off the descriptive phrase
- But "and" is incorrect for the same reason as Choice A
- We're not connecting two equal clauses, so "and" doesn't belong here
- This creates unnecessary and incorrect coordination
1969,
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.
1969
✗ Incorrect
- Missing the necessary comma
- Without a comma, the descriptive phrase runs directly into the main clause without proper separation
- The comma is needed to signal that what follows is extra descriptive information, not part of the core statement
- This creates a run-on feel and makes the sentence harder to parse