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Midway through her 1968 jazz album A Monastic Trio, Alice Coltrane switches instruments, swapping the piano for the harp. With the same fluid style that Coltrane was famous for on piano, she ________ her fingers across the harp strings and creates a radiant sound.

Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?

A

sweep

B

are sweeping

C

were sweeping

D

sweeps

Solution

Let's begin by understanding the meaning of these sentences. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentences as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!

Sentence Structure

Sentence 1:

  • Midway through her 1968 jazz album A Monastic Trio,
  • Alice Coltrane switches instruments, swapping the piano for the harp.

Sentence 2:

  • With the same fluid style that Coltrane was famous for on piano,
  • she [?] her fingers across the harp strings
  • and creates a radiant sound.

Understanding the Meaning

The first sentence sets the scene:

  • We're talking about Alice Coltrane's 1968 jazz album
  • Midway through the album, she switches from piano to harp

Now the second sentence tells us about how she plays the harp:

  • 'With the same fluid style that Coltrane was famous for on piano'
    • She brings that same flowing, graceful style she had on piano

This is where we have the blank:

  • 'she ______ her fingers across the harp strings'

Let's look at the choices:

  • A. sweep (base form)
  • B. are sweeping (plural, present progressive)
  • C. were sweeping (plural, past progressive)
  • D. sweeps (singular, present)

To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence:

  • 'and creates a radiant sound'

What do we notice about the structure here?

  • The subject is 'she' (referring to Alice Coltrane)
    • 'She' is singular, so we need a singular verb form
  • We have two actions connected by 'and':
    • First action: she ______ her fingers across the strings
    • Second action: she creates a radiant sound
  • These two verbs describe parallel actions happening together
    • Notice 'creates' is present tense and singular
    • The blank verb needs to match this form

So we need sweeps - it's singular (matching 'she') and present tense (matching 'creates').


GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED

Matching Verbs to Their Subject in Number

When you have a singular subject (like "she," "he," or "it"), the verb must take its singular form. In present tense, this usually means adding an "s" or "es":

  • Singular: She sweeps, he creates, it flows
  • Plural: They sweep, we create, you flow

Adding the Parallel Structure Layer:

When two verbs describe actions by the same subject and are connected with "and," they should match in tense:

  • Present tense parallel: She sweeps her fingers across the strings and creates a radiant sound
  • Both "sweeps" and "creates" are singular present tense

In this question:

  • Subject: "she" (Alice Coltrane) = singular
  • Blank verb: must be singular → "sweeps"
  • Parallel verb: "creates" (present tense)
  • Blank verb: must also be present tense → "sweeps"

The answer is D: sweeps

Answer Choices Explained
A

sweep

✗ Incorrect

  • This is the base/plural form of the verb
  • With the singular subject "she," we need "sweeps," not "sweep"
  • We say "she sweeps," not "she sweep"
B

are sweeping

✗ Incorrect

  • "Are" is the plural form - it goes with subjects like "they" or "we"
  • Our subject "she" is singular, so this doesn't agree
  • Also doesn't match the parallel verb "creates" in form
C

were sweeping

✗ Incorrect

  • This creates two problems: (1) "were" is plural, not matching the singular "she," and (2) it's past tense, which doesn't match the present tense "creates" that follows
  • The parallel structure breaks down
D

sweeps

✓ Correct

Correct as explained in the solution above.

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