The short story 'Rogue Enchantments' by Isabel Ibañez appears in Reclaim the _____ anthology of fantasy and science fiction written...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
The short story 'Rogue Enchantments' by Isabel Ibañez appears in Reclaim the _____ anthology of fantasy and science fiction written by authors of Latin American descent.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
Stars. An
Stars, while an
Stars an
Stars, an
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- The short story 'Rogue Enchantments'
- by Isabel Ibañez
- appears in Reclaim the Stars [?] an anthology
- of fantasy and science fiction
- written by authors
- of Latin American descent.
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start reading from the beginning:
The short story 'Rogue Enchantments' by Isabel Ibañez appears in Reclaim the Stars...
So we're learning about where a particular short story appears - it's in something called "Reclaim the Stars."
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at the choices:
- A: Stars. An (period, starting new sentence)
- B: Stars, while an (comma plus "while")
- C: Stars an (no punctuation)
- D: Stars, an (comma only)
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The sentence continues: "an anthology of fantasy and science fiction written by authors of Latin American descent."
Now let's understand what this is telling us:
- "An anthology of fantasy and science fiction..."
- is telling us WHAT "Reclaim the Stars" is
- it's describing or identifying the title we just read about
- So we have:
- First mention: "Reclaim the Stars" (the title)
- Second mention: "an anthology..." (telling us what that title is)
- These refer to the same thing - just described differently
What do we notice about the structure here?
- "Reclaim the Stars" = a noun (the title)
- "an anthology of fantasy and science fiction..." = another noun phrase
- The second phrase is describing/renaming the first one
- They're talking about the same publication
- The anthology phrase gives us additional information about what "Reclaim the Stars" is
- Can "an anthology of fantasy and science fiction written by authors of Latin American descent" stand alone as its own sentence?
- No - it's just a noun phrase
- It doesn't have a main verb performing an action
- It's descriptive information that needs to attach to the main sentence
When we have a noun followed by another noun phrase that describes or renames it, we need a comma to connect them.
So the correct answer is D: Stars, an
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Using Commas with Descriptive Noun Phrases
When you want to add descriptive information about something you just mentioned, you can use a noun followed by another noun phrase (called an appositive in grammar terms) set off by a comma. The descriptive phrase renames or provides additional identifying information about the first noun.
The Pattern:
- Noun + , + descriptive noun phrase
Examples:
Example 1:
- My sister lives in Portland, a city in Oregon.
- "Portland" = noun (city name)
- "a city in Oregon" = descriptive noun phrase telling us what Portland is
- The comma connects them
Example 2:
- The scientist discovered a new species, a type of beetle found only in rainforests.
- "A new species" = noun
- "A type of beetle found only in rainforests" = descriptive noun phrase giving more detail
- The comma signals the additional information
In this question:
- Reclaim the Stars, an anthology of fantasy and science fiction...
- "Reclaim the Stars" = noun (title)
- "an anthology of fantasy and science fiction..." = descriptive noun phrase telling us what this title is
- The comma properly introduces the descriptive information
Stars. An
✗ Incorrect
- Creates a sentence fragment after the period
- "An anthology of fantasy and science fiction written by authors of Latin American descent" cannot stand alone as a complete sentence because it has no main verb performing an action
- A period signals a complete stop between two independent sentences, but the second part here is not independent
Stars, while an
✗ Incorrect
- The word "while" signals a contrast or describes things happening at the same time
- There's no contrast here - we're simply describing what "Reclaim the Stars" IS, not comparing it to something else or showing opposing information
- "While" doesn't fit the logical relationship between these parts
Stars an
✗ Incorrect
- Without any punctuation, this incorrectly runs the two noun phrases together
- Standard English requires a comma before a descriptive noun phrase that renames another noun
- The lack of punctuation creates confusion about where one element ends and the descriptive phrase begins
Stars, an
✓ Correct
- Correct as explained in the solution above.