On sunny days, dark rooftops absorb solar energy and convert it to unwanted heat, raising the surrounding air ________ a...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
On sunny days, dark rooftops absorb solar energy and convert it to unwanted heat, raising the surrounding air ________ a light-colored covering to an existing dark roof, either by attaching prefabricated reflective sheets or spraying on a paint-like coating, helps combat this effect.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
temperature; by adding
temperature, adding
temperature. Adding
temperature by adding
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- On sunny days,
- dark rooftops
- absorb solar energy
- and convert it to unwanted heat,
- raising the surrounding air temperature (?)
- a light-colored covering
- to an existing dark roof,
- either by attaching prefabricated reflective sheets
- or spraying on a paint-like coating,
- to an existing dark roof,
- helps combat this effect.
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start reading from the beginning:
- 'On sunny days, dark rooftops absorb solar energy and convert it to unwanted heat'
- This explains the problem: dark roofs soak up the sun's energy and turn it into heat we don't want
- 'raising the surrounding air temperature'
- This heat makes the air around the building hotter
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- Some have "by adding" and some have just "adding"
- The punctuation varies: semicolon, comma, period, or nothing
To see what works here, let's read the rest and understand what it's saying!
The passage continues: 'a light-colored covering to an existing dark roof, either by attaching prefabricated reflective sheets or spraying on a paint-like coating, helps combat this effect.'
Let me break this down:
- 'a light-colored covering to an existing dark roof'
- This is talking about putting a light-colored material on top of a dark roof
- 'either by attaching prefabricated reflective sheets or spraying on a paint-like coating'
- These are the two methods: you can attach sheets or spray on a coating
- This part just gives us more details about HOW to add the covering
- 'helps combat this effect'
- The light covering helps fight against that heat problem mentioned earlier
Now, what do we notice about the structure here?
First, let's look at what we need before "a light-colored covering":
- If we use "by adding a light-colored covering...helps combat this effect"
- "By adding" is a prepositional phrase - it can't be the subject of a sentence
- We'd have "helps" as a verb with no subject - that doesn't work!
- If we use "Adding a light-colored covering...helps combat this effect"
- "Adding a light-colored covering" acts as the subject (it's the thing doing the helping)
- "helps" is the verb
- This creates a complete sentence ✓
So we need just "adding" (not "by adding"). This eliminates choices A and D.
Now let's think about the punctuation:
- The first part: "On sunny days, dark rooftops absorb solar energy and convert it to unwanted heat, raising the surrounding air temperature"
- This is a complete sentence - it has a subject (dark rooftops) and verbs (absorb and convert)
- The second part: "Adding a light-colored covering to an existing dark roof...helps combat this effect"
- This is also a complete sentence - it has a subject (Adding a light-colored covering) and a verb (helps)
We have TWO complete sentences here. They each express a complete thought and could stand alone.
When we have two complete sentences, we need proper separation between them:
- Choice B uses just a comma
- A comma alone can't join two complete sentences - that's called a comma splice
- This doesn't follow the rules of Standard English
- Choice C uses a period
- A period properly separates two complete sentences ✓
- This is exactly what we need here
The correct answer is C: "temperature. Adding"
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Separating Complete Sentences
When you have two complete sentences (each with its own subject and verb, expressing a complete thought), they must be properly separated. You cannot just use a comma or run them together:
Two complete sentences that need separation:
- "Dark rooftops raise air temperature"
- "Adding light-colored covering helps combat this effect"
WRONG ways to connect them:
- With comma only: "Dark rooftops raise air temperature, adding light-colored covering helps" ✗ (comma splice)
- With no punctuation: "Dark rooftops raise air temperature adding light-colored covering helps" ✗ (run-on)
CORRECT ways to connect them:
- With period: "Dark rooftops raise air temperature. Adding light-colored covering helps" ✓
- With semicolon (if closely related): "Dark rooftops raise air temperature; adding light-colored covering helps combat this" ✓
- With comma + coordinating conjunction: "Dark rooftops raise air temperature, but adding light-colored covering helps combat this" ✓
In this specific question:
- The first sentence describes the problem (dark roofs create heat)
- The second sentence describes the solution (light-colored covering helps)
- These are two distinct complete thoughts that need proper separation
- A period provides that clear, proper separation
Additional note: The word "Adding" functions as a gerund (called this in grammar terms) - it's a verb form ending in "-ing" that acts as a noun and can serve as the subject of a sentence. In contrast, "by adding" is a prepositional phrase and cannot be a subject.
temperature; by adding
(temperature; by adding):
✗ Incorrect
- Using "by adding" means the second part has no subject for the verb "helps"
- "By adding a light-colored covering" is a prepositional phrase, not a subject
- This creates a sentence fragment that cannot stand alone
- While a semicolon could work to connect two complete sentences, this choice doesn't create a complete second sentence
temperature, adding
(temperature, adding):
✗ Incorrect
- While "adding" correctly serves as the subject, using only a comma to connect two complete sentences creates a comma splice
- Two complete sentences cannot be joined with just a comma in Standard English
- This is a fundamental punctuation error
temperature. Adding
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.
temperature by adding
(temperature by adding):
✗ Incorrect
- Has no punctuation between two complete sentences, creating a run-on
- Also has the "by adding" problem - no subject for "helps"
- Violates both punctuation rules and sentence structure requirements