Nine months before Rosa Parks made history by refusing to comply with the segregated seating policy on a Montgomery, Alabama,...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
Nine months before Rosa Parks made history by refusing to comply with the segregated seating policy on a Montgomery, Alabama, bus, a fifteen-year-old Montgomery girl named Claudette Colvin was arrested for the same ______ to some historians, Colvin's arrest led to Parks's action and eventually to the desegregation of Montgomery's bus system.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
offense. According
offense, according
offense according
offense and according
Sentence Structure
- Nine months before Rosa Parks made history
- by refusing to comply with the segregated seating policy
- on a Montgomery, Alabama, bus,
- by refusing to comply with the segregated seating policy
- a fifteen-year-old Montgomery girl
- named Claudette Colvin
- was arrested
- for the same offense [?]
- according to some historians,
- Colvin's arrest
- led
- to Parks's action
- and eventually to the desegregation of Montgomery's bus system.
- led
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start reading from the beginning:
The passage opens with:
- 'Nine months before Rosa Parks made history by refusing to comply with the segregated seating policy on a Montgomery, Alabama, bus'
- This sets up the timeline - we're talking about something that happened nine months BEFORE Rosa Parks's famous act
- It reminds us what Rosa Parks did - she refused to follow the segregated seating rules on a bus
Then we learn:
- 'a fifteen-year-old Montgomery girl named Claudette Colvin was arrested for the same offense'
- So before Rosa Parks, there was this teenage girl who did the same thing
- She was arrested for it
This is a complete thought - it tells us Colvin was arrested for the same offense. The sentence has:
- Subject: 'a fifteen-year-old Montgomery girl named Claudette Colvin'
- Verb: 'was arrested'
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- A gives us: period + capital 'According'
- B gives us: comma + lowercase 'according'
- C gives us: no punctuation + lowercase 'according'
- D gives us: 'and' + lowercase 'according'
To see what works here, let's read the rest and understand what it's saying!
The text continues:
- 'according to some historians, Colvin's arrest led to Parks's action and eventually to the desegregation of Montgomery's bus system.'
What does this tell us?
- It's giving us historical perspective - according to some historians
- It's saying that Colvin's arrest actually LED TO Parks's action
- And ultimately led to desegregation of the bus system
Let me check if this is also a complete sentence:
- Subject: 'Colvin's arrest'
- Verb: 'led'
- Complete thought: Yes - it tells us her arrest led to something
What do we notice about the structure here?
We have TWO COMPLETE SENTENCES:
- First sentence: 'Nine months before Rosa Parks made history... Claudette Colvin was arrested for the same offense.'
- This is a complete thought that could stand on its own
- Second sentence: 'According to some historians, Colvin's arrest led to Parks's action and eventually to the desegregation of Montgomery's bus system.'
- This is also a complete thought that could stand on its own
When you have two complete sentences - each with its own subject and verb, each expressing a complete thought - you need to separate them properly. You cannot:
- Just use a comma (that's called a comma splice)
- Use no punctuation (that's a run-on sentence)
- Use 'and according' (that's not grammatically correct)
So we need: A PERIOD after 'offense' to end the first sentence, and a CAPITAL LETTER 'A' to start the new sentence.
The correct answer is A.
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Separating Complete Sentences (Independent Clauses)
When you have two complete sentences - each with its own subject and verb, and each expressing a complete thought that could stand alone - you must separate them properly. These are called independent clauses in grammar terms.
Here are the correct ways to handle two independent clauses:
Option 1: Make them two separate sentences
- First sentence: Claudette Colvin was arrested for the same offense.
- Second sentence: According to some historians, Colvin's arrest led to Parks's action.
- How to do it: Period after the first sentence + capital letter to start the second
Option 2: Use a semicolon
- Claudette Colvin was arrested for the same offense; according to some historians, her arrest led to Parks's action.
- When to use it: When the two sentences are closely related
Option 3: Use a comma + coordinating conjunction
- Claudette Colvin was arrested, and according to some historians, her arrest led to change.
- The coordinating conjunctions: FANBOYS (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so)
What you CANNOT do:
- Use just a comma (comma splice): "...arrested for the same offense, according to historians..."
- Use no punctuation (run-on): "...arrested for the same offense according to historians..."
In this question: Since the second sentence begins with "According to some historians" (providing attribution and context), it works best as a new sentence with a period and capital letter.
offense. According
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.
offense, according
✗ Incorrect
- This creates a comma splice - trying to join two complete sentences with only a comma
- Both parts can stand alone as complete sentences, so a comma by itself is not strong enough punctuation
- You need either a period to separate them into two sentences, or you'd need a semicolon, or a comma with a coordinating conjunction (like FANBOYS: for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so)
offense according
✗ Incorrect
- This creates a run-on sentence by smashing two complete sentences together with no punctuation at all
- Without any punctuation between them, readers can't tell where one sentence ends and the next begins
- This violates basic sentence boundary rules
offense and according
✗ Incorrect
- The phrase "and according to some historians" is grammatically incorrect
- "And" is a coordinating conjunction that connects parallel elements, but it doesn't work with the structure "according to some historians"
- This creates an awkward, non-standard construction