One of the few African American global explorers during the turn of the 20th century, ______
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
One of the few African American global explorers during the turn of the 20th century, ______
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
Matthew Henson made several treks across Greenland between 1891 and 1909.
1891 and 1909 were the years between which Matthew Henson made several treks across Greenland.
Greenland was where Matthew Henson made several treks between 1891 and 1909.
several treks across Greenland were made by Matthew Henson between 1891 and 1909.
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- One of the few African American global explorers
- during the turn of the 20th century,
- (?) [completion needed]
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start reading from the beginning:
'One of the few African American global explorers during the turn of the 20th century,'
This opening phrase is describing someone –
- it's painting a picture of a person who was one of the few African American explorers traveling the world around 1900.
Now here's where we need to fill in the blank –
- right after this descriptive phrase and the comma.
Let's look at our choices to see what varies:
- Choice A puts "Matthew Henson" (a person) right after the comma
- Choice B puts "1891 and 1909" (years) right after the comma
- Choice C puts "Greenland" (a place) right after the comma
- Choice D puts "several treks" (journeys) right after the comma
What do we notice about the structure here?
- The opening phrase describes a PERSON –
- specifically, an African American explorer
- When you start a sentence with a descriptive phrase like this (followed by a comma), the very next word after that comma must be the thing being described
- Since the phrase describes a person (an explorer), a person's name must come right after the comma
- If we put anything else there – years, places, or treks –
- we'd be saying that those things are the "African American global explorer," which makes no sense!
So we need Choice A: "Matthew Henson" must come immediately after the comma because he's the person being described by the opening phrase.
The complete sentence tells us:
- Matthew Henson was one of the few African American global explorers during the turn of the 20th century
- He made several treks across Greenland between 1891 and 1909
Grammar Concept Applied
Placing Descriptive Phrases: What Comes After the Comma Matters
When you begin a sentence with a descriptive phrase followed by a comma, the word or phrase that comes immediately after that comma MUST be what you're describing. If it's not, the description gets attached to the wrong thing (called a misplaced modifier in grammar terms), creating confusion or even absurdity.
The Pattern:
- [Descriptive phrase], [thing being described] + rest of sentence
Examples:
- Correct: "A talented musician, Sarah performs at concerts worldwide."
- "A talented musician" describes Sarah (a person)
- Sarah comes right after the comma
- Incorrect: "A talented musician, concerts worldwide feature Sarah's performances."
- "A talented musician" describes Sarah, not concerts
- But "concerts" comes right after the comma
- This incorrectly suggests concerts are the talented musician
In our question:
- The phrase "One of the few African American global explorers during the turn of the 20th century" describes a person
- Therefore, the person's name (Matthew Henson) must come immediately after the comma
- Choices B, C, and D all put something else (years, place, or treks) in that position, creating misplaced modifiers
Matthew Henson made several treks across Greenland between 1891 and 1909.
1891 and 1909 were the years between which Matthew Henson made several treks across Greenland.
"1891 and 1909 were the years between which Matthew Henson made several treks across Greenland."
✗ Incorrect
- This puts "1891 and 1909" (years) immediately after the descriptive phrase
- This creates a mismatch: the opening phrase describes an explorer, but now it's accidentally describing years
- The sentence would be saying that the years themselves were "one of the few African American global explorers," which is illogical
Greenland was where Matthew Henson made several treks between 1891 and 1909.
"Greenland was where Matthew Henson made several treks between 1891 and 1909."
✗ Incorrect
- This puts "Greenland" (a location) immediately after the descriptive phrase
- This creates the same mismatch problem: the phrase about explorers now incorrectly describes Greenland
- The sentence would be saying that Greenland was "one of the few African American global explorers," which makes no sense
several treks across Greenland were made by Matthew Henson between 1891 and 1909.
"several treks across Greenland were made by Matthew Henson between 1891 and 1909."
✗ Incorrect
- This puts "several treks" (journeys) immediately after the descriptive phrase
- This again creates a mismatch: the phrase about an explorer now incorrectly describes the treks
- The sentence would be saying that the treks themselves were "one of the few African American global explorers," which is illogical