Technology companies have revolutionized how people communicate in the digital age. The company's breakthrough achievement in 2020 was developing secu...
GMAT Standard English Conventions : (Grammar) Questions
Technology companies have revolutionized how people communicate in the digital age. The company's breakthrough achievement in 2020 was developing secure messaging software, while its latest innovation, QuantumLink _____ promises to transform data encryption entirely.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
QuantumLink—
QuantumLink
QuantumLink:
QuantumLink,
Let's begin by understanding the meaning of this sentence. We'll use our understanding of pause points and segment the sentence as shown - understanding and assimilating the meaning of each segment bit by bit!
Sentence Structure
- Technology companies
- have revolutionized how people communicate in the digital age.
- The company's breakthrough achievement in 2020
- was developing secure messaging software,
- while its latest innovation,
- QuantumLink (?),
- promises to transform data encryption entirely.
Understanding the Meaning
First sentence gives us context:
- Technology companies have revolutionized digital communication.
Now the second sentence:
- "The company's breakthrough achievement in 2020 was developing secure messaging software,"
- So in 2020, the company's big accomplishment was creating secure messaging software.
The sentence continues:
- "while its latest innovation, QuantumLink..."
- "while" signals a contrast or additional information
- "its latest innovation" = the company's newest creation
- "QuantumLink" = the specific name of this innovation
This is where we have the blank. Let's look at our choices - they're asking us what punctuation (if any) should come after "QuantumLink."
To see what works here, let's read the rest of the sentence and understand what it's saying!
The sentence finishes:
- "promises to transform data encryption entirely"
- This tells us what the innovation will do
Now let's understand the complete structure:
- "its latest innovation, QuantumLink (?), promises to transform data encryption entirely"
- What's happening here?
- "its latest innovation" is the subject
- "QuantumLink" is giving us the specific NAME of that innovation
- "promises" is the verb - telling us what the innovation does
- So "QuantumLink" is inserted in the middle to identify which innovation we're talking about
- It's like saying: "My friend, Sarah, is coming over"
- You're naming WHO the friend is
What do we notice about the structure here?
- When you insert identifying information in the middle of a sentence, you need matching punctuation on BOTH sides:
- The passage already has a comma BEFORE "QuantumLink"
- So we need a comma AFTER "QuantumLink" too
- This creates: "innovation, QuantumLink, promises..."
The correct answer is Choice D (QuantumLink,) - we need a comma to complete the pair of commas surrounding the inserted name.
GRAMMAR CONCEPT APPLIED
Using Commas with Inserted Identifiers
When you insert a word or phrase that names or identifies something you just mentioned, you need to set it off with matching punctuation on BOTH sides (this is called an appositive in grammar terms). If you use commas, you need comma-comma; if you use dashes, you need dash-dash:
Pattern 1: Comma-Comma
- The scientist's discovery, the Higgs boson, changed physics forever.
- "the discovery" = general noun
- "the Higgs boson" = specific name/identifier
- Commas on both sides
Pattern 2: Dash-Dash
- The scientist's discovery—the Higgs boson—changed physics forever.
- Same structure, but using dashes for emphasis
- Dashes on both sides
In this question:
- "its latest innovation, QuantumLink, promises to transform..."
- "its latest innovation" = general noun
- "QuantumLink" = specific name
- Since there's already a comma before "QuantumLink," we need a comma after it to complete the pair
The key principle: Match your punctuation marks when setting off inserted identifiers. Don't mix comma with dash or colon.
QuantumLink—
✗ Incorrect
- An em dash creates a punctuation mismatch. When you start with a comma before "QuantumLink," you must end with a comma after it.
- You can't mix and match punctuation marks (comma-dash) when setting off inserted information. If you wanted dashes, you'd need them on BOTH sides.
QuantumLink
✗ Incorrect
- Without any punctuation after "QuantumLink," the sentence structure becomes unclear. It makes "QuantumLink promises" run together, suggesting that QuantumLink itself is the subject of "promises."
- But grammatically, "innovation" needs to remain the subject. The missing comma fails to signal that we've finished the inserted identifier and are returning to the main sentence structure.
QuantumLink:
✗ Incorrect
- A colon is used to introduce what follows - like a list or explanation. But here, "promises to transform data encryption entirely" isn't being introduced by QuantumLink; rather, it's continuing the main sentence about what the innovation does.
- Additionally, you can't pair a comma with a colon (comma-colon) when setting off an identifier - you need matching punctuation marks.
QuantumLink,
✓ Correct
Correct as explained in the solution above.