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Quantum particles of light—photons—provide an unhackable means of transmitting encryption keys over networks, as attempts to observe particles in quantum states will invariably alter the particles _______ dismantle any information they transmit.

Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?

A
and in the process,
B
and, in the process,
C
and in the process—
D
and, in the process
Solution

Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!

Sentence Structure

  • Quantum particles of light—photons—
  • provide an unhackable means of transmitting encryption keys over networks,
    • as attempts to observe particles in quantum states
      • will invariably alter the particles
        • and [?] in the process [?] dismantle any information they transmit.

Understanding the Meaning

Let's start reading from the beginning:

The sentence starts with:

  • 'Quantum particles of light—photons—'
    • This identifies what we're talking about: photons are the quantum particles of light
  • 'provide an unhackable means of transmitting encryption keys over networks'
    • This tells us what makes photons special - they offer a secure way to send encryption keys

Now we get the explanation of WHY this is unhackable:

  • 'as attempts to observe particles in quantum states will invariably alter the particles'
    • If someone tries to observe/spy on these quantum particles, the act of observing will change them

This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:

  • They all have "and in the process"
  • What varies is the comma placement: before "in the process," after it, both, or a dash

To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!

The sentence continues:

  • 'dismantle any information they transmit'

So the complete action is:

  • Attempting to observe these particles will:
    • alter the particles AND
    • dismantle any information they transmit

The phrase "in the process" is being inserted to clarify the relationship - the dismantling happens as part of/during the altering.

What do we notice about the structure here?

  • "In the process" is an extra phrase that's interrupting the flow between "and" and "dismantle"
    • If we remove it, the sentence still works: "alter the particles and dismantle any information"
    • It's adding commentary about HOW these two actions relate, but it's not essential to the basic structure
  • When you insert a phrase that interrupts the sentence flow like this, you need to mark BOTH where the interruption begins AND where it ends
    • Think of it like opening and closing a parenthetical comment
    • Since "in the process" comes after "and," we need punctuation before it and after it

So we need: and, in the process, dismantle

The correct answer is Choice B - it properly sets off the interruptive phrase "in the process" with commas on both sides.


GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED

Setting Off Interruptive Phrases with Paired Commas

When you insert a phrase into a sentence that adds extra information but interrupts the main flow, you need to set it off with matching punctuation on both sides (called a parenthetical element in grammar terms). The most common way to do this is with commas.

The Pattern:

  • Main sentence flow: The company grew rapidly and expanded into new markets
  • With interruptive phrase added: The company grew rapidly and, in just five years, expanded into new markets
  • "in just five years" interrupts between "and" and "expanded"
  • Comma before the phrase: and,
  • Comma after the phrase: years,
  • The phrase is now properly enclosed

Another Example:

  • Main flow: She studied hard and passed the exam
  • With interruption: She studied hard and, despite her initial doubts, passed the exam
  • The phrase "despite her initial doubts" is set off with commas on both sides

In our question:

  • Main flow: alter the particles and dismantle any information
  • With interruption: alter the particles and, in the process, dismantle any information
  • "in the process" needs commas on both sides to mark it as an interruptive comment

Key principle: Think of interruptive phrases like a parenthetical aside - you need to mark both where you're stepping aside from the main flow AND where you're returning to it.

Answer Choices Explained
A
and in the process,
✗ Incorrect
  • This only puts a comma AFTER "in the process" but not before it
  • The interruptive phrase needs to be bracketed on both sides - you can't just mark the end without marking the beginning
  • This leaves the interruption improperly punctuated
B
and, in the process,
✓ Correct
  • Correct as explained in the solution above.
C
and in the process—
✗ Incorrect
  • This uses a dash after "in the process" but has no punctuation before it
  • You can't use punctuation on only one side of an interruptive phrase
  • If you were using dashes, you'd need them on both sides (and, in the process—), but mixing no punctuation with a dash is inconsistent and incorrect
D
and, in the process
✗ Incorrect
  • This only puts a comma BEFORE "in the process" but not after it
  • This makes "in the process dismantle" run together incorrectly
  • The phrase needs to be closed off with punctuation after it to show where the interruption ends and the main sentence flow resumes
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