Since the 1970s, urban planners have advocated for one design philosophy above all _____ strategy encourages integrating homes, businesses, and...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
Since the 1970s, urban planners have advocated for one design philosophy above all _____ strategy encourages integrating homes, businesses, and public spaces to create walkable neighborhoods.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
others: mixed-use development. This
others, mixed-use development, a
others. Mixed-use development, a
others; mixed-use development, a
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- Since the 1970s,
- urban planners
- have advocated
- for one design philosophy
- above all (?)
- mixed-use development
- (?)
- strategy encourages integrating homes, businesses, and public spaces
- to create walkable neighborhoods
- mixed-use development
- above all (?)
- for one design philosophy
- have advocated
Understanding the Meaning
Let's start reading from the beginning:
- "Since the 1970s, urban planners have advocated for one design philosophy above all others"
- Urban planners have favored ONE particular design philosophy
- They like this one more than all the other approaches
This is where we have the blank - we need to connect to what comes next.
Let's look at the choices:
- Choice A: "others: mixed-use development. This"
- Choice B: "others, mixed-use development, a"
- Choice C: "others. Mixed-use development, a"
- Choice D: "others; mixed-use development, a"
The choices are giving us different punctuation options and different ways to structure what follows.
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The sentence continues with:
- "mixed-use development"
- This is the NAME of that one philosophy they've advocated for
- "strategy encourages integrating homes, businesses, and public spaces to create walkable neighborhoods"
- This describes what the strategy does - it encourages mixing different types of spaces together
So the complete picture is:
- Urban planners have favored one philosophy above others
- That philosophy is called "mixed-use development"
- This strategy encourages integrating homes, businesses, and public spaces
What do we notice about the structure here?
The phrase "mixed-use development" is identifying what the philosophy is - it's naming the thing we just mentioned. This is information that should flow smoothly as part of the same sentence.
When you mention something and then immediately name or identify it, you set off that identifying phrase with commas to keep the sentence flowing naturally.
So we need: "...one design philosophy above all others, mixed-use development, a strategy..."
This creates one smooth sentence where:
- We mention the philosophy
- We name it (set off by commas)
- We continue describing what it does
- All connected as one flowing thought
The correct answer is Choice B - it uses commas to properly integrate all these connected ideas into one coherent sentence.
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Using Commas to Set Off Identifying/Naming Phrases
When you mention something and then immediately name or identify it, you use commas to set off that identifying information (called an appositive in grammar terms). This keeps all the related ideas flowing smoothly in one sentence:
Pattern:
- Main statement + comma + identifying phrase + comma + continuation
Example 1:
- "The company announced a new initiative, Project Green, a plan that would reduce emissions."
- Main idea: the company announced an initiative
- Identifying phrase: "Project Green" (names what the initiative is)
- Continuation: "a plan that would reduce emissions" (describes it further)
- Commas keep it all flowing together
Example 2:
- "She adopted a new approach, collaborative learning, a method that improved student engagement."
- Main idea: she adopted an approach
- Identifying phrase: "collaborative learning" (names it)
- Continuation: "a method that..." (describes what it does)
In our question:
- "...advocated for one design philosophy above all others, mixed-use development, a strategy..."
- Main idea: advocated for one philosophy
- Identifying phrase: "mixed-use development" (names what it is)
- Continuation: "a strategy encourages..." (describes what it does)
- Commas properly integrate all these connected ideas into one flowing sentence
others: mixed-use development. This
✗ Incorrect
- Creates a fragment: "mixed-use development" stands alone as just two words after the colon and before the period
- The period breaks up information that should flow together
- Results in choppy, disconnected structure rather than smooth integration
- A colon followed by such a brief statement and then a period is awkward and incorrect
others, mixed-use development, a
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.
others. Mixed-use development, a
✗ Incorrect
- The period after "others" ends the sentence too early
- This separates "mixed-use development" from "one design philosophy" - but they need to be connected because one identifies the other
- Creates two sentences where the ideas are so closely related they should be one flowing thought
- Unnecessarily choppy structure
others; mixed-use development, a
✗ Incorrect
- A semicolon is used to connect two independent clauses (two complete thoughts that could each stand alone as sentences)
- But "mixed-use development, a strategy encourages..." is NOT a complete thought that could stand alone
- This misuses the semicolon by trying to connect unequal grammatical structures
- The semicolon creates an incorrect separation