Sculptor Louise Bourgeois's monumental _____ celebrated internationally for their psychological intensity and innovative use of materials and attracte...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
Sculptor Louise Bourgeois's monumental _____ celebrated internationally for their psychological intensity and innovative use of materials and attracted record-breaking audiences to major museums throughout her six-decade career.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
installations
installations,
installations, were
installations were
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- Sculptor Louise Bourgeois's monumental installations [?]
- celebrated internationally
- for their psychological intensity and innovative use of materials
- and
- attracted record-breaking audiences
- to major museums
- throughout her six-decade career.
- celebrated internationally
Understanding the Meaning
The sentence starts by introducing the subject:
- 'Sculptor Louise Bourgeois's monumental installations'
- We're talking about the large-scale artworks created by sculptor Louise Bourgeois.
This is where we have the blank.
Let's look at the choices:
- Some options just have "installations"
- Some add a comma
- Some include the word "were"
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The sentence continues with two things these installations did:
- 'celebrated internationally for their psychological intensity and innovative use of materials'
- 'and attracted record-breaking audiences to major museums throughout her six-decade career'
Now let's understand what this is telling us:
- 'Celebrated internationally for their psychological intensity and innovative use of materials'
- This means the installations received international acclaim - people around the world praised them for how psychologically powerful they were and how innovatively they used materials.
- 'Attracted record-breaking audiences to major museums throughout her six-decade career'
- This means the installations drew huge numbers of visitors to major museums during Bourgeois's 60-year career.
What do we notice about the structure here?
We have two actions connected by "and":
- 'celebrated' and 'attracted'
But here's the key question: can these verb forms work on their own as the main actions of the sentence?
- 'installations celebrated internationally' - this doesn't quite work
- 'Celebrated' here is a past participle that needs a helping verb
- The installations didn't celebrate themselves - they WERE celebrated by others
- So we need: 'installations WERE celebrated'
- 'installations attracted audiences' - this works fine
- 'Attracted' can function as a complete verb on its own
- The installations did this action themselves
So we have two parallel actions:
- WERE celebrated (passive - others celebrated them)
- attracted (active - they did this themselves)
The sentence needs "were" to complete the first verb, and we shouldn't put a comma between the subject and its verb.
The correct answer is Choice D: installations were
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Forming Complete Verbs: When Past Participles Need Helping Verbs
Some verb forms cannot stand alone as the main verb in a sentence - they need helping verbs to be complete. This is especially true in passive voice constructions (when something is being done TO the subject rather than BY the subject).
Pattern to recognize:
When something "is/was/were [past participle]" you need both parts:
- Incomplete: The books celebrated worldwide (missing helping verb)
- Complete: The books were celebrated worldwide (helping verb + past participle)
Why "were" is needed in passive constructions:
- Active voice: The critics celebrated the books (critics do the action)
- Passive voice: The books were celebrated by critics (books receive the action)
In our sentence:
- "Installations were celebrated" (passive - others celebrated them)
- "Installations attracted audiences" (active - they did this themselves)
Important punctuation rule:
- Never separate a subject from its verb with a comma
- Incorrect: The installations, were celebrated
- Correct: The installations were celebrated
installations
✗ Incorrect
- This leaves "installations celebrated internationally," which is incomplete
- "Celebrated" is a past participle that needs the helping verb "were" to form a complete verb phrase
- Without "were," we don't have a properly formed main verb for the sentence
installations,
✗ Incorrect
- This still doesn't provide the necessary helping verb "were"
- The comma incorrectly separates the subject from its verb, which violates standard punctuation conventions
- You should never put a comma between a subject and its verb
installations, were
✗ Incorrect
- While this includes the necessary verb "were," it incorrectly places a comma between the subject and the verb
- This comma creates an improper separation that disrupts the basic sentence structure
- The subject and verb should connect directly without punctuation between them
installations were
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.