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On sunny days, dark rooftops absorb solar energy and convert it to unwanted heat, raising the surrounding air ________ a light-colored covering to an existing dark roof, either by attaching prefabricated reflective sheets or spraying on a paint-like coating, helps combat this effect.

Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?

A

temperature; by adding

B

temperature, adding

C

temperature. Adding

D

temperature by adding

Solution

Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!

Sentence Structure

  • On sunny days,
  • dark rooftops
    • absorb solar energy
    • and convert it to unwanted heat,
      • raising the surrounding air temperature (?)
  • a light-colored covering
    • to an existing dark roof,
      • either by attaching prefabricated reflective sheets
      • or spraying on a paint-like coating,
  • helps combat this effect.

Understanding the Meaning

Let's start reading from the beginning:

  • 'On sunny days, dark rooftops absorb solar energy and convert it to unwanted heat'
    • This explains the problem: dark roofs soak up the sun's energy and turn it into heat we don't want
  • 'raising the surrounding air temperature'
    • This heat makes the air around the building hotter

This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:

  • Some have "by adding" and some have just "adding"
  • The punctuation varies: semicolon, comma, period, or nothing

To see what works here, let's read the rest and understand what it's saying!

The passage continues: 'a light-colored covering to an existing dark roof, either by attaching prefabricated reflective sheets or spraying on a paint-like coating, helps combat this effect.'

Let me break this down:

  • 'a light-colored covering to an existing dark roof'
    • This is talking about putting a light-colored material on top of a dark roof
  • 'either by attaching prefabricated reflective sheets or spraying on a paint-like coating'
    • These are the two methods: you can attach sheets or spray on a coating
    • This part just gives us more details about HOW to add the covering
  • 'helps combat this effect'
    • The light covering helps fight against that heat problem mentioned earlier

Now, what do we notice about the structure here?

First, let's look at what we need before "a light-colored covering":

  • If we use "by adding a light-colored covering...helps combat this effect"
    • "By adding" is a prepositional phrase - it can't be the subject of a sentence
    • We'd have "helps" as a verb with no subject - that doesn't work!
  • If we use "Adding a light-colored covering...helps combat this effect"
    • "Adding a light-colored covering" acts as the subject (it's the thing doing the helping)
    • "helps" is the verb
    • This creates a complete sentence ✓

So we need just "adding" (not "by adding"). This eliminates choices A and D.

Now let's think about the punctuation:

  • The first part: "On sunny days, dark rooftops absorb solar energy and convert it to unwanted heat, raising the surrounding air temperature"
    • This is a complete sentence - it has a subject (dark rooftops) and verbs (absorb and convert)
  • The second part: "Adding a light-colored covering to an existing dark roof...helps combat this effect"
    • This is also a complete sentence - it has a subject (Adding a light-colored covering) and a verb (helps)

We have TWO complete sentences here. They each express a complete thought and could stand alone.

When we have two complete sentences, we need proper separation between them:

  • Choice B uses just a comma
    • A comma alone can't join two complete sentences - that's called a comma splice
    • This doesn't follow the rules of Standard English
  • Choice C uses a period
    • A period properly separates two complete sentences ✓
    • This is exactly what we need here

The correct answer is C: "temperature. Adding"




GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED

Separating Complete Sentences

When you have two complete sentences (each with its own subject and verb, expressing a complete thought), they must be properly separated. You cannot just use a comma or run them together:

Two complete sentences that need separation:

  1. "Dark rooftops raise air temperature"
  2. "Adding light-colored covering helps combat this effect"

WRONG ways to connect them:

  • With comma only: "Dark rooftops raise air temperature, adding light-colored covering helps" ✗ (comma splice)
  • With no punctuation: "Dark rooftops raise air temperature adding light-colored covering helps" ✗ (run-on)

CORRECT ways to connect them:

  • With period: "Dark rooftops raise air temperature. Adding light-colored covering helps" ✓
  • With semicolon (if closely related): "Dark rooftops raise air temperature; adding light-colored covering helps combat this" ✓
  • With comma + coordinating conjunction: "Dark rooftops raise air temperature, but adding light-colored covering helps combat this" ✓

In this specific question:

  • The first sentence describes the problem (dark roofs create heat)
  • The second sentence describes the solution (light-colored covering helps)
  • These are two distinct complete thoughts that need proper separation
  • A period provides that clear, proper separation

Additional note: The word "Adding" functions as a gerund (called this in grammar terms) - it's a verb form ending in "-ing" that acts as a noun and can serve as the subject of a sentence. In contrast, "by adding" is a prepositional phrase and cannot be a subject.

Answer Choices Explained
A

temperature; by adding

(temperature; by adding):
✗ Incorrect

  • Using "by adding" means the second part has no subject for the verb "helps"
  • "By adding a light-colored covering" is a prepositional phrase, not a subject
  • This creates a sentence fragment that cannot stand alone
  • While a semicolon could work to connect two complete sentences, this choice doesn't create a complete second sentence
B

temperature, adding

(temperature, adding):
✗ Incorrect

  • While "adding" correctly serves as the subject, using only a comma to connect two complete sentences creates a comma splice
  • Two complete sentences cannot be joined with just a comma in Standard English
  • This is a fundamental punctuation error
C

temperature. Adding

✓ Correct

Correct as explained in the solution above.

D

temperature by adding

(temperature by adding):
✗ Incorrect

  • Has no punctuation between two complete sentences, creating a run-on
  • Also has the "by adding" problem - no subject for "helps"
  • Violates both punctuation rules and sentence structure requirements
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