Michelangelo spent four years painting the Sistine Chapel's _____ between 1508 and 1512, his masterwork depicting over 300 biblical figures...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
Michelangelo spent four years painting the Sistine Chapel's _____ between 1508 and 1512, his masterwork depicting over 300 biblical figures across the vaulted surface.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
ceiling. Completed
ceiling and completed
ceiling, completed
ceiling completed
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
Michelangelo spent four years painting the Sistine Chapel's ceiling [?] between 1508 and 1512,
- his masterwork depicting over 300 biblical figures
- across the vaulted surface.
Where [?] = what varies in the choices:
- A: . Completed
- B: and completed
- C: , completed
- D: completed (no punctuation)
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start reading from the beginning:
"Michelangelo spent four years painting the Sistine Chapel's ceiling"
- This is telling us about Michelangelo's work
- He spent four years painting the famous ceiling
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- They're asking us what punctuation (if any) goes after "ceiling" and before the word "completed"
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The sentence continues: "between 1508 and 1512, his masterwork depicting over 300 biblical figures across the vaulted surface."
Now let's understand what this complete sentence is telling us:
- The main action is:
- Michelangelo spent four years painting the Sistine Chapel's ceiling
- Then "completed between 1508 and 1512"
- This is giving us additional information about the ceiling
- It's telling us when the ceiling (the painting project) was finished
- Notice we already have our main verb "spent" - so "completed" isn't acting as another main verb here
- Then "his masterwork depicting over 300 biblical figures across the vaulted surface"
- This gives even more description
- It's telling us about the scope and content of what he painted
What do we notice about the structure here?
- "completed between 1508 and 1512" is a descriptive phrase
- It's providing extra information about "the ceiling"
- It's the pattern: noun + descriptive modifier
- When you have a noun followed by a descriptive phrase that adds additional information:
- You need a comma to separate them
- The comma creates a natural pause point
- It signals "here's some extra descriptive information about what I just mentioned"
So we need: ceiling, completed - Choice C.
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Using Commas with Descriptive Modifying Phrases
When you want to add extra descriptive information about a noun you just mentioned, you can use a comma followed by a modifying phrase (this type is called a participial phrase in grammar terms):
Pattern: Noun, descriptive modifier providing additional information
Example 1:
- Without modifier: "The scientist published her findings"
- With modifier: "The scientist published her findings, completed after ten years of research"
- "findings" = noun
- "completed after ten years of research" = modifier telling us when the findings were completed
Example 2:
- Without modifier: "We visited the ancient temple"
- With modifier: "We visited the ancient temple, built in the 3rd century"
- "temple" = noun
- "built in the 3rd century" = modifier telling us when the temple was built
In our question:
- "the Sistine Chapel's ceiling" = noun
- "completed between 1508 and 1512" = modifier telling us when the ceiling was completed
- The comma signals: "here's additional descriptive information about what I just mentioned"
The comma creates the necessary pause point and clearly separates the noun from its descriptive modifier.
ceiling. Completed
✗ Incorrect
- This creates two separate sentences
- But "Completed between 1508 and 1512, his masterwork depicting over 300 biblical figures across the vaulted surface" is not a complete sentence
- It's a fragment with no main subject and verb performing a complete action
- It's just descriptive phrases that need to attach to the main sentence about Michelangelo
ceiling and completed
✗ Incorrect
- The word "and" connects parallel elements - like two things in a list or two similar actions
- But "completed between 1508 and 1512" isn't parallel to "ceiling"
- "Completed" is describing the ceiling, not serving as a second object he painted
- This creates an illogical and awkward structure that doesn't match the intended meaning
ceiling, completed
✓ Correct
- Correct as explained in the solution above.
ceiling completed
✗ Incorrect
- Without any punctuation, the words run together awkwardly
- There's no pause point to signal that "completed between 1508 and 1512" is additional descriptive information
- This makes the sentence harder to read and understand
- The lack of comma creates ambiguity about where the noun ends and the modifier begins